After Binding to the Entertainment System, I Became the Top-Notch Person in the World.

I have only read a dozen chapters, and here is what I can say. The writing is indeed good, much better than many brainless novels, but it has a very bad shortcoming. The story is too seriously weakened. If I read it roughly, I feel that there are too many long "big principles" paragraphs, and the fan comments are all long and literary comments. , Too long-winded and too unreal, with a low sense of immersion; if you read it carefully, it feels like one chapter is all about your "own" high school time, and you almost forget that this is a novel. Many sentences are familiar because they have been memorized and excerpted before, and almost all of them are motivating readers. It is too easy to get bored... Really, the author should try his best to pay attention to this aspect. Just insert one or two sentences of literary and artistic sentences appropriately into each chapter, which will make it more natural.

Like this book. Jue Juezi. Really, it made me cry(´;;`). I recommend everyone to read this book. The author is very good. I personally like poetry and songs. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง. Update update

Forgive me for not being able to speak. This book is so well written and the author's writing style is superb. I also want to ask, is this article really free of cp? I prefer the one without cp

Let's not talk about anything else, just because it contains TFboys songs, I like it very much! I've seen a lot of them before, but I've never seen them before, and there's a team like them, and I really like them! There are many famous sentences in it, and the writing is also very beautiful. The author's writing style is very good!

It's pretty good, I hope it doesn't end badly

Treasure Book, the sentences in it are amazing, I love them so much, I hope I don't want to be a eunuch

It's very interesting, please come on author [laughing]

I hope it doesn't end badly in the end

Dear author, come on, don't let my three little ones have any more regrets

It's so well written, is there no male protagonist? I saw Gu Yan and senior brother. 🈶The male protagonist? How many times a day? The one I watched before called The Porter of the Earth made me anxious after a few updates, so I abandoned it. I hope to see more [love][love][love] every day

I am a person who likes to complain, but the subject matter, logic and writing style of this novel are very good. I hope it will not be unfinished in the future!!! (*^ω^*)

Why did you stop? I finally found one I like.

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

I'm optimistic about you, the author. Your writing is very good so far. I hope you can keep it up. Also, please update soon.

It's really beautiful and the author's writing is very good. I'm waiting here for the big update~(ฅ••ฅ)

The author's writing style is very good ~ I am very considerate ~

The text of Dada is very good. The plot is touching and easy to treat oneself. I hope Dada's writing will get better and better.

Not bad, thank you to the author

Not bad. I hope you will continue to work hard.

It's very interesting. The author's writing style is very good. When will the author update it?