Thanks for the Invitation************

Finally, there is a novel where you don't have to confront Hongjun. The protagonist's Taoist heart is very down-to-earth, unlike other time-travelers who think about things all day long.

Poisonous points (in my personal opinion): 1. The great horror when you want to take the creation of Qinglian (the one who escaped) (I think you may have written the great horror because you wanted to leave him to Sanqing as a spiritual treasure for enlightenment) 2. That great disciple has no respect for his master at all (you may want to write about the dragon's character who likes treasures, but respecting his master and his teachings is the basic thing) 3. Tai Chi diagram restrains the space (this is actually nothing to me, it is innovative) 4. I realized the Hunyuan Realm three times through my own corpse (you may want to distinguish destiny and practice, but you should distinguish it clearly when writing so that readers can see it) 5. I will die for the human race and forever suppress the Fire Cloud Cave (To be honest, I have never known a friend with such dedication. Most ordinary people should not have such courage. Of course, it may be that the environment in the circle I am in is not good) I haven't read it since. I personally don't like it. Of course, this is my idea. Everyone likes different styles. I'm just talking about my opinion, but I still gave it five stars ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ because as long as you write a book, it is worth encouraging. After all, the Tomato environment is not very good. I still hope that Tomato can have more authors and more works. Books always get better as they are written, and writing skills will improve. Goodbye

To be honest, this is different from normal prehistoric fan fiction, especially in the stage of becoming a god. Although many people don't like it, I like it very much, because it is the only novel I have read for so long that is very close to the normal model of prehistoric times. What is the best thing about it here? He calculates cause and effect here, and calculates fate. For example, on Sanxian Island, he took one because the abbot was his teacher's dojo. Two of them didn't move. Besides, the other novels of Grade 24 Creation Qinglian were simply pulled out, or they were divided and collected. He didn't want any of them. Then the Witch Sword was written very well at that stage. It didn't look like a normal novel. He just killed the monsters here and there. Without him, it was just a state of semi-ignorance. I can control it, but I can't. I don't care. It is true that small things can be changed and big things cannot be changed.

Let me guess, did you paste it directly from the list of gods, or did you add some of your own ideas? Well, what the hell is that chat group of yours? Why create so many worlds for the prehistoric world? Are you a low-end prehistoric person? And I'm really convinced. Do you know what the Chaos Clock is? That has the ability to suppress all the heavens and worlds. You have made the prehistoric world so low-end. Let's talk, I don't even feel that the low-end prehistoric world is the limit of this prehistoric world. You should be the high-end prehistoric world. Damn, you are getting more and more low-end now. The emperor who broke the sky seems not even an immortal. You, the main god, can only be one in other prehistoric places, Taiyi!

I have been a bookworm for more than ten years and have read a lot of books. I have read a lot of the Prehistoric series. I gave up after reading it and did not put it in my bookshelf. This book is the only Prehistoric book that I am still chasing. I give it a five-star review and hope that the author will work hard [like]

By the way, thank you for the invitation. Isn't it a chat group? There is no chat group after more than 100 chapters. Is it the wrong name? It's pretty cool, but I still like the chat group.

I have finished reading the Honghuang novels that I can still read. The author is prolific, the author, he really makes me cry to death.

The writing style of this book is very capable, the plot is not draggy, and it looks pretty good.

I like some of the plot logic and the writing style is also good. What fantasy novels need most is the writing power to support the entire structure. So far, the writer has done a pretty good job.

Everything is fine, except that the apprentice the protagonist takes is a bit annoying The intelligence reduction is too serious, especially for Lao Tzu and Yuan Shi. The monsters and monsters really insult the IQ. And, after seeing the latest chapter, the protagonist accepted Daji as his apprentice. Alas, except for Daji's beauty, I really can't think of any reason for the protagonist to accept her as his apprentice.

Why did Zhen Yuanzi exist so early, the legendary ancestor of the earth immortals? However, the two of them still did not confront him head-on, and both had their own scruples.

Oh my god, this cultural treasure is actually the Chaos Bead, so it's worth spending so much money! The male protagonist just transformed into chaos, even Pangu couldn't handle it!

It turns out that Styx chose the wrong direction in his previous life. He felt that it was not easy for him to become a Daluo Jinxian. There are so many powerful people in this era.

After reading this article, I learned about a lot of gods from ancient times, hahaha. I wasn't too sure about the setting of the prehistoric era...

It's so funny, I like it [please update] [cry with laughter] [cry with laughter]

Not bad, come on! I like no heroine very much

It's not a noob at all, and the writing style is very novel. I was really surprised when I clicked on it and saw this article. It's very top-notch!

What a huge worldview! It's simply breathtaking! I have to admire the imagination of fantasy writers. There are really a lot of new things to see.

The plot is very attractive and the setting is interesting. I want to know the future development.

It's so fantasy and picturesque, the charm of fantasy novels is really great, and the traditional oriental stories are very interesting.

Many of the details and foreshadowing in it are quite interesting, haha, it seems like you are really enjoying it.

The writer is very imaginative. Many of the plots are very novel and graphic. He is so good at writing.

The rhythm is really good and it's progressive. I've always liked this kind of oriental fantasy writing!

It's so exciting, I feel nervous for the protagonist, and the fighting scenes are very immersive! Really nice to look at!

It's not bad. How can I say it? The Chaos Beads can block the secrets of heaven. Who can find out if the Green Lotus of Fortune is taken away? If the Chaos Beads can be discovered, can they still hide the secrets of heaven?

The other saints are a bit funny [laughing evilly]

Not bad but a bit short

Very nice! It just feels a little awkward not to fight or grab. Also, I'm curious if there is a female protagonist?

I still like this kind of novel with no heroine in the plot, no romance, and it's great to focus on upgrading and pursuing a career!

Give it five stars, after all, you can't blind me alone!