Harmono: Hiratsuka Shizuka Is My Childhood Sweetheart

The author comes, The author reads with me: I solemnly swear: Starting today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently. I am the keyboard in the dark and the guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding. It's like this day and night. ⊙ω⊙

Come on, it's not easy to see a cute person who writes quietly, don't be cool.

Beautiful, my favorite harem novel, I hope to include all of them in the harem later [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Top post][Top post][Top post]

The book is well written, but the author doesn't read it well enough.

Become a hard-working donkey Baji [laughing evilly]

I really like this book, I hope I don't want to be a eunuch I finally sent the result I found, so sad😔

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Personally, I think it would be very awkward to write a simple love story into a HG novel... The pink-haired loser is especially pitiful. Was it added out of sympathy at the end? After all, Yangno's age fits the male protagonist's setting, right? Maybe I remembered it wrong. The male protagonist has been able to sustain the company for a while, but it always feels like he doesn't show much. After all, this book is rated G, so maybe there will be some details about the male protagonist's performance in various aspects later on. Hey, it's pretty good-looking, but it's a pity. But it feels better. It's pretty good written with a single female protagonist. Would it be better for other female protagonists to be written in extra chapters or divided into lines like Gal? (Just guessing) After all, writing HG on a daily basis always feels very awkward. Unless the male protagonist's background is too great. In short, the author's writing is still very good, and the daily progress is very good.

Rare, good It is still recommended not to open a harem. The essence of Haruwu's work is that it is too close to the problems faced in reality. If you don't open a harem, your stomach will hurt, you can only choose one. If you open a harem, it will hurt. It is pure and refreshing, unless you can write the emotional line very well. ✓ The requirements for the plot outline and emotional line are too high, because only regrets will make it appear beautiful. I still think a single female protagonist is more suitable

It's not easy to see Jing Keai, author, please come on

Overall, it's good, but there is a problem with the characters. The problem is that the three values ​​​​of EQ, IQ, and adversity quotient are low. Emotional quotient lies in the use of words. Some truths are told. IQ is not a fool, but a logical problem. It is related to the nature of businessmen. Adversity quotient is still related to businessmen and refers to the judgment of businessmen in adversity.

It's already been taken off the shelves, so I just gave it five stars. Isn't it a little late? [Almost crying] I'm sorry, the author's writing is really good. Whether it is the explanation of the harem or the emotional lines of each person, I think it is still very good so far. I thought I could see the end of this novel, but I didn't expect it to be really "finished". I'm sorry, the author has been delayed in coming to Five Stars.

I originally thought it was a one-person novel by Jing Keai, but to be honest, it attracted me more this way. But since the manuscript has been deadlined, there is no need to worry about the outline and plot of the next few chapters. It would be nice to finish Jing Keai's solo route and end it with a few chapters. At least it's still a good fanfic. [Eat melon] After all, if I really followed the outline and plot, I would almost give up on the book. Really, I don't want too many emotional twists and turns, just a simple and logical marriage. Jing Keai deserves to be treated with tenderness. [Cry][cry][cry]

It feels pretty good-looking

The writing is good, and not too OOC, and the plot logic is better than most online novels. The disadvantage is that the control and description of the character's psychology and emotions feel a bit uninteresting, but as a fanfic for fans without considering the literary nature, it is highly recommended. Well, in short, according to the level of a novice, it is already very good. If you read a few more books, you will definitely become a first-class writer.

It looks good, why is it only 7.7? Personally, I prefer this type.

Damn it, I finally found a book in which Shizuka Hiratsuka is the heroine [crying]

The author is too short, please write more. Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this

It looks good, but the book was sent [crying] [crying]

It's pretty good, but I don't like some of the settings.

Don't stop following the author, keep updating, we fans will support you If the author stops updating, please start a new comic book, and write another one that is quiet and cute. Please, author

I finished reading this book at 3:42 in the morning and received a five-star review.

How should I put it? It's a little awkward, but it's not unacceptable. After all, it's the first book. As long as it's not a prison, it's very strong. Let's keep up the good work! Come on💪

The author should update more quickly. You updated for dozens of days, and I finished reading it in an hour. Can you add a little more interaction between Jing and the male protagonist? I feel that the two of them interacted and chatted a bit less. Every interaction after that was affectionate, and there were very few literary scenes. Of course, the action scenes should not be stopped [shy][shy]

😓, Finished reading. . . . . . Already forgot the content, haha. As a novice, it's okay. I hope the author will produce better works, keep up the good work!

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, really looks good!

Tun arrived to watch in a bunch during the winter vacation [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

I will give four stars first, because I don't know if Dango is our classmate Yui, so I can only give four stars first. If not, I have to change it to three stars or two stars. Please reply to the author. After all, I have not read this article. I only read the five-point bride. As long as the dumpling is the Yui-san I know, that's fine

Author, you can't be lousy. It's not easy to find such a wonderful spring novel. Come on! ! ! It's over so quickly

Halfway through, I realized that I wasn't keeping up with the progress of the plot, and then I realized that I was blocked [crying]