Give Up*************

I feel like I have to post a good review because if I don't, I'm afraid it will be discontinued! The heroine is very good at the moment, it would be better if she was more hard-hearted and cautious in times of trouble.

The plot of the story is wonderful, one link after another, the content is well-organized, has a beginning and an end, and is very interesting to read. The characters are rich and three-dimensional. I hope the author will continue to work hard. Finally, I hope that Dada will get better soon. 💪

I like it so much that I can't stop. The male protagonist in the author's novel will not insist on loving the evil original heroine without any brain. It's really cool to see the heroine's wretched development.

I'm quite optimistic about it. I hope it won't be censored and there won't be any emotional drama at all.

It's really good to read. Anyway, I like it very much. I hope the author will continue to write without CP in the future, because many people who have CP will not write very good books in the end. If this book has CP, I personally feel that it will deviate from him. If these articles that have been written have emotional lines, how can they not have men in their hearts? Where is the god of nature who draws his sword?

I can only say that some content can really be seen by me without paying? Why! ! ! ! ! ! Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong...

Super pretty! Come on, author!

I think it's pretty good. No wonder the author hasn't updated it. The writing style is also good. Although it's not a cool novel and the heroine is not very capable, the content is not the same. I think it's quite attractive. I can't understand the kind of article where people would use dozens of words to describe the beauty of the hero and heroine when they meet each other, and even the fight scenes would be described like a hawk catching a chicken. A group of people would comment on the article and comment on it. This kind of article is full of content and not nonsense, but it is so unbearable. It's the kind of love-love where the content is childish but the medicine is not changed. If the female protagonist can win with a beautiful woman in a prosperous age, can it be called good-looking? The author is looking forward to your update. It is much better than those articles that just say that the heroine is great but cannot write that kind of power and are a lot of nonsense.

Author, I really beg you, can you, can you not have cp, there is no man in your heart, draw your sword and be a god of nature, you must have no cp, and don't have an affair with other boys, can it, can you do it [grievance] [almost crying] [crying]

The love ties have obviously been cut off. Why are you still entangled with so many boys? And the novel doesn't say there is a CP. And the updates are a bit slow. I hope the author will work hard and update it soon.

🍅It's a very good book, the kind that can be read in one go. The character setting is really earthy and endearing. It makes me happy. I like to see the twisted and perverted side of human nature. The story framework is set from the beginning, so you won't lose money if you invest in it. The plot is produced with high quality and the characters are delicately portrayed, showing not only truth, goodness and beauty, but also ugliness and evil. The first book with a strong conscience is really well written. It makes people reluctant to rush for more updates. I hope the author will give full play to his intelligence and lead the dogs to see a wider world. Create quality products with ingenuity. [Love][love]

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It's okay. It's quite interesting. I read it in one go and catch up on it. There are some uncomfortable plots in some cases. The original heroine was quite bad, but the current heroine is not very smart, she has an average IQ, but she doesn't have the love brain as before.

I still really like Jun Letian... I hope they can encourage each other to advance in their cultivation of immortality, and the interaction between happy enemies is still very cute. Hahaha, I hope there will be a pair of CPs but not the kind where love is a life-or-death struggle. I hope the little snake will not die because of protecting her in the later period. The mother's secret and the father's secret must be novel, and it cannot be the kind of proud man who elopes and then one of them dies while exploring the secret realm... Don't write amnesia jokes! Too many people have written it and I'm tired of it, so please cheer up! This book will nourish you haha 😄 There should be more chapters on cultivation! Maybe she is coding in a secret realm? The heroine must have a motto, her belief, her ambition, otherwise her future success will look awkward. Anyway, I hope she is a talented girl who practices down-to-earth, and will not be proud just because she has a fused spiritual root. The setting about the fusion of spiritual roots is very special, but there is no detailed description, and it is not very clear. Why does the fire energy suddenly appear to be in conflict with the fox's energy? And then there is the golden elixir? Most of the online articles on cultivating immortals nowadays are about the pursuit of rapid promotion.

In some places, it does seem that the heroine's IQ is a bit low, but it is very real. However, I have to say that it is better to close the comment area when reading the article. There are a lot of people who teach the heroine how to do things, but they do not look at the actual situation of the heroine when they say it. It is really annoying. It is a very real article. It is not the kind of article that feels like the previous life and this life are not the same person at all. Many people in the comment section expressed the feeling that strong women and cool literary styles are more suitable. By the way, I feel sorry for Little White Snake. She is simply beautiful, strong and miserable. It only hurts for a second. I really like the beautiful, strong and miserable character. But unfortunately, the damage has been done. Only the heroine is qualified to say forgiveness. But I still hope that the heroine can know the reason sooner. I just want to say that in the end, the heroine is still the author's own daughter. Let her become stronger.

The author's writing style is very good, but the heroine is a little overconfident and the characterization is somewhat lacking. Maybe I have read too many cool articles recently, so I have to adjust it myself. Now that the rating is so low, I am afraid that the author will stop updating it, so I support the author greatly with five stars. Come on, I believe the rating of this book will get higher and higher! Also, I have a big request: there should be no male protagonist, let the female goose be beautiful alone!

It's a great book. I read it as soon as I read it. I wonder if the heroine's love will come out later? I feel like someone has been paying for it over and over again. The heroine just cut off the love thread, not the love. Will she start a harem in the future? What are the three red lines used for?

How do I feel, did everyone like the dead senior sister who was the original heroine before, but Yan Yixiao forcibly became the heroine, and then the plot was forcibly changed by her. Now everyone has a vague impression of the original heroine, and now this Miao Miao is that the original heroine's soul has traveled through it but she has lost her memory. God asked her to come back to modify the plot and return to the previous plot line.

Come on, go, go, go! ! ! ! I'm very curious why some books at 9:00 are not that good, but those at 7:00 and 8:00 have some better books than those at 9:00.

It's very interesting, but the author is too slow to update. It makes me scratch my head. If it doesn't update, I will be anxious to death.

It's not as bad as other reviews say, it's quite novel and refreshing.

I saw a book similar to this one

I originally thought it was a book with a cliched plot, but as I read it slowly I found that the author's writing is delicate. The subsequent plot really poked me for some reason. The parts that should be hurt were not spared because of the halo of the heroine. The effect of making a smile is also immediate. The plot does not drag or skip. I really like it.

Big cheers for the author!

Very nice book

Like it very much! ! ! Big cheers for the author! ! ! 😍😍😍

Come on, update quickly. It would be best if Yan Yixiao died. The writing here is very good. Don't worry, it's strange that Yan Yixiao didn't die later because it's really impossible for Yan Yixiao to be alive. I don't know what will be said later.

Why! Why! ! Why! ! ! When the heroine broke up with that guy, she didn't get back the resources she gave him [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying]

It seems a bit frustrating in the early stage, and I don't know what will happen later, but please hurry up and make the heroine stronger (-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩___-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩)

I love this book so much. It's just that the heroine's face is so cruel and she smiles so much that it makes her unhappy [staring] and she must be full of stars [laughing awkwardly]