Tai Chi************

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The writing is really good and I like it very much. I rarely give five stars. It is good in many aspects. The only thing that is not particularly good is the data. In fact, the main function of the system is feedback, so there should be a standard for which values ​​​​are. The difficult 100 and the simple 800 are not very good, and all the characters are displayed, which is a bit suspicious of the number of characters. My suggestion is to set a hidden attribute potential to affect the value of the skill. The displayed data uses one day of serious practice as the standard for adding 1. This way, you can add more characters and it is easier to read.

It's very interesting. The real protagonist's IQ is online. He's not a virgin, and he's not killing without brains. The combat power and item prices in the early stage are set very well, and it won't collapse in the later stage. I hope the author will update it soon. It's so short that I finished reading it all in one day! Come on! I hope the worldview can be designed to be bigger and not become a fantasy sewer

It's quite interesting. It describes the life of the low-level casual cultivators in the world of immortality. It is written in great detail. Unlike traditional immortality articles that only focus on "opportunities, resources, and sects", it writes about the life of the low-level casual cultivators that others have briefly mentioned. It gives people a very real feeling and is quite fresh. Of course, there are small flaws, which is also a common problem in system writing. The system panel appears too many times, giving people a sense of deja vu. Other than that, there is nothing wrong with it. It's worth reading for those who are tired of traditional immortality stories but also like the theme of "immortality cultivation"!

This is the best book written by Gou Dao. I hope the author will add more chapters every day. The plot is reasonable, and it describes the hardships of cultivating immortality at the bottom. It is a rare article on immortality cultivation. I am following the author and hope to update more.

When I read this book, I was reminded of Gou Zai Shengui's world, but it's a different plot. That book has been discontinued and I just found this book. It's a good continuation, and it's just as good-looking [Like]

This book gives me a feeling that is more real than other books, and it is also a bit casual. It is the protagonist's attitude towards love and righteousness. The protagonist is really Gou, and the protagonist will express emotion from time to time. I also hope to see the protagonist's life path and see how he goes on in this strange world of immortality. The author just writes according to his own heart [blowing kiss], come on, code the words! ! !

How to put it, I feel that the limit of Tai Chi is a bit low, and the system's proficiency limit is too big. There should be no upper limit for proficiency (of course this is what I think); there are still three years, which is very strange, because the protagonist is gradually rising with proficiency, and there is no such thing as a bottleneck. If the proficiency of Qi training has to be so slow, then the proficiency in the future is a bit scary (it can easily take thirty, forty or hundreds of years). The above are all things that I think are inappropriate, but overall it is well written and has the flavor of a mortal cultivating immortality (this smell is too strong, I still hope that the author will make a little breakthrough and follow his own ideas). This book is still very interesting to read and deserves a five-star rating.

I finished reading the novel in one night. Although the rating is not high now, it is already the most refreshing and refined book in Gou Dao. As for the plot, I think it is also average in Tomato. It is an above-average type (personal feeling). I feel that the author can improve the cultivation and combat power. The strength in the Qi refining period is lower than expected. I hope there will be a qualitative change in the foundation building.

An old man who climbed up from the bottom really alludes to the story of a person with no ideas in real life who has no foundation, no background and no status. He takes the wrong path and breaks through the network of class and strives to climb up.

This book is good enough for health! It's good enough for life! It's very different from other cookie-cutter books.

It's pretty good. It's much better than other proficiency articles. The main reason is that the combat power is more reasonable and not as outrageous as the others.

The longevity novel is quite good! Come on, author, give me a five-star support

For this type of novel, it would be perfect to give a disguise technique at the beginning. The basic necessary skills for Gou Dao are disguise technique, light body technique, attack technique, defense technique, and rejuvenation technique. It is perfect.

It looks great, keep it up. Come on

It's pretty good. It looks very comfortable. From my personal feeling, there is nothing poisonous about it. In fact, from a normal perspective, the front part is very consistent with my view of an ordinary casual cultivator.

The plot is reasonable and positive, the writing is superb, and the portrayal of the supporting characters' tasks is also remarkable!

It's okay. In fact, the first part is more like martial arts, but after it was converted into a fairy tale, it lost that flavor. However, the author's writing is relatively steady, and it doesn't make people feel abrupt. Moreover, from it, you can see the feeling of having sex non-stop in the story of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. It is considered a good time-killing novel, so feel free to rush.

Not bad, but the emotional scenes are a bit toxic It's time to be stubborn, and I wrote down the food to death. I feel it's not worth it, but the emotional drama is really a failure. I feel that Sanniang is too stupid.

I have read a lot of them, and they are all excellent, but the other books have not stuck with me. I hope this book will not disappoint me, and that the author can be faster! ! !

Very good, eloquent and unpretentious.

I now like to read slow-burning articles like this that have a bad start. The pace of this article is good, and the character's logic and IQ are online. I look forward to more updates.

It's so beautiful, but no one has read it. This is really well written, my family [smile]

The writing is very nice. So far, it has a pastoral style. I like it very much.

Very nice, the characters are full of flesh and blood

The creation of this book is very innovative, the characters are unique, the plot is vivid and interesting, and it is perfect.

It's a rare novel that doesn't have too many poisonous points, give it a thumbs up👍🏻

This is a realistic novel in the guise of a fairy tale, describing too many helplessness and regrets in life. Personally I quite like it~

Not bad, the writing is very smooth, and it seems that I didn't find any unacceptable poisonous points! I hope the author will keep writing this way! There are not many books that Tomato can write so well!

It's really good. I just wish the pace could be faster. After a hundred chapters, the protagonist is still practicing Qi [laughing and crying]