Dream Disaster

I just finished reading the first few chapters and it feels very good. The atmosphere creation and story rhythm are far superior to many newcomers. The place that feels like the icing on the cake is where it starts to be surrounded by monsters and ghostly female nurses. Some moderate chases and escapes can be added to further increase the tension and sense of immersion. I've seen Chapter 12. Personally, I feel that it may be that the protagonist's lack of participation in events and influence on the direction of the plot results in a lack of sense of involvement, which leads to the loss of readers. In the first 12 chapters, in addition to surviving, the protagonist did not show the courage, wisdom, etc. To actively escape the difficulty most of the time, and was just a passive participant. In some successful works with similar themes, the protagonist either showed courage in the early stage, relying on his mortal body to save the old, weak, sick and disabled from monsters, or even used environmental props to fight back against the odds. Or start various unparalleled ones early. In short, the level of participation is higher, and it is even the absolute main force in promoting the plot. My personal suggestion is to start with the female nurse and the monster, and add a tense and exciting chase scene, preferably with a counterattack. The first time you enter the dreamland set by Academician Qiao, you need to have some plug-in powers. As long as it is a temporary golden finger, you can bring the plot back to full circle at any time.

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It's great. It finally got me interested in reading novels. I started reading novels in the sixth grade and now in college, I have lost interest in many books at the beginning. This book is still good up to this point. I hope the author can maintain this level in subsequent chapters. If the quality drops quickly, many readers will probably give up [face covering]