被退婚后，我的诗仙身份曝光了

Write down my personal opinions. If you don't like it, please don't comment. Thank you. The pace of this book is fast, but that is also what happens later. The early stage is very long, and the seemingly fragmented content is actually full of details that echo and reverse the plot of dozens of chapters later. The main author pays too little attention to the matching of modern language and ancient background. For example, the past life identity setting of Taekwondo and Diamond King is not in line with everyone's taste and the development of the subsequent plot. After all, Diamond King Wu Ke doesn't feel that he has such a profound cultural background (I personally don't know what everyone thinks when I hear the stereotype of Wang Laowu). Also, the long flow of the love line is very well written, but the generation and burst of feelings are really hard to understand. I really don't know how to like each other, but it does not affect the writing and plot foreshadowing. The process is well written, and the beginning... Is not bad, right? Right? Right, author? I hope you can continue to work hard. I like your book style very much. The setting can be strengthened. The image and emotional description of the characters have obviously improved as the plot progresses. Come on!

This book is really well written. I think it is no worse than Snow in the Snow, Sword Comes, and Young Songs. The author is awesome. I haven't read such a good book in a long time. I stayed up three nights to read it in one go. I couldn't stop at all. The writing is really good. The rating is not the highest, but the writing is really good... You must read it. It is one of the top five books among hundreds of books I have read in the past three years. I must support the author.

This is one of the best books I have read for more than 20 years. With my picky eyes, this book must be rated 9.8. I am not a junkie, but it is really good. Whether it is emotions or characterization, the descriptions are very exciting. The language is concise and concise. The author's writing skills are really good. Don't leave it unfinished. This is my opinion.

The plot has ups and downs, it's really good

This book is very good. Don't be fooled by the rating. In short, this book is one of the few good books I have read on Tomato. Please be patient and take a look at it. I'll say it's very good [like][like][please update]

This is a rare good book. It has ups and downs, the twists and turns of the story are mind-blowing, and the writing is delicate and smooth. I think the only shortcoming is that the title of the book is a bit lagging. I suggest the author consider changing the title.

Starting from tomorrow, we will update three times a day to make up for the previous interruption! This is what I would like to see.

I have caught up with the latest chapter so far. The writing is good and the plot is compact. The decoration may be more neat. There are many holes in the plot. This hole is only dug without reminders. Maybe it can be improved. Overall it is worth reading.

It's worth reading. I read through the entire novel and learned a lot of poetry. The lyrics are clearly expressed, but there are too few female protagonists.

The constant reversals, unexpected plots, and everyone's psychological game are all very well portrayed. There are details between the lines. I personally feel that it is really good. I hope the author will continue to work hard and maintain this quality and continue writing. Come on! (Two chapters a day is so little, it's not enough to read)

The plot is compact and makes people want to stop [Like]

The writing is very good, but the updates are so slow. Two hours a day is more grinding. Do you know how many shovels and blades people like Sanshu and Fenghuo are waiting for? None of the donkeys in the production team dare to take a break like you. Update soon There are two chapters every day, and you still need to take a breather while drinking water?

It's a good book, I hope the transition won't be too fast!

The writing is good. Just hugging this woman and saving another woman. How do you get through this hurdle in your heart? There is no dedicated author. You can mess around, but you can't say it is true love. I still like the style of Han Li, a mortal who cultivates immortality. He only loves one person in ten thousand years [Thoughts]

It's very good😁, it has a sense of mystery, but it lacks a little bit of blood. It always feels very mysterious and vague, but it is explained below that it has suspense, but it lacks a little charm. The overall feeling is still very good

The author is extremely talented, knowledgeable, and has a solid foundation of writing. The article's language is concise and the details are rich enough to withstand scrutiny. The characters and scenes are expressed delicately and softly, and the plot's ups and downs of thoughts are exciting. I was so moved that I cried once and was shocked once. I was confused twice. I hope the author will take care of himself and continue to update without compromising his health. [Exploration] Good book, worth reading.

I originally wanted to read a cool novel, but instead I saw a magnificent scroll of fictional history, turbulent politics, unforgettable love, relaxed and interesting friendships, an awesome literary atmosphere, wonderful Jianghu stories, CPU-blasting mysteries, and passionate war scenes. All these made me unable to extricate myself. Tell the truth, get in the car.

Although it is very similar to Qing Yu Nian, it is very interesting to watch. After all, there aren't many novels that don't require much thinking and are not straightforward.

It looks like Fan Xian, it's very nice, I'm looking forward to the follow-up content, but I have to keep it up [laughter]

It is really good-looking and comfortable to read. It is not like those NT cool articles. This kind of twists and turns is very interesting. I hope there will be more articles like this in the future. I've seen Zhouzhuang, and I hope it won't end badly. It would be great if I changed it into a TV series after writing it, and the actors and the changed script were better. (There are some minor flaws in some places. I hope the author can learn from experience and avoid superfluous parts)

It is a good book that is delayed by the title. The writing is very good and it is very beautiful. I will give it a rating of 9.5 Or above. If we talk about shortcomings, there is only one point. For others, the plot is a bit riddle and obscure, and the foreshadowing is relatively long, so it needs to be read carefully. Some comments say that it has the style of Gu Long, and I think the writing is very poetic.

The author's writing style is very good. Whether it is the description of the scenery or the characters, he wrote it deeply in my heart.

I don't know how to evaluate it with gorgeous words, but I feel that the story logic is very good, and it contains all kinds of human feelings and normal things in the world, which can be pondered. It draws lessons from the good poems and lyrics of the ancients to improve the quality of the story. The character structure is preset with far-reaching thoughts, and the writing style makes people willing to follow the development of the story and read in depth, and will not give up easily. Reading is meant to be a pastime. It would be better if you can never give up. [Laughing] After all, reading is just a part of life. There are more things to do, and we do them hard and under pressure. [Eat melon] [Eat melon] Relax! So the reading environment is very important! While being attracted by the storyline, reviewing good poems and lyrics is also progress! [Thinking][thinking][making faces]

To be honest, the plot content of this novel is worthy of recognition. Although there are occasional small flaws in the process, I think it is difficult to avoid it after all. After all, no gold is pure and no one is perfect! It's not as unbearable as some friends say, right? The main reason is that everyone has different ideas and concepts, and the reason why they have different opinions later... Compared with many bad novels on the Internet, this is already a relatively perfect plot. It took me so long to write a novel intermittently, and I was so impressed! If you didn't think the content was decent, you wouldn't be pursuing it even if you paid me a salary every day.

It's a bit cliché at the beginning, but from the middle on it becomes more unique and interesting. The plots are intertwined, and the author listens to his advice (don't write if the audience doesn't like it, newbies will know after reading it) It is not the kind of particularly obscure writing that makes people look stiff and have no desire to continue reading. It is suitable for both refined and popular tastes, with lots of laughs, but without losing all kinds of elegant words and styles. The author is a talented person. From the beginning of reading hundreds of chapters to catching up on one or two chapters every day, the plot is really addictive. There is a little foreshadowing at the end of almost every day, which attracts me to watch new plot developments the next day.

Suggestions to the author: 1. The writing style is good, but it is ancient prose after all, so don't include too many modern words, as this can easily lead to drama. 2. There can be more emotional scenes in classical Chinese, but the rhythm must be grasped. 3. There are also some small details. If you can improve them, you will be considered a master of ancient Chinese in Tomato.

It's okay. It's just that the main storyline is too cookie-cutter. You should add your own ideas to it. In fact, there are a lot of things you can play with. Use your imagination. You don't have to borrow other people's articles. You can consider some storylines in the game.

The plot has ups and downs. Although it is an old story about time travel, it lacks many cheat adventures and has more fireworks in the world; it lacks some romance and has more feelings about family and country. The quotation of poems is not obtrusive in the plot. Although the history is fictitious and it escapes the times, it still shines with the spiritual brilliance of our nation. Perhaps this is the unique charm of Chinese culture that has the same origin!

It just feels good, at least it is more thoughtful than those pure martial arts fantasy novels that travel through ancient times, especially the discussion and reflection on the development and governance concepts of a society, and better than those simple time-travel novels that directly transfer modern technology to ancient times.

There are many ancient costumes during this period, and I personally feel that they are the most comfortable and not out of tune. There is no exaggeration in the language and tone. It is still very funny in the middle period, but it is a bit brain-burning in the later period. It is much better than the others. After all, the other ones can only be read at the beginning. This one can be followed up.