If You Cough and Become an Immortal, You Are Truly Worthy of Being a Teacher.

The realms of martial arts in this book: shaking hands, coughing, holding on to the wall, and lying in bed Immortal realm: stay up late, stay up all night, sleepless, confused, sudden death...

There are gold fingers that are not exaggerated, and they are decisive in killing, and they look good.

Can you be more careful and learn a breathing technique?

Come, the author read with me, and I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code words diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to code words every day and every night. .

Very good, golden finger is not exaggerated, IQ is online

The plot is funny and interesting, but it is not a sandbox novel. The level of advancement is not too fast or too slow. The combat power system will not collapse. The details are well grasped. It will not deliberately belittle others or elevate the protagonist. The protagonist is not one who values ​​love and justice, but the author grasps it very well. The heroine of the brothel (for the first time) is not abandoned by the protagonist, and the heroine is also written. She has a strong talent and can keep up with the protagonist. It is quite good. The author's details are very good! ! !

Nice! If this book were not poisonous, it would be a hit

In the later period, some systems were used less and it was not as fun as in the early stage. Maybe the level has gone up or the novelty has gone away? But overall it is still pretty good-looking. While reading, I kept thinking whether there could be more simplifications of this genre, but maybe the author's focus is not here. [Smile]

The writing and plot are very good. I read it patiently and it is interesting. The eldest princess part is indeed a bit poisonous. After enduring it, it got better. The plot system in the second half has gradually faded away and is mainly about cultivating immortals. However, the author has created an idealized plot. Although it is comfortable to watch, it is slightly too idealistic. For example, every time a relative or friend is injured or seriously injured and dying, they are saved by the protagonist. There are too many times, and the plots and tricks are very superficial, and there are various opportunities that only the protagonist can get. The most incomprehensible thing is that the catastrophe happened inexplicably, but it is also possible that the author wanted to change the map and ended it hastily. Generally speaking, the general plot and writing style are okay. If you read it patiently, it is a good read.

It's not enough to read at all. The author should work on it a lot more.

Ahem, Mr. Shen is fake, and you, the author, are real. Please update it faster. You have dug so many holes, so I give you 4 stars. This is an alternative kind of immortality article. It does not start with direct immortality, but relies on the fusion of exercises to add longevity and gradually become stronger. What I like the most is the attitude of the man with kidney deficiency. He wants to be an immortal, but also a woman (not looking for a wife, for physiological needs).

I don't know why, but I started coughing while reading your novel. Then when I don't want to cough, I can't cough anymore. I coughed when I read your novel. Your novel is magical. [Shock]

What on earth did the author want to write about the eldest princess? I guess it was ghostwriting later on. I was trying to be stubborn, but it ended up being a waste.

The part about Five Elements State was quite well written, but as the author said, it was almost uninteresting later on, and the story was not complete. The writing was a bit urgent, and the ending was quite sudden. It can also be said to be a good book😄!

I haven't finished reading it yet. There's nothing poisonous about it so far. I think it's pretty good. The protagonist doesn't meddle in other people's business and the setting can be considered novel.

I read it in two days and it was very exciting. The ideas are bold and the techniques are natural. The setting is traditional, but the content is novel and hidden for negotiation.

I got sick in the later period. It is understandable that there are reasons for this. The overall book is quite acceptable. Although there are some small holes that are not covered, the general outline is acceptable. It is a book worth reading. I basically read it without skipping chapters. The final ending is also a small highlight.

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The starting plot is a bit unsatisfactory, but the protagonist Lao Liu is a bit funny and can be tolerated. It feels like the first half of Mr. Kidney Deficiency is another Kidney Deficiency in parallel time and space. I hope there will be a different ending.

It feels pretty good. Although the previous Qi training period took a long time to write, almost more than a hundred chapters, I only started reading it after incorporating the previous Mirror World, but the later upgrades are quite fast. If you write it like this, people who are impatient will not be able to read it, but it is already over, so it is useless to say more. Just five stars because I watched it for a long time

I really admire this author's writing style and storytelling ability. His or her writing is smooth and powerful, able to capture the reader's attention and lead them into the world of the story. He or she is good at creating vivid characters and making them come to life so that readers can resonate and emotionally connect with them. The storyline is compact and gripping, always making people look forward to the next chapter. In addition, this author is also good at depicting delicate emotions and environments, making readers feel as if they are actually there. Overall, the author has mastered the narrative technique perfectly, making the readers willing to immerse themselves in it and unable to extricate themselves. I look forward to more of his (her) works because I believe he (she) is indeed an excellent novelist.

It is a growth-oriented novel. The protagonist has a stable and free-spirited character, and strives to move forward with the goal of immortality. The journey is a little bumpy, but he is also at ease. In the end, he successfully attains immortality, and God has no choice but to become the only one in the world. Although the ending is a bit regretful, it can be regarded as a happy ending.

No matter what, it's really good. I thought I could continue to crush the fairy world, but I didn't expect to ascend. Although the ending was a bit blurry, I was satisfied after seeing Ji Yuan and Liangcai. It's a pity that Jiu Xian and Li Leyou didn't consummate, but it's still worth watching.

This book has profound thoughts, sincere feelings, beautiful language and delicate writing. Emotions are revealed naturally, making readers feel as if they are actually there. Use a lot of realistic techniques to focus on the little characters and portray the characters vividly. Seeing the big from the small, by describing the protagonist's experience, reveals the cruelty of reality, and expresses the proletariat's fighting spirit of expecting revolution and daring to resist, which is of great practical significance.

Well! ! The current one hundred chapters can be called a divine book! ! ! ! After a hundred chapters, I started to commit suicide. As expected, a good book can only exist within 100 chapters. . There is also the Virgin Mary at the end of the key, and I can't stand it at all. . .

I read Chapter 200, well, it seems like I haven't seen the main character coughing + kidney deficiency for a long time. I have a friend who has dark circles under his eyes and kidney deficiency, so he recommended the book to me, but I think it's a bit different from the title of the book. Give it 4 stars

Beautiful. I have read a lot of fantasy novels like this, but I gave up after reading a few chapters. I finished this one without realizing it. The author will update it quickly. I lost it after reading about half of it. I am so unhappy [smile]. I will wait for the author to update it.

A very good book, with rich and colorful content, flesh-and-blood characters, and sometimes very witty humor. The protagonist values ​​love and justice, is as gentle to his own people as a spring breeze, and is as ruthless to his enemies as an autumn wind sweeps away fallen leaves! [Like][Like][Like] I hope the author can publish a new book, come on! ! ! [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart]

The beginning was actually pretty good, but by Chapter 70 or 80 I couldn't hold it any longer. First, the eldest princess kept making dramas, and then when I met a stranger, he gave me the Foundation Building Pill [face covering]

Come on, come on, it's all for life