After Transmigrating into a Book, I Turned a Torturous Romance into a Blast

The writing is very good, the plot design is also very rigorous, and the structure is compact. It is a book worth savoring. It is worth mentioning that there is a certain gap in the details of the previous and later chapters (especially the early period in Kyoto and the later period in Jiangnan). Next time, you can try to be more detailed as you go to the end, so as to reach a climax of the whole book, so as not to have the illusion of a rushed ending (the following is just a simple opinion, don't take it to heart) Finally, believing means being reasonable and being reasonable means existing. May the people in the so-called book be safe and happy in that world, and may everything be successful.

The first book with about 200,000 words, I didn't expect it to be completed so quickly (⊙o⊙)! There are few emotional lines, there is no specific main line in the plot, and the logic is a bit confusing... But the author is working hard. Suitable for making daily cookies [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Not bad, not bad, really good

It's pretty good. I'd give it a higher score than it does now, but it won't be a perfect score. First, there are too many typos. I started commenting when I saw it, but then I was too lazy to type. Second, I really liked the story and it was heartwarming. Looking at this setting, I feel that the only prince in the country has married a male wife, and it is always mentioned at the beginning that the male protagonist is from the Liu family, and the villain is also mentioned. If the other female protagonists are all members of their own family, it is not mentioned in this film. Although it does not cause any trouble, is the setting just to start with the prince not trusting the male protagonist? It is unlikely that strangers will be appointed immediately. . . Third, it ended too quickly, and there was no extra chapter or anything.

The love and career of two people supporting each other is very good, but it's a bit lacking. I want to watch the Nine Emperors Uncle episode.

La la la ~ It's really good. I hope the author will work hard. The only bad thing is that there is no extra story [crying] [crying]

Nice! They dote on each other, Shou's character is particularly cute, and the time travel does not feel like a drama in an ancient setting. The author's narrative is great! In fact, there are many places in the middle and second half where the plot could be detailed, but so far it's pretty good. The low rating may be because Wen Taileng gave too few ratings (I guess

I should be writing a little bit.

Mi It's really good [crying] My treasure novel [crying] [crying] I'm going to help promote it a lot [crying]

Why doesn't anyone watch it? It's very good-looking. Both the attacker and the sufferer are very affectionate. It's very sweet. It's not sad at all. It's good-looking. It's good-looking.