Start as an Ark Origin Stoneworm

It's so beautiful [Like][Like][Like][Like][Admiration][Admiration][Admiration][Admiration][Admiration] @Leev Tolstoy, his father, you really should come and see this

December 23rd I finished reading it. Overall, it's a good Zhouzhou fan. Let me summarize a few points and give you some opinions. 1. I am a Double Chef player. I was actually a little confused when watching the Double Chef part. I didn't quite understand what the host could do in the world of Double Chef. I couldn't join the upgrade network or something, right? This plot feels a bit redundant. 2. The timeline of Ark is not quite right, as is the relationship between the characters. For example, Kelsey only got close to Theresia after fighting with her brother and sister. Theresa was the kind of person who wanted to kill Kelsey when she saw him. After all, it is unlikely that Kelsey will be in this state due to the hundred-year decline of Kazdaele. It's really not good to have too many 3 women. The main character group has 2.3, Which is enough. If there are too many, it will lead to poor control of the emotional scenes. 4. The protagonist group in the game now includes Kelsey, Theresia, Doctor, and Bunny is missing! Rabbit was picked up by the Doctor. It is impossible for the Doctor to know where Rabbit is with his current appearance. Under this arrangement? 5. The timeline is pushed too fast In the final summary, there is room for improvement, and it is huge. For timeline arrangement, you can refer to up Oakwood's "The Chronicles of the Ark". For the plot, you can check out Yang Yan's analysis video. Finally, please give the author 4 stars to wait and see, and 5 stars to see the performance~ (As an aside, I originally wanted to write a Zhouzhou fanfic, but my equipment limited my performance...)

Beautiful and well written. Transforming into a source stone insect to save Terra, and the Chuchu people to save Teyvat are themes I have always wanted to see. And this book is not just about personal evolution, but more about world salvation. The three views are correct and the writing style is smooth. Zhouwen is a good book.

Damn it, a treasure was discovered! I hope there will be a role for Didi!

It's really good-looking, really, I'm not going to lie, just the title, emmm, it's okay, anyway, I was almost persuaded to quit it at the time (because it wasn't attractive, but it's okay, mainly because I'm also a sucker for naming names [laughs awkwardly]).

Although there are many typos, it is important to have ideas. It is both a beautiful fantasy and a realistic color. It is also the Ark that I am interested in, and the protagonist is also very different. Please work harder. Strive to create original themed world novels

Very well written, with novel subject matter and strong support. It can be summed up in three words: Jue Jue Zi @StupidBghostshark Oh haha~ This Ark novel is good to read, give it a try

It's good to watch, especially the love and marriage battle of Huang Cheng. Others are like heirs, demons, business wars, and development tasks. Anyway, there is a system to directly reduce the dimensionality and attack, and it can be as simple as possible. After all, Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie. The suffering of this land is still reincarnating, and there are conspirators outside the earth who are grinning. Have you seen humanity defeat Honkai and the world become a beautiful place? Have you seen the young heart wailing under the dark night? Do you see countless souls in the world of Hengsha waiting for salvation? So, my friend, the truth is in your pen, and as long as we never stop, the road will continue to extend.

It's a very good book. It's very interesting. This book is also part of the reason why I got into Arknights. So is there any porridge group? I can't survive on BB-5. The main reason is that the low-end strategies have higher configurations than mine. Can anyone help me? ! [Cry]

Awesome🐮This is the only Ark novel in my bookshelf that is still being updated [Adoration] I like it very much

Very interesting, I have read the latest chapter. First of all, when I first read it, I felt that the author's writing style was very monotonous and not outstanding, and the plot and details were not handled very well. However, I can clearly feel the author's progress, probably by the time of The Story of Spring. Because I have read many such books, I am not very interested in this kind of recall narrative technique, but this paragraph written by the author , I personally feel very good, I am not very good at explaining the specifics, but the most profound feeling is that it enriches the emotions of the protagonist and makes people feel that he has experienced it, so any emotions he has shown before and in the future are related to the things he does because of his emotions, and become reasonable and reasonable, unlike the time-travelers in other novels who are inexplicably indignant or something like that. Although the description of the protagonist's development is omitted, the insertion of this story is really great. Fast forward to the protagonist mixing among the familiar game characters without any sense of disobedience. Of course, this is not the only part of the author's good writing. I hope that readers will be patient and read a few chapters. The author's progress will be obvious soon. I also hope that the author will not be a eunuch. Come on (≧∇≦)/

Very well written, I hope I don't want to be a eunuch [Like]

First of all, this book is very good-looking, especially in the early stages. But most of the books fail in the middle and late stages. For example, the heroine, although I hate the heroine, this novel is also very good. And if the male protagonist has too many emotional lines, sometimes it will feel very embarrassing. Especially the author also added a situation for the male protagonist to have his brain standby when he encounters feelings. I actually haven't pushed it to the point where the update is still 30 or 40 years behind. But after a rough look at the chapters, as long as they don't involve feelings or women, they are good. The main thing is about feelings. If the author can really see it, I hope to change it a little. Although this book has already published more than 200 pictures, some of the previous feelings cannot be changed too much, but I still hope that it can be changed a little bit so that I will not be very embarrassed when I read it. Finally, I hope the author will make more updates in a day.

This is one of the better Ark fanfics I have read, please say goodbye🕊️

It's a rare Ark novel, and its score has already reached 9.3. I know of only three Ark novels with a score of 9.3, And apart from the author's, one of them has been discontinued. I hope the author can continue to update and not interrupt. (Minion's affirmation. Jpg)

It is very humane but not a brainless Madonna. It can be seen in the plot that the background of the Ark is full of tragedy. Although the author does not describe much here, he also writes that Terra is not lacking in tragedy. The protagonist's style may not be authentic but "this land is never picky when it comes to eating people." In order to live, no one can be completely trusted. When a fellow traveler meets a fellow traveler, he may not necessarily burst into tears. He may get a fatal blow from behind. Anyone who wants to be the protagonist of the story will expand infinitely in natural disasters. What's more, as a time traveler, he is definitely more dangerous than the original work. (If you write blindly, don't spray it on dog if you don't wash it [laughing evilly])

The Ark I've read so far is pretty good, because I don't like to read plots, and I always feel intermittent when reading other fandoms. That won't be the case with this book, but the details of this book are a bit fast. For example, the story of spring does not make me feel empathy, but it is a bit awkward. There are also characters. I feel that Sai and W have changed too much. I can't accept it anyway. Anyway, it's not a big problem. It's a little bit toxic. There are no evolution points or time-travel rewards that were promised so far. There's not much progress in the main plot. Moreover, the characters of Porridge are almost collapsed. There are probably seven or eight female protagonists who have ideas. Those who haven't seen the plot of Porridge can read it. It can be regarded as a stallion story with the background of Porridge [Start]

It looks good, but it seems to have some hints of a harem, I hope it can be dealt with. I don't reject harems, but having too many harems is a bit annoying (눈_눈). It would be fine if I could write better. Looking forward to the follow-up

How can I say, although I haven't watched it for a long time, but for my group, the plot is interesting and the male protagonist is also strong. But my feeling is that licking is not good in order to establish a relationship with the character. Although the show says there is a bottom line, it is too flexible. Like me, I can't watch licking. I suggest you don't watch it. If you can bear it, it is still good to watch. The plot is compact.

It's pretty good. At least it doesn't have so many knives, which makes up for some regrets. It's a cool novel, but it has some brains. When it comes to opening a harem, it's a matter of opinion. Some people can't stand it, but I can accept it.

I think this book is the best book written in Ark. It makes up for a lot of unsatisfactory situations and brings us a different plot experience. At the same time, the plot is also very interesting and the characters are also very good. It makes the protagonist a different kind of savior. On the surface, he is a black-hearted capitalist who lets infected people in her factory three times a day. Although he was working overtime, he actually saved countless infected people, provided them with stability and safety, and could provide infected people with the same salary as normal people, or even a few cups more than normal people. He could even provide a good educational environment and a safe living standard for children at war. It can be said that his ability is superior to that of all countries. It is worth mentioning that a series of people such as Xiaote, White Rabbit, and Big Daddy can survive.

Not bad, it's a rare good book, if you don't miss it later

There's not much else to say. Since Tomato, I'm the only Ark fan who can watch it. Even I Stretch Out My Hands is the only one among all the fans who want to watch it. I believe there are already comments that have praised me all I want to say. I won't talk nonsense here. In short, it is very beautiful. If it weren't for the modifier, I would give you a full 10 stars. There are also those who don't want to see the harem. It's fine if you don't want to see it. If you do, then you'll be babbling here again.

How to say it? I personally think there is a little problem except for the emotional aspect, but if you think about it carefully, it's not a big problem. I think overall this book is really good. Then, I was watching Arknights recently. I thought this book was very good.

After watching it for so long, the conclusion is that the male protagonist is not a source stone insect but a male succubus. And I really don't understand how to win Kelsey's part. After over and over again, I concluded that the male protagonist is a succubus [laughing] except for the girl who wanted to be a hero in front of me who stabbed me [eating melon]

Me: Well, I personally feel pretty good. Although the idea of ​​changes is beyond the follow-up development I have in mind, I can still accept it. Heart: Ask yourself if your conscience is okay? Eyes: But I still can't bear to look at it in loneliness! Hand: This is the first time I have clicked on a book so many times on the same software.

The only Ark fanfic that I can read on Tomato. Although I am a newbie, I still seem to enjoy it (I am a newbie in one month and already have Konoe Usagi at level 57 [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully])

Delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious

It's well written, but I didn't want to read it when I saw the transformation into a shota. Everything else is good.

It's good-looking, very good-looking, super good-looking. Even I, a person who doesn't understand the plot of Ark, was forced to make up for the world view of Ark.