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This book is probably the only one that writes about teeth. It is very well written [love]. I hope the author will update it 10 times a day and not stop updating it. Come on! ! ! [Like][Like][Like] I haven't checked my scores for a few days. Why is it 5.4? It will be gone if this continues. The author should update it quickly! Improve the setting. By the way, where is the vampire in this book? After all, I think a lot of people hate that vampire (although I don't hate it that much). After finishing this, the score should be higher. If this continues, I will really send it! @

As an author, it's not too much to give yourself a favorable review, right? Actually, I wrote the first few chapters using a template based on the cool articles in Tomato Recommendations, and it also included a lot of personal life and my own opinions. But later, I found that the kind of pure mindless killing and exciting story was not what I wanted, and I also specially modified Bai Xinshuang's character to make her look less normal, but it must be a failure in the eyes of many people. I wanted to write something that was a little more real, not only something that could reflect some of the current situation, but at least something that could make others think. But maybe it's because I don't have enough writing skills, or maybe it's because most people don't choose to use their brains when reading. Many people may have started crazily commenting without even seeing what I wrote, but it doesn't matter. I can only say that the private goods I included are just this kind of thing. If you want to read a mindless and enjoyable article, then I probably can't satisfy you. My enlightenment articles may be different from those of most readers of Tomato. I first saw things like "Your Majesty Have My Life", and later came into contact with things like "Super Thriller Live", "Thriller Paradise" and "Trading Crime". Among them, "Trading Crime" and "Zhou Lin" impressed me the most. Of course, their author said it jumped, but that's normal. If I can hope to write the same thing as Teacher Three Days and Two Sleeps in this life, then I will be considered accomplished. Again, I don't want to write any mindless and cool articles. Hopefully I can remember this in the future too.

I hope the author can make the protagonist stronger, otherwise we will feel uncomfortable watching and being threatened every day.

It's okay, overall I can read it, but I feel that the character's personality has changed in a certain section (maybe due to the author's mood at the time), which is something that many authors experience. According to this setting, the subsequent abilities will be very messy. My suggestion is that the author should sort out the abilities and have a certain relationship with the plot. In this way, in the eyes of the readers, the author's protagonist is lucky (it can be obtained a few chapters in advance, dozens of chapters are a bit long, and it can be remembered without being abrupt). Various abilities should be unnecessary or less (do not want them all to be useful, just use them if you want to express randomness). Don't use the necessary ones just a few times at the time and rarely use them later. Then the protagonist is too lucky (in my opinion, the protagonist the author wants to express is not very lucky). That light is not that necessary (could it be used as a foreshadowing, or simply to brush the probability, and to suppress the current strength?), It will be a long time to use it later, and then the first level is awakened, and it is set to be more effective until the apocalypse.

Although it is a little better, it is one of the few bad books in Tomato, but the battle scenes can be made more intense.

If you can't stand this kind of decisive and indifferent person, then don't read this book. If you don't care for yourself, you will be destroyed by heaven and earth. The author has done a good job in this regard. I highly recommend it. I was wrong, I was wrong, stop scolding, stop scolding, brothers, I was sleeping. I kept turning on the music player later, but I didn't even hear it. I only listened to about a dozen songs, and then I fell asleep. Don't scold, don't scold, I was wrong.

It's okay. The subject matter of teeth is good. Overall, it's average. The battle of wits part is pretty good, but the writing and plot arrangements need to be improved. Then there's the emotional drama. It's like feeding me a bunch of defense. I hope it won't happen again. Finally, that white vampire must die.

So far, the chapter about meeting the vampire in Chapter 17 actually looks pretty good to me. It's quite graphic, which is good. I read a little bit about the secret realm chapters later on, but I don't quite understand them at the moment, and there's also a little bit missing. In fact, it doesn't matter if there is a female protagonist or not. If you can write a good heroine, then do it. If nothing else, the confrontation with the vampire made me feel really good. The system was indifferent, the protagonist had amnesia and was unable to think for himself, and the vampire woman was coercive and seductive. In the end, the protagonist relied on his own substitute Ya 1 to temporarily save himself. I liked this chapter very much and was very shocked. Very reasonable. A lot of holes have been dug, I hope they can be filled. Vampires know that the protagonist is a time traveler systematically, as long as the author can write it well. I recommend becoming the protagonist's most loyal "helper" (that is, a dog). Authors of vampires must spend chapters, otherwise they might as well not write about this character. This role is great. I don't really want her to die. This character can be used to promote the protagonist's growth. Well, the last thing is, you can absorb other people's opinions appropriately, but the book is written by you, the author, so it is best to have an outline. Come on author, I support you very much [blowing kiss][blowing kiss] Ahem, it's the system's inefficiency.

This book is okay. I'll use it as soon as I can read it. It's mainly for stand-ins [Chigua]

I think it's pretty good. Originally there were very few JOJO fans in Tomato, and this one is about Johnny. I think it's very good. Please don't stop updating, author. Please be considerate to the author. It's really hard to write Ya Si. Who wouldn't be able to make a roundabout move? What should I do after finishing Ya Si?

I quite like the substitute tooth.

It is recommended to give the first shot after Awakening Teeth 4 to the person named Bai.

After reading it, I personally feel that the author's imagination is very good and the world view is okay. The writing style is a little lacking, but it is definitely not as bad as other reviews said. The biggest highlight of this book is the imagination and the protagonist who is not invincible. After reading it, I personally feel that other reviews have a feeling that the protagonist must be invincible after reading too many cool novels every day. I haven't seen them talk about their growth experience at all.

It was okay. The relationship line was a bit sudden and didn't feel very good. Overall, it was much better later on. The fight in Chapter 60 was pretty good, and there were less poisonous points later on. Only the part where I pretended to be my boyfriend was a bit problematic. The comments said it was too poisonous? To be honest, I don't think it's very poisonous. Tomatoes are much more poisonous than this. I've been using tomatoes for two or three years and I've seen many more poisonous things than this. After all, I'm a new author. There is a problem with the settings, but the hole has not been filled yet. Let's take a look again [Thinking][Eating Melon]

This kind of game is particularly to my liking. The intensity control is very good, there are not so many so-called forbidden bloody contents, and most of them are the application of the protagonist's own abilities. Although the plug-ins are not weak, the protagonist's abilities are not reflected in the critical life and death crisis. Although the author can create a battle similar to JOJO in which evenly matched opponents each have their own merits, but if the way to obtain intermediate abilities is not "enough", the detailed effect will be very poor, and people who control powerful abilities should try to have enough highlights. Just like this score, although it is not straightforward enough It's a bit confusing, but it proves that the author has gone a long way. Especially readers who have just entered Tomato. Most of them are here to enjoy it. Just like when we see the protagonist's bit by bit efforts from the reader's perspective or know his cheats and then see his results, the effect is very good after digestion, but most people inside The character creation is too poor (it is very normal for a person who truly adheres to the principle of solution, and it is impossible to be unclear about some emotional exchanges. As long as the sense of edge is controlled, the enemy will not be established and the enemy will refuse to accept it. How come there will always be a sudden desperate situation). Every explanation The unreasonable parts at the end are also poisonous points. Looking at it later, this book is basically completely independent. As long as you don't read it, you won't have any impression. After all, when you come into the virtual world under external circumstances, you just want to watch it for fun, not to eat the knife, see the poisonous points, and leave suspense waiting for us to bite the hook. I don't know if the author's writing style was intentional or unintentional, but it did go a long way.

Come on, a vampire girl is really handsome, okay?

A super exciting book, I dare say that the battle of wits in it is the best among all jojo. (I have read that none of the jojo fans have a battle of wits) I wish [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

This book is really good The only thing I want to do now is to kill that vampire. In this case, the score will rise straight up.

It's so beautiful, why is it only rated 5.5? Give the author a heartfelt message directly

It's a good book, but the comment section is a bit uneasy.

Come on, it's a book that suits my taste.

Celebrate, a new JoJo is born. He will take the substitute messengers on the road to the world

It looks great, but can you write some auxiliary stand-ins for the protagonist?

The defense is so awesome [shy], for me, the system has a high sense of presence but basically no [what], and the female charm is very strange (female brat, yandere? Holy mother). In addition, it is okay for me [shy], in general, not bad, but for people who don't have Jojo feelings, it may be a little unacceptable [eating melon], just, come on, author, it is rare to have a sincere heart [sending heart]. [Praise]

Why is the rating so low?

The battle of wits is well written.

Good looking good looking good looking

Come on, the author is great

Looking forward to the strongest spear

I like this novel very much