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The First Plane: Male Channel Novel: The Supreme Being in the World
Ten Thousand Gu Masters of the Gu Clan: Jiaojiao, no one can take you away from me.
Arrogant and wanton young man: I am willing to be the best knife in your hand.
Sword Dao Leader: Even if you want my life, it doesn't matter.
Jiaojiao: Men will only affect the speed at which I draw my sword.
Super invincible Mary Sue, the heroine is a heartthrob, super invincible beauty, everyone will be amazed when they see it. The author feels like a Mary Sue every time he writes. In addition, the heroine is very dark-hearted and absolutely unmoved. There is no real good person in the plot.
Those who cannot accept the above can be protected from lightning.
Reader comments
It's beautiful. Kudos to the author. This is the first time I've seen this type of article. I like it very much😍
It's very exciting. The heroine has a clear mind and is not interested in love. I haven't seen a battle of wits and courage plot for a long time. Especially the ruthless methods and strategies of the devil's saint are really admirable. Of course, the heroine also analyzes the situation. It's very accurate. Many things that I didn't understand were understood through the heroine's thoughts. It's a pity that such a resourceful heroine is not a military advisor. [Laughing] Come on, author, I'm very optimistic about your work.
I especially like the fox demon sister
The plot is a bit draggy and a bit tiring to watch, but overall it's okay
The plot is very novel, but the content of the article is very procrastinating. In the first fifty or so chapters, the male protagonist and the female protagonist have not met each other. Some of the content has already been written, so there is no need to go into too much detail. It is necessary to distinguish the priorities and give appropriate details. This way the article will be more attractive, come on! Great author! I will always support you!
The author writes very well and wonderfully. Please update more! ! !
It's really well written so far, I like it.
I really like the writing style. Excellent
I have read two of the author's heart-throb books, and the other one is indeed more exciting, but this one is also quite good, but it's a little slow at the beginning. I think the more you write, the better. Don't give up, author.
Looks good! Also, I hope the article can be revised as soon as possible! ! !
Come on, I'll keep an eye on you as an author. I've read so many novels and your writing is quite good and novel. I look forward to your next book.
It's so beautiful. The author cheers me up and be happy every day [blowing kisses].
Like it super! Come on! [Love][love][love]
Looks good, looks good, looks good.
Like this book very much
Great, come on
Fox demon, vicious and charming. Simply my favorite. It's just too short. The author will update it soon.
Come on, author. I really like it. I really like the character of the heroine.
Come on, author, it's the critical moment! ! ! Please, hurry up T^T
Big cheers for the author! I hope the article can be revised soon
It looks really good. I really like the vixen sister in it.
It's pretty good. It's the first time I've seen this type of thing.
It's beautiful. Kudos to the author. This is the first time I've seen this type of article. I like it very much😍
It's very exciting. The heroine has a clear mind and is not interested in love. I haven't seen a battle of wits and courage plot for a long time. Especially the ruthless methods and strategies of the devil's saint are really admirable. Of course, the heroine also analyzes the situation. It's very accurate. Many things that I didn't understand were understood through the heroine's thoughts. It's a pity that such a resourceful heroine is not a military advisor. [Laughing] Come on, author, I'm very optimistic about your work.
I especially like the fox demon sister
The plot is a bit draggy and a bit tiring to watch, but overall it's okay
The plot is very novel, but the content of the article is very procrastinating. In the first fifty or so chapters, the male protagonist and the female protagonist have not met each other. Some of the content has already been written, so there is no need to go into too much detail. It is necessary to distinguish the priorities and give appropriate details. This way the article will be more attractive, come on! Great author! I will always support you!
The author writes very well and wonderfully. Please update more! ! !
It's really well written so far, I like it.
I really like the writing style. Excellent
I have read two of the author's heart-throb books, and the other one is indeed more exciting, but this one is also quite good, but it's a little slow at the beginning. I think the more you write, the better. Don't give up, author.
Looks good! Also, I hope the article can be revised as soon as possible! ! !
Come on, I'll keep an eye on you as an author. I've read so many novels and your writing is quite good and novel. I look forward to your next book.
It's so beautiful. The author cheers me up and be happy every day [blowing kisses].
Like it super! Come on! [Love][love][love]
Looks good, looks good, looks good.
Like this book very much
Great, come on
Fox demon, vicious and charming. Simply my favorite. It's just too short. The author will update it soon.
Come on, author. I really like it. I really like the character of the heroine.
Come on, author, it's the critical moment! ! ! Please, hurry up T^T
Big cheers for the author! I hope the article can be revised soon
It looks really good. I really like the vixen sister in it.
It's pretty good. It's the first time I've seen this type of thing.