Steampunk: I Have an Armored City

Yes, the plot is smooth and orderly, making people feel good while watching it. Come on, please read more soon. Don't stop, keep writing. If you write well, more and more people will like this book. Don't give up.

It's not easy to write a book, so it's a five-star review. The demining is completed. It is a very interesting book with a grand world view and good details including settings. Overall, I can't find any major faults, but the rhythm control is not very good, and there is too much foreshadowing in the early stage, which makes it difficult to retain people. (The little Madonna with pig's feet, her character is not very lovable, I don't know if it will change in the future) This type of book is generally more exciting the further it goes, if you have the patience you can give it a try, and if you like it, you might as well support the new book and give it a thumbs up. Let me add that this book should be entered with caution. According to what book friends added, it has collapsed. If the expired writing method from ten years ago is used now and is used by others, will it not cause diarrhea? (Proving once again that all slow-moving people are just doing business)

It looks good, but I hope it has more combat and development, and less commercial things. The neighbor collects grain and I collect guns, and the neighbor just plays the role of granary.

The world view and various settings are quite interesting, but you can take a look at the other ones if you have nothing to do. There's nothing wrong with the protagonist's character overall, but it's a bit toxic in certain plots. Overall it's watchable, but it's mid-level and the world view is pretty interesting. Alas, the 200 pictures in this book have always been in the early stage of novices and are still adapting to the world. They have only been in a town for more than 200 pictures. In the future, one picture will completely change the concept of the protagonist. Before that, he has been subconsciously using the rules of the peaceful world in his previous life until someone woke him up. This is not a big problem. The concept he has accepted since childhood is not that you can overthrow the other party if you want to. This varies from person to person.

An old bookworm who has been pursuing this book for so long certainly has something unique about it! The male protagonist, from zero to something, to gradually becoming stronger! The process is wonderful and the plot is compact, worth collecting! The follow-up content may be even more exciting!

This is a very interesting book, with a tight pace and every step of the story paving the way for subsequent growth. The progress of the protagonist is well-founded, but I don't know why it suddenly stopped writing.

The writing is quite good, the plot is interesting, the subject matter is good, and the imagination is great. There are some problems with the character setting, and some plots are indeed a bit poisonous. But I am also a book writer myself, so I am not as good as you. Come on!

The content is quite good. It's a good article about food and grass. It's a pity that the end has been cut off.

The content and depth exceed 95% of the Tomato novels I have seen. In particular, the content is rich and there is no boring and monotonous fighting and killing. The whole book gives people the feeling that it really depicts a different world with flesh and blood. Five points of praise! Super exciting!

There is nothing wrong with the details. Everyone has their own opinions on the character of the protagonist. The work is relatively realistic, not a brainless novel type. If you have the patience, you can read it. There are no surprises. The plot is smooth and the author has good skills. Most of the negative reviews are complaining about the character. It depends on your personal opinion. You can try it.

It's good, the subject matter is novel and unique, which really appeals to my appetite. But the author really doesn't need to see a beautiful woman to just take her into the harem. On the other hand, there are too few fighting scenes, which can basically be said to be skipped. In this world, the Iron Armored City is powerful, but people also have various skills and so on. I hope the author can write more fighting scenes.

This is a rare book that is not afraid of being broken. At first glance, I thought it was an armored castle that pinched him, but when I looked closer, it was an armored castle, but this steam giant is quite different. I wonder if it will be upgraded to an armored city the size of the mobile city in Ark in the future. It also reminded me of the land ship settings in Mobile Sentai. Thinking about it carefully, it's really exciting to have these things in the future [Adoration]

This book definitely deserves five stars. There may be some shortcomings in individual aspects, but overall the level is relatively high, and it can be said to be one of a million. There aren't many good books on Tomato, so don't give it a low score if you're a novice who hasn't read enough interesting articles.

A unique journey to another world, but this idea is not yours. I remember there was a movie called I forgot the name, but it was about an iron-clad city, where the big eats the small, the strong eats the weak. But that is a post-apocalyptic style, not as good as your cyberpunk alternate world. I personally like steampunk-style movies, such as Iron Fist, Battle Angel Atari, etc., All of which are available here. It satisfies my imagination, a kind of hard science fiction different world style. I like the author and hope to have more works.

2023.8.12 It looks good, but I haven't finished it yet.

Very good, a rare kind of book, very wonderfully written

The author's writing style in this book is very delicate, especially focusing on the changes in the protagonist's mentality and goals. The paragraphs are also relatively novel. The only pity is that the docking is a bit uncomfortable.

Very good, the logic is online, and there is still something to say

The score of this book is seriously underestimated. I personally feel it is at least 9.5. This is because the subject matter is relatively new and some people may not like it. The author's literary talent and subject matter are very good, I like it very much. Come on, author!

The writing is quite interesting, and it was exciting to read. It was quite interesting to watch, but it sucked.

The book is very good and I like the story. The macro world is also relatively large. When you look at it, you can feel that it is not the kind of unfinished novel written with hundreds of pictures. I hope the author can do more good things in strange fields, such as overlapping space, humans, animals, plants, treasures, etc. Life is about growing up one after another through adventures.

This book already has signs of being rated above 9 points. It is a new theme of a big world. The main character is in a small town and slowly leads to the whole world. The main character has stayed in one place for too long.

Personally I think it's okay, the plot doesn't drag on, and it escalates step by step. Anyway, I thought it was okay and I finished reading it in one go.

It's getting more and more exciting, super awesome [like]

It's a very good book, but updates are a bit slow. Another point is that the development of the world view is a bit delayed. It is hundreds of thousands of words long and has just left the novice village. Judging from the engine levels in Steel City, it is only D1 at present, there are D2-D9 above, and there are several SABC levels above. How long will it take to postpone?

The author must not stop updating, it is very novel. Very nice. Iron Armor City really touched my heart. I also want to have a home that I can go to anywhere. I have everything at home, and I can get different things from different places and store them at home.

It builds a very large world system. It is not a cool article like a traditional system. It feels very good and worth recommending.

This book is well written, the plot is very good, and it makes people want to read it. Unlike some books, the contents of other people's books are moved into the book as they are written, and I hope you will continue writing according to the storyline at the beginning of the book.

Good books, good books. Rare fine chaff. But you sucked at the end. I really like this grand world view.

Damn it, good guy, it's unreasonable, the rating is so low? Let me tell you clearly that I set the score independently. I just ask the author to update a few more pictures every day. Don't care about those little Karami [laughing evilly]