Pokémon Water Master Ah Hai

I didn't expect that the initial Pokémon would be Slugton, so I'd like to support it by giving it a five-star rating (｡･ω･｡)

When a newcomer opens a book, it's more about fulfilling a dream of his or hers, so work hard and be grateful.

No heroine? If there is a heroine, I hope Xiaoxia, I will watch the punishment [laughing evilly] (I have to say Koga Ninja, Thousand-faced Lizard are both handsome)

Better than most

Overall, no big problem. 1: According to your introduction, he specializes in the water system, but although the gem starfish is in the water system, he specializes in super powers. Although there is nothing wrong with it, there is a possibility of cheating, but it is not a big problem. 2: It still feels like the level rises too fast. Although you are using the game panel for reference, I think it is better to lower it, otherwise the combat power will easily collapse. 3: Purely refreshing writing. (If you don't like it, just don't come in) 4: The level of Gengar in Maiden Gap is still low, only level 49.

It's pretty good, it levels up quickly, the plot doesn't drag out, and the pacing is pretty good. However, in the later period, things like family felt a bit redundant, and the description of emotions also had many shortcomings. For example, the protagonist's parents went on a trip without worrying at all when the protagonist was weak, but later became very worried when the protagonist became stronger. I don't understand. Then there is the family. The sense of existence was very low before, but later they cared about the protagonist. It felt like the protagonist had no value before so he didn't care, and then he kneeled down and licked him when he became stronger. Moreover, the protagonist's father's eagerness to surrender also made people very uncomfortable. Let's just consider him caring for the time being. It's not a big problem. Then there is the heroine. Although I am not sure who she is, I feel that there are too many single arrows. However, whether it is the entertainment industry literary quality speech in the audience during the battle or Xiaoxue and Kona King, there is an indescribable sense of cheapness. Combined with the emotional scenes of the first two parents and family, it feels like it will collapse🙃 Finally, there is the aspect of conquering Pokémon. From the early collection, influencing yourself to join, the hero saving the treasure, to the later defeating, and then seducing after disagreeing, I personally can't do it. Generally speaking, these are minor problems and not serious problems. I look forward to the follow-up.

Slow growth is what I like. If you get a mythical Pokémon at the beginning, Goldfinger will be a bit too powerful.

Overall, it's okay, but I don't know if there will be a female protagonist. There isn't one so far, and I hope there won't be one in the future.

Well written! Come on😊

Awesome, the author will arrange one for Combo Ryuu Dao Bear Master

So far this book has been great.

Name: Steel Seadramon Attributes: Dragon, Water, Flying Talent: Database＜Master all Pokémon information＞ Skills: Water skills Special Move: Ultimate Wave Cannon Image: A silver-white steel dragon that can fly in the sky and swim under the sea Introduction: The ultimate dragon, who accidentally crossed into the Pokémon world from the digital world, wants to swim in all the water worlds and become the male protagonist's subordinate.

The writing is really good, I hope it will get better and better in the future. Don't be discouraged, the author is working hard✺◟(∗✺◟(∗❛ัᴗ❛ั∗)◞✺

Share your opinion @Master℃: Author! Author! Hope to see it! Regardless of comics, animation or theater version, there is no such thing as a level. Your level is the game level, which is also the reason for the protagonist system! Since you have traveled through time, no one else knows how many levels there are. This is not a game world! I hope the author can change it! Otherwise, it will be difficult for old bookworms to read it.

The whole book is very good. Many people may think it is a bit fast, but now that you are too slow, no one can read it.

The latest part feels like fantasy. [Smile] The style of painting changes. . It's not working anymore. Niu Xiuxian is back. Write about his own experience? It's okay for newcomers, bye bye

Well written, support! After reading it for a long time, I basically can't find anything unreasonable at all. When I saw some of the latter parts, I didn't want to read it at all. The author will update it quickly and the writing is really good! Anyway, this book is the one I like the most among the many Pokémon books. [Blowing kiss][cool]

Big boost to the author, this is the second Pokémon fanfic I've read and recognized in my heart! [Love][love][love]

It's pretty good purely for the genre. I've read Fighting and Flying before. The author's book on the water genre is also pretty good. [Like] Keep writing.

Come on, come on, author!

It's beautiful, good luck to the author!

Come on, the author

The advancement speed is a bit fast. I don't know how to write it later.

More! Why not update it! There are still many water types that have not appeared in the follow-up!

Great Pokémon text, could you please add a Megalodon at the end?

OK But the plot is not very rich, and there are too many useless words. But let's encourage it [eating melon]

I just found out that I started writing up in 2022, and now there are 110 chapters. What year did the author change? In addition, the author must have written the article out of love, and may not care much about the performance of the book, but I still venture to express my opinion. Personally, I feel that articles such as Pokémon are generally relatively plain, so some embellishments need to be added to the text to prevent it from appearing monotonous. Common embellishments should be the shaping of each character, including the growth of the protagonist and the distinctive characteristics of the supporting characters (refer to Shinji), or the male and female characters. (I don't know why so many people like non-heroine, maybe the author's technique is relatively high), or you can design some special plots yourself, such as encountering some special Pokémon individuals, write a short story specifically, and make people feel something after reading the story. It's a pity that I have read a book by an author who did a good job in these aspects before, and I don't know why the results are not satisfactory. The score is obviously 9.5. In addition, I don't mean to offend or attack anyone, and don't 🐓 me [sending heartfelt messages]

Very good, the plot is smooth

It's quite interesting, but it would be nice to have more details about the battle, and then mess up a little bit, whether the martial arts bear master with fighting + water counts as a water attribute spirit, and whether the protagonist will get it in the future.

Not bad, not bad. The drawback is that although I keep seeing this novel on the list, I shouldn't have jumped into it so early [laughs]