Western Fantasy: Bringing a Little Time-Travel Shock to Another World

In the early stage, it had the meaning of a group portrait, and many interesting characters appeared. In the middle stage, it suddenly turned into a (pseudo) 🐒 palace. Judging from the attitude of the protagonist, it probably also catalyzed the relationship between the protagonist and the elf maid. It's really not very good as a territory-building text, but as a light novel it's actually very good. The plot-driven content relies heavily on the bonds and emotional relationships of various people. It's still very enjoyable to read.

What can I say about this so far? First of all, it is interesting because it is written by this hero, but I feel that there is no role for it. Generally speaking, I don't see the high point of this point. It only gives the protagonist a way to start. In addition, I don't know whether it is because of the description or because of something else. It has a kind of disconnected feeling [shock], and it is indeed a bit delayed. However, it is still a book that I really like. Five stars encourage me to keep reading~

How should I put it, the overall feeling is quite comfortable to read, but occasionally there are a few paragraphs that feel a bit stiff and not particularly integrated. It's really not easy for a new author to write like this. I support the author's five-star praise.

I rely on this book to be really good

Very good, just a little short

It's been so long with so few people reading it. You've really worked hard, the author. [Crying] It's a pretty good book. Why doesn't anyone read it?

The writing is okay, but sometimes the protagonist seems a little aggrieved.

I don't see this type very often, so I'd like to encourage you with five stars.

I think this book is very good. Good luck to the author.

I don't know why the score is so low. The story is good and not too poisonous. It is much better than those on the rankings. This score is a bit low.

It's really beautiful. I finished reading it in one sitting.

Come on, the subject matter is good

Chapter 153 Why is it missing?

Come on, come on, come on

Encouraging, but please change it because it affects the perception too much.

Excited heart, trembling hands, looking at the shit yellow button

I'm curious, does the name Hetty come from a descendant of an old rice dumpling? [Thinking]

This book has shortcomings, but overall it's not bad. I hope people who are interested can read it.

Okay, it's rare to find one that suits your taste.

I feel like I could make the protagonist a little more powerful, a little aggrieved, and a little tight, but the plot is not exciting and relaxing, so it's hard to tighten up. Maybe it's also a matter of personal preference. Tie Tie

Hold it high, good-looking books should be reviewed, the basic logic is online, the settings are laid out step by step, excellent works

Good looking. I like farming.

Rare Western Fantasy Book

It's nice to look at, but there are not many people there.

I have read Chapter 71 so far. Why do the subordinates have to hide it when the lord comes back? I can't stand it anymore. (σ;*Д*)σDeath penalty!

It looked okay, but the plot at the front was a bit rushed.

Not bad, but some places feel unreasonable

Yes, there are very few books that I can read.

Good story, but a little lacking

Not bad. It's rare to find a good book. I hope it can do some emotional conditioning. For reference, let go of that witch.