After My Confession Was Rejected, I Became a Neon God

I personally feel that the overall plot of the book is very smooth, but there may be too many female characters, and some characters may not contribute much to the plot. If they all join the harem, it may seem too watery. In addition, the plot in the early stage was a bit confusing, but it improved in the later stage. I personally think that the highlight of this book is the emotional interaction between the hero and the heroine, but the main emotional line is advanced too fast. I personally think it is better to add more words to the process of the heroines accepting each other, especially the plot of Shura Field. I hope that these aspects can be improved in the next book [Sending Hearts] I think everyone likes to see emotional interactions and sweetness in this type of book [Thinking]. There can be as few plots about the male protagonist's career and poor reception as possible. After all, I don't think people will enjoy watching this kind of plot. This may be the author's first time writing, and it's already very good. [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] Give me five stars, keep it up [Sending my heart]

I don't know what to say, but this is a book that can make me feel good. It has a good sense of life and I like it very much. I have only seen this utopian life in dreams and books.

It's a very comfortable book to read.

Yes, the feelings are very delicate

Very well written and very beautiful

There are a few minor issues, but I can still finish reading them if I pick them.

He has a unique personality. The protagonist has several girlfriends and is a bit of a scumbag. But, I take good care of them all. At present, I still have the same view on several girls. I don't have any preference for anyone [laughs]

Very nice, looks good to me anyway

Dream life, there is no disgusting plot, at least for now, it is even a bit Japanese and fresh.

One of the last few chapters is about us breaking up. Did we really break up? I haven't seen that yet, can anyone kindly tell me the ending [grievance]

It's fast paced and direct, which I like. The only fly in the ointment is that there are often typos and missing words, which can sometimes make you look confused.

Okay, come on, author

Okay, it's still better

Why is there no rating?

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

You boy, Haruki is finished

It's okay for this kind of light novel

It feels okay. Although it is unlikely in reality, it is a novel after all. It is very comfortable.

The plot is quite well written. It's better to have a bad ending on Tomatoes than The Eunuch. At least it has an ending.

Come on, author, the writing is very good and the characters are well drawn. Is this book almost finished?

Super sweet, with a customary romance

It feels pretty good. I'm going to give it a try before reading it, but I feel that the pace of the description is a bit fast. Thank you for the author! It's too fast. I'll go. I think it would be better if I wrote it more carefully and slower, and brothers in the harem should pay attention.