Beast Control: the Barbaric Growth of Mine Slaves

There are not many poisonous points, and the author is also good at listening to readers' opinions. Although there are not too many ups and downs yet, the plot is well connected so far, and it is still very comfortable to watch. Come on, author, I hope it starts well and ends well

Very interesting, Yu Xiaoer feels super cuteớ ₃ờ, please update it quickly, I can't get enough [shy][shy]

Don't be misled by the name, the book is really good. It is best to add an introduction to the composition of the continent, professions, levels, evolution, coins, etc. On the title page. Although the introduction is interspersed in the middle of the book, I feel that it is better to introduce it on the title page. I read the comments that the name should be changed to Yuanli Continent, which is not recommended. If I hadn't read the latest chapter where the male protagonist passed through the space light curtain from Yuanli Continent to Fentian Continent while mining, I always understood that the world view of this novel is on Yuanli Continent. Secondly, the author could actually write more about mining, going to school, and entering Tianyan Sect. The experience during this period was too short. Just as he had just adapted to the current life, he was suddenly arranged for other things. Although things are unpredictable, I jump a little fast. The description of the male protagonist's own martial arts skills is a bit sparse. Just relying on big mushrooms to increase his vitality feels like it's almost nothing. The alchemist, puppet master, inscription master, and adventurer's guild can be written in more depth. Take the male protagonist's entry-level inscription master as an example. At present, it only highlights the expensiveness of the materials, and it feels like the experience and fun of becoming an inscription master. The writing of the big mushroom is very appetizing. This is a good comment. It is very cute. It can store energy, absorb toxins, detoxify, release poisons, explore, and share vision. Can you add lighting? The glowing mushrooms are really exciting. Overall, it is very good and has created a new system (I have not encountered this kind of system after reading so many books, maybe I am ignorant). A little opinion, I hope the author will not be misled by us picky readers and just be himself.

Whether it is the protagonist or the supporting role, they are all well portrayed. This book would be a good read if you put it in any home.

It's very flavorful, the rhythm is very good, the logic is rigorous, the plot is very interesting, and it's not awkward at all.

Non-toxic, non-toxic, peaceful and simple, with compact structure, appropriate rhythm and acceptable logic. I have read Chapter 30 so far, which is remarkable. The protagonist is gradually stepping onto a new level. I hope the author will have some small climaxes and some waves at the right time. The important thing is to write a wonderful life. The character of the protagonist must be changed and improved, and the labeling of the protagonist must be rejected. When the protagonist steps onto a new platform, the plot is pushed to a climax and summarizes the previous writing.

It's a very nice book! I don't know why the rating is so low. I didn't want to read it at first because of the low rating. But the introduction was very interesting, so I read it in one breath. It's just too little. Could it be that the author wrote too little, so readers gave it a low rating?

It's not nice to have a female protagonist. The mushrooms are so cute. It's a very interesting book! ! The writing doesn't have to be a novice, it's really beautiful! ! ! It's just that the author is too slow to update. If you ask me, I would say ten updates a day.

In fact, the author is very good! He updates diligently and responds very diligently. At least he can write articles and novels! I have read novels for more than 20 years and have never written a novel [I almost cried] This book is written relatively slowly, and it is not the explosive character setting at the beginning. Although I haven't finished reading it, the author responded to me in a big way [smile] So I give it ten points and recommend everyone to read it [smile] To be honest, your low rating has a lot to do with the title of this book! No one reads it! The block is written to 200,000, so go and change the name. And have you thought about the name you want to change? Do you want to send it out for everyone to see?

The new theme is not bad, but the plot after the escape is not interesting for some reason (personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it). But the most important issue is the speed of the update! ! ! !

It's a novel with a very good look and feel. Most of Tomato's novels can basically dissuade people from the beginning. The writing style is also at the level of a primary school student, but this writing style is acceptable. The storyline is also good and deserves high marks.

This is my first time reading a book of this type, very interesting. The content is interesting and reasonable, the protagonist has a strong personality and behaves appropriately; the companions are cute and hard-working, have low IQ and have a weak temper, but their personalities are pretty good and difficult to describe. It is worth recommending. By the way, the title of the book is also interesting.

It's very beautiful. Anyone who wants to write his own novels in the future should come and learn from it.

It's good to read it in one sitting. I haven't seen a book with such novel themes in a long time.

It's a good book, but every time the protagonist upgrades and gains strength, it's like going through a catastrophe. He narrowly escapes death, which makes me really uncomfortable. [Laughing awkwardly] If he hadn't known that he had the halo of the protagonist and the power of the author, he would have died a long time ago. I feel a little sorry for this guy. He is so good, but he is worse than the protagonists of many sadistic novels. [Laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying] Yu Xiaoer, the mushroom spirit, I thought was quite cute at first, but as I progressed, I felt less and less like him. His personality was always like that of a naughty kid who hadn't grown up at all. [Eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

Coming from the wasteland, the wasteland is really beautiful! [Please update] This book is actually quite good. It has a bland + micro-adventure tone, but the level issue has not been dealt with well. After writing 300 chapters, it is still only a small level. However, there are quite a lot of good things in hand. People at the same level and people at different levels can enjoy it. I may step on the protagonist, but I can endure it a few times, but it feels frustrating to keep stepping on me. Sometimes I can't wait for the counterattack later, and I don't want to read anymore. I'm just expressing my opinion here, and I look forward to better stories from the author [currently in development]

See Chapter 292. Travel through the accompanying beast-control flow. The overall storyline is relatively coherent and reasonable. The protagonist's character is not clear enough, he is stubborn and cruel, and he is cruel and ruthless. It's not about friendship, either. There are too many elements that the author wants to write about, and I feel that the proportion of pen and ink is not well distributed. The writing is quite interesting. In Tomato, the level of this novel is already acceptable. Come on, author! Don't be a rogue when reading, just send a message and comment.

The story is novel and worth reading. Wuliangshan Xuanleizhuliu

It is a very comfortable book to read, and the subject matter is relatively new. The biggest disadvantage is that the update is too slow, which easily loses popularity, and then affects the author's enthusiasm for writing. Finally, eunuch, I hope the author will be more diligent and focused, and finish writing a book first before diverting his energy.

It's a good book. The plot is relatively dull at first, but the casual plot becomes much better, but there are many problems: 1. Focus: The author has written about many aspects, such as inscriptions, puppets, beast control, farming, cultivation, and sparse but not refined. Basically, it has a slight improvement and then stops. The best is beast control, followed by inscriptions. I feel that the author's thinking is very jumpy. 2. It's refreshing: Continuing from the first point, there are too many things to write about. Farming, planting, and then disappearing. I can't experience the joy of harvest, which is not satisfying. Puppet, not in progress yet, no evaluation. The title of the book "Beast Controlling" is the most exciting thing, but it is too free (it feels like removing the protagonist and just writing "Beast Controlling"). It feels like "Beast Controlling" is the protagonist, and the protagonist is a supporting role. In cultivation, it has been several years since I was born, and my Yuanli has not yet broken through to become a hero, and now I have started cultivating immortality again (눈_눈). The awakening of my magical power was not successful. I was blind, but not completely blind. The effect was not small, but I was unhappy because after so much experience, the awakened magical power was not very good and it was uncomfortable (it felt like it was just to change the map). 3. Connection: The plot is too jumpy. I just opened the map and got a little better. Then I changed the map. Then I felt that the protagonist was too unlucky and always had accidents. It was too ordinary. To sum up: there are probably only so many opinions, and I still recommend reading it. The comment section said that the author is writing more books, and it would be great if he could rewrite another book.

It looks good, please write faster! ! ! ! ! The plot is very innovative, really good, really good!

Unique plot, worth watching

It's good-looking. I have grown and progressed little by little with my own efforts. I like it very much. It feels a bit like the style of "The Story of a Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality". The more novels like this, the better. This is my personal opinion and deserves five-star praise!

It's very interesting, has foreshadowing and a very twisty plot. Whenever I think Yu Yang can stabilize, he will run a new map again. It's like we don't know which one will come first tomorrow. Yu Yang was digging and said that he would dig a good house for himself, but he was given one before he could dig it. He said that he would save a lot of things for the winter. Before he could save enough, he traveled to another world. He planned to study hard with his senior brothers and form a team. He also bought a house near the school and planted vegetables in the house. He wanted to stabilize and was found to have dropped out of school. If you want to make more money during the beast tide, you are lame. Just like our lives, we have already thought about how to take a path and have our own plans, but various things will always break our original plans. Although it will always be broken when life wants to be stable, it will slowly develop in a good direction. The outstanding thing about Yu Yang is that no matter what happens, he will adjust as soon as possible and adapt without complaining. No matter what impact these things have on his life plan, whether it is good or bad, he will be a little disappointed, but he does not blame himself, nor complain that all his previous efforts have been in vain. I really like the character of the protagonist, as well as the supporting character. The characterization is also very good, relatively speaking, they are more fleshed out, they are not just good guys or bad guys, they are not so facially painted, and they are good-looking.

The plot settings are good, but the author may be a novice. He has a good framework and theme, but he does not use this framework to its due height. The plot goes by a little too fast, and some transitions are too abrupt. Some settings also need to be written clearly, so that readers will have a good reading experience. This book has great potential, and similarly, there is still a lot of room for improvement. It seems that the author is very diligent in replying, and most of the comments are liked. Do you have some free time? I hope that the number of words in each chapter can be raised to two thousand. The number of words in the thousands is like a condensed essence. It seems that the author does not have an outline. I hope he can find time to make an outline. This will make writing smoother and increase the number of words in each chapter. In this way, the author will be happy to write and the readers will be happy to read. Thank you. I believe the author can write better.

The protagonist in the book is very weak at the beginning. He is betrayed by his father and stepmother. He works hard to shrink himself and hide himself, and slowly begins to stand out. No one is born strong. He has experienced despair and can only rely on his own efforts. The subject matter is very novel. I like this style very much, but some places are a bit messy. There are some problems with the outline.

The first half is very exciting. It can be said to be a new breakthrough among fantasy novels. The design of the companion beast is very creative. It's a pity that in the middle of writing, it was changed to go to cultivate immortality? And then... Well, it's a pity. If the author continues to create according to the original idea, he might be able to create a richer world than "Tang Jia San Shao"'s "Douluo Dalu". What's more, Douluo's advantage is that its ideas are novel and innovative, but the author's writing skills are actually average. The author's writing skills in this novel are still very good. It would be a pity to change his thinking halfway through writing.

It's really good-looking. This author really listens to advice. He will really change things that don't meet the readers' opinions. The storyline is very full and very good-looking.

The content is enriching. A new fantasy system was created. I think it's very personal. None of the characters are thoughtlessly set up, and the logic is clear. It can be said to be a breath of fresh air for tomatoes. It's just slower, overall it's good

It's very good, every time you jump, it's like updating the map. The feeling is all different, very unexpected (I originally thought that I would continue to develop in school since I left the mine). Now that I see the update being captured by the Han clan, I personally like it.