Change Order/Different World/System
Su Luo, a serious gamer, created a perfect beautiful girl in the ultra-high degree of freedom game "Voyal's Starry Sky".
However, when he woke up, Su Luo himself turned into this beautiful girl and was bound to the most powerful magician training system.
The adventure of the talented young (female) Su Luo begins here!
Reader comments
I suggest the author not to sleep anymore. More than sixty chapters are not enough to read. Please update quickly. Even the cows in the production team dare not rest like this [Thoughts]
To be honest, it's pretty good, the idea is great, and the concept is great.
It's just that the writing style is a bit lacking, the plot is a bit rough, the details are missing, and the characterization effect is a bit poor. It needs to be improved. Well, there is a lot of room for improvement. Slowly accumulate experience, come on! (I don't know why. Logically speaking, the world view of this setting should be quite large, but so far I feel it is a bit small, the layout is too small, and I can't feel the sense of space)
If possible, make a whole cover and see if it can attract some people.
Qwq
Author Amway I came to see it
Don't know much about novels
Feeling pretty good
It always feels like the protagonist is resisting something. After reading it, I always felt that my own thoughts were not clear enough. That's it, the writing is pretty good. Also, the author should have tortured me thousands of times with code words. I fell in love with code words like my first love. [Think]
The plot isn't perfect, but it's pretty good
It's very interesting [I learned it] but the author seems to have ran away [pouts]
Very nice, give it five stars
If you don't know how to speak, just give me a five-star review. Come on [send your heart][send your heart][send your heart]
This is a pretty good novel, worth reading (ps: Of course, the first thing to do is to reach the poison resistance (elite or above), after all, the author puts in a little poison from time to time [cool])
After watching it for so long, most of them are good.
It feels pretty good. Let's take a look.
Really beautiful and wonderful
A little bit really good
Come on💪I will be with you
It's such a good book, why doesn't anyone comment on it?
Newcomers can leave, the book is probably dead
Changing orders, partial orders, adventure, friendship, and travel are all good. Let's wait and see if the first-hand author doesn't come back.
It's pretty good, but I don't know if the author is still there
I suggest the author not to sleep anymore. More than sixty chapters are not enough to read. Please update quickly. Even the cows in the production team dare not rest like this [Thoughts]
To be honest, it's pretty good, the idea is great, and the concept is great. It's just that the writing style is a bit lacking, the plot is a bit rough, the details are missing, and the characterization effect is a bit poor. It needs to be improved. Well, there is a lot of room for improvement. Slowly accumulate experience, come on! (I don't know why. Logically speaking, the world view of this setting should be quite large, but so far I feel it is a bit small, the layout is too small, and I can't feel the sense of space)
If possible, make a whole cover and see if it can attract some people.
Qwq Author Amway I came to see it Don't know much about novels Feeling pretty good
It always feels like the protagonist is resisting something. After reading it, I always felt that my own thoughts were not clear enough. That's it, the writing is pretty good. Also, the author should have tortured me thousands of times with code words. I fell in love with code words like my first love. [Think]
The plot isn't perfect, but it's pretty good
It's very interesting [I learned it] but the author seems to have ran away [pouts]
Very nice, give it five stars
If you don't know how to speak, just give me a five-star review. Come on [send your heart][send your heart][send your heart]
This is a pretty good novel, worth reading (ps: Of course, the first thing to do is to reach the poison resistance (elite or above), after all, the author puts in a little poison from time to time [cool])
After watching it for so long, most of them are good.
It feels pretty good. Let's take a look.
Really beautiful and wonderful
A little bit really good
Come on💪I will be with you
It's such a good book, why doesn't anyone comment on it?
Newcomers can leave, the book is probably dead
Changing orders, partial orders, adventure, friendship, and travel are all good. Let's wait and see if the first-hand author doesn't come back.
It's pretty good, but I don't know if the author is still there