After Turning into a Girl, I Resolve to Become a Cute Girl

It looks good (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, not bad, but the development is a bit fast. It would be better to write more about the relationship between Nobao and Lin Jimeng, which would be more interesting. Of course, this is just my personal subjective point of view. According to the principle of rapid development, the author can describe more of the plot of "Sese" in big letters, which will also be interesting. Do you understand what I mean?

It's pretty good. Although the emotions of the characters are not delicate and the chapter transitions are not in place, I think the writing by a newbie is already great, because when you actually write it, you will know how difficult it is to really get into it. You need to understand the differences between the sexes, whether it is personality or emotion, and you also need to consider the connection between the two. If you don't have a psychotic experience when writing, you can't write the real feeling. Of course, I didn't mean it like that. It's okay for the author to understand, I just expressed my feelings. I think speed-reading novels can be used as appetizers (or snacks) (I just finished reading a very sharp transsexual novel😭). That novel was too emotional and I felt a little bored, so I think this novel is a good way to relieve the boredom and is very refreshing. Also, come on, author, if you really want to write beautifully, you still cannot do without life observation and your own experience😏😏😏

Group leader, you can create a group. For the novels I read before, the authors all created a fan group. You can also try it.

Keep up the good work and hope it doesn't end badly.

Is this book okay...

Newbie encouragement Keep up the good work

It's okay, but it's a little too fast. This is the fastest I've ever seen.

Come on, come on, it's a little short