A-Rank Talent? Do You Even Know the Value of the Strongest Spear?

This book is probably the only one that writes about teeth. It is very well written ❤️. I hope the author will update it 10 times a day and not stop updating it. Come on!!! 👍👍👍 I haven't checked my scores for a few days. Why is it 5.4? It will be gone if this continues. The author should update it quickly! Improve the setting. By the way, where is the vampire in this book? After all, I think a lot of people hate that vampire (although I don't hate it that much). After finishing this, the score should be higher. If this continues, I will really send it! @

As an author, it's not too much to give yourself a favorable review, right? Actually, I wrote the first few chapters using a template based on the cool articles in Tomato Recommendations, and it also included a lot of personal life and my own opinions. But later, I found that the kind of pure mindless killing and exciting story was not what I wanted, and I also specially modified Bai Xinshuang's character to make her look less normal, but it must be a failure in the eyes of many people. I wanted to write something that was a little more real, not only something that could reflect some of the current situation, but at least something that could make others think. But maybe it's because I don't have enough writing skills, or maybe it's because most people don't choose to use their brains when reading. Many people may have started crazily commenting without even seeing what I wrote, but it doesn't matter. I can only say that the private goods I included are just this kind of thing. If you want to read a mindless and enjoyable article, then I probably can't satisfy you. My enlightenment articles may be different from those of most readers of Tomato. I first saw things like "Your Majesty Have My Life", and later came into contact with things like "Super Thriller Live", "Thriller Paradise" and "Trading Crime". Among them, "Trading Crime" and "Zhou Lin" impressed me the most. Of course, their author said it jumped, but that's normal. If I can hope to write the same thing as Teacher Three Days and Two Sleeps in this life, then I will be considered accomplished. Again, I don't want to write any mindless and cool articles. Hopefully I can remember this in the future too.

I hope the author can make the protagonist stronger, otherwise we will feel uncomfortable watching and being threatened every day.

It's okay, overall I can read it, but I feel that the character's personality has changed in a certain section (maybe due to the author's mood at the time), which is something that many authors experience. According to this setting, the subsequent abilities will be very messy. My suggestion is that the author should sort out the abilities and have a certain relationship with the plot. In this way, in the eyes of the readers, the author's protagonist is lucky (it can be obtained a few chapters in advance, dozens of chapters are a bit long, and it can be remembered without being abrupt). Various abilities should be unnecessary or less (do not want them all to be useful, just use them if you want to express randomness). Don't use the necessary ones just a few times at the time and rarely use them later. Then the protagonist is too lucky (in my opinion, the protagonist the author wants to express is not very lucky). That light is not that necessary (could it be used as a foreshadowing, or simply to brush the probability, and to suppress the current strength?), It will be a long time to use it later, and then the first level is awakened, and it is set to be more effective until the apocalypse.

If you can't stand this kind of decisive and indifferent person, then don't read this book. If you don't care for yourself, you will be destroyed by heaven and earth. The author has done a good job in this regard. I highly recommend it. I was wrong, I was wrong, stop scolding, stop scolding, brothers, I was sleeping. I kept turning on the music player later, but I didn't even hear it. I only listened to about a dozen songs, and then I fell asleep. Don't scold, don't scold, I was wrong.

Although it is a little better, it is one of the few bad books in Tomato, but the battle scenes can be made more intense.

It's okay. The subject matter of teeth is good. Overall, it's average. The battle of wits part is pretty good, but the writing and plot arrangements need to be improved. Then there's the emotional drama. It's like feeding me a bunch of defense. I hope it won't happen again. Finally, that white vampire must die.

So far, the chapter about meeting the vampire in Chapter 17 actually looks pretty good to me. It's quite graphic, which is good. I read a little bit about the secret realm chapters later on, but I don't quite understand them at the moment, and there's also a little bit missing. In fact, it doesn't matter if there is a female protagonist or not. If you can write a good heroine, then do it. If nothing else, the confrontation with the vampire made me feel really good. The system was indifferent, the protagonist had amnesia and was unable to think for himself, and the vampire woman was coercive and seductive. In the end, the protagonist relied on his own substitute Ya 1 to temporarily save himself. I liked this chapter very much and was very shocked. Very reasonable. A lot of holes have been dug, I hope they can be filled. Vampires know that the protagonist is a time traveler systematically, as long as the author can write it well. I recommend becoming the protagonist's most loyal "helper" (that is, a dog). Authors of vampires must spend chapters, otherwise they might as well not write about this character. This role is great. I don't really want her to die. This character can be used to promote the protagonist's growth. Well, the last thing is, you can absorb other people's opinions appropriately, but the book is written by you, the author, so it is best to have an outline. Come on author, I support you very much 😘😘 Ahem, it's the system's inefficiency.

I think it's pretty good. Originally there were very few JOJO fans in Tomato, and this one is about Johnny. I think it's very good. Please don't stop updating, author. Please be considerate to the author. It's really hard to write Ya Si. Who wouldn't be able to make a roundabout move? What should I do after finishing Ya Si?

This book is okay. I'll use it as soon as I can read it. It's mainly for stand-ins [Chigua]