Quick Travel: Presenting the Death Escape Script to the Boss

Well, five stars for encouragement. After watching the first plane, I feel that I must be a novice. The narrative of the story is very smooth and makes people want to continue reading. But the pace is too fast, and the emotions between the protagonists are a bit confusing. At the beginning, Shou suffered amnesia, but she felt like she was brainwashed, and suddenly fell in love with Gong? Then Gong's thinking was very strange👉👈🙏. He felt so uncomfortable without torturing him, and he felt so miserable. There's a weird bit of nonsense🙏Then there are parentheses in the middle to supplement the character's psychological description, which is a bit weird. You can just write it directly. Adding parentheses makes it seem like a digression. The above are my personal viewing experience and some small suggestions. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. Finally, I hope the author's wife will cheer up!

What you wrote is good, but we are not suitable. The writing is very good. The first world was really uncomfortable to watch, but I still finished it. But why did the second world lose its memory again? A bottle of medicine was missing for nothing. Why is there any bad system? He is stupid, prodigal, and troublesome, and he always prefers scumbag attack. Why does the protagonist fall in love with this man who dug out his corneas? Didn't the memory come back? Okay, I understand this. But I really can't stand it anymore, it's so frustrating. [Cry]

Very nice (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, thank you so much for the author

What a great author! What we are saying is that it would be much better if there were more detailed descriptions. For example, when he was dying, his heart was cut like a knife, his eyes were full of tears, his hands were shaking uncontrollably, (it can be exaggerated a little), and the tears were pouring down like a waterfall [laughing evilly] Haha, I was just skinny [laughing]

The design is exquisite, and the links are interlocking. It is torture. As a controlled person, it is very sad when being tortured. But overall it's still very interesting to read, with some humor and some sensationalism. The author's writing style is pretty good, so this book is quite enjoyable to read. I hope the author will continue to update

Madam, it suits my taste so well! The whole book has grown on me! [Adoration] There is sweetness and cruelty, the world is so sweet, there is no better, only the best. If you want to see the sweetness in the world, please watch our Qingbao University classmates!

The new book I just found yesterday [I'm about to cry] is gone [I'm about to cry] I've been short of books for several days and I can't find the book [I'm about to cry]

As long as it looks good, I can't understand it a bit

Needless to say, it's pretty good-looking, short and concise, and the most important thing is that the deputy CP is very full of emotions, ahhhhhhhhhh, and the main CP is also fun (ps: it's my first time to write a book review, I'm shy((つ≧▽≦)つ)

It's a very interesting book. Kudos to the author! ∗︎˚(* ˃̤൬˂̤ *)˚∗︎Each world is very short and very beautiful. It ends before you can feel sad. I recommend [Love] [Please update]

A very nice book! !

It's so good to read, so good to read, I love this book so much. When I first read it, I fell in love with the two words "Death Escape", and then the ending made me cry all the time, but it's really good to read \(//∇//)\! ! ! ! Author, I love you (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

It was so cruel, especially the vampire chapter. I wanted to kill all the people who bullied Xiaoqing. The abuse didn't make me heartbroken in the early stage. I almost got a heart attack in the later stage. I'm about to see the finale. Woohoo.

It's so beautiful, so sweet and so sweet, I always like it [shy]

Big support for the authorヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉﾞ❀~

I want to laugh hahaｸﾞｯ!(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧ My elder brother can only hug me if he has a license, but my younger brother can still drive without a license. Hahahaha burp [please taste carefully]

Oh hey hey hey, I love it, but the pace is indeed a bit too fast, but I can accept it. After all, I don't have much patience. It's another one of my favorite memes. There's also the third world of one-to-many. I love it. (I haven't finished it yet, so I don't know if the ending is one-to-many. Hehehehe.) Come on, control the pace. It's really too fast. Many people will not be used to it and even become confused. It's easy to lose readers.

I particularly like the author's short and concise writing.

This book is really beautiful, especially the first and second planes, which are super beautiful. But I really couldn't understand the rest of it (maybe because my IQ is too low [cover face] [cover face]). But to be honest, if it weren't for the fact that I really can't understand it, I would have to abandon the article, but I really like this book very much [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]

This book is great! —— ^O^

The kind that looks better and better

Good looking, oh so cruel

I really like Ah Qing, she is so gentle and I want to take her away.

"Sweet" made me panic and saliva flowed from the corners of my eyes.

I feel so scumbag and pitiful, so tired and distressed that I want to hug her and give her a kiss! The author is so amazing, so great!ヽ(*´з｀*)ﾉ

I really like this kind of fast-paced dressing without any lag at all [adoration] [love]

Beautiful! There is a chapter about ancient themes, and the chapter about four people is particularly exciting [eating melon]

I really like this type!!! It's so beautiful

Super pretty! I just like knives and sugar mixed together, ah ah ah, I really love it [shy][shy]

Wow, oh, blame me, I didn't have time to watch it in the dormitory, and it ended! This book is super beautiful. Both the character creation and the content are very distinct and the content is exciting and rich~