
转职台前惊坐起,魔神竟是我自己
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Explore more →Has Tomato Changed a Group of Authors? I Feel Like There Are a Lot of New Books with Really Good Writing!
I hope it's a new book that has just been completed recently, as long as the writing is good! ! !
Pure Invincibility (Mirror Order Exceeds the Limit of the Universe)
Funny + Invincible + Complete
Looking for a Horror Novel, the Scarier the Better, No Female Protagonist! ! !
Not too long
Campus Awakening Superpowers Don't Hidden Strength
Book shortage
Capturing Bamboo Shoots + Doing Nothing + Daily Life + Hilarious + Spiritual Energy Recovery
Online Gaming Ceiling
With more than ten years of experience as a netizen, I recommend this book
A Game Account Makes All Internet Masters Tremble
The Spiritual Energy Is Revived, the College Entrance Examination Is Competed by the Four Major Colleges, the Novel
A novel about the revival of spiritual energy and the competition for the college entrance examination by the four major colleges.
The Male Protagonist Usually Smiles and Laughs, but When It Comes to Danger, He Draws His Sword and Cuts the Sky.
Is There Any Book That Can Increase a Hundred Times, a Thousand Times or Even ∞?
Grateful
A Good Finished Book, Male Channel
None
Urban Superpower + Academy + Daily Life + High-Energy Explosive Battle (Please Be Spicy😭
By the way, don't be systematic, don't be systematic, don't be systematic (say important things three times)
I've Recently Become Obsessed with the Awakening Genre. I Hope You All Can Help Me Look for It.
Universal Job Change + Hidden Profession
Recently, I have become obsessed with Western fantasy magic. Please get your books😁😁😁
The Protagonist Is a Big Luo Jinxian, and Was Found by the Survival Game
It's better to have more words!
Looking for Academic Novels and Testing Your Talent at the Beginning
Just awesome
Take Stock of the "Miracle" Talents of the Law of Cause and Effect
Emulators or other things, as long as they are good books, please bring them to me ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)✧
Everyone Changes Their Profession, the More Bizarre the Protagonist's Profession, the Better
The Younger Sister Looked Down on Her Older Brother, and Then the Older Brother Exposed His Identity in Order to Protect His Younger Sister.
Finished, Old Book
It is not out of date even now. The subject matter is novel but not intellectual, or it is a popular subject but the content is eclectic, more innovative and unexpected, or it has profound connotations but is not accepted by the public. In short, it is strange.
SSS Talent, Hidden in the Real World, but Awesome in the Online Game World
I forgot the title of the novel. The protagonist seems to have been reborn and awakened the SSS talent. He is the fourth human being with the SSS talent. Humans fight against many demons. There are a fixed six hours every night when people enter the online game world to clear the level. The protagonist goes by the pseudonym Four
"If We Unite, We Will Be Invincible; If We Divide, Each Will Be King."
I want to read a book similar to "Master, Senior Brother and Second Senior Brother Are Fighting Again".










































































































Personally, I think this book is quite good in terms of its portrayal of characters, as well as its foreshadowing and direction control of the plot. I think I have read a lot of novels, and this one is definitely a masterpiece. It's just that the length and proportion of some plots are slightly lacking control. But overall, the author has a solid foundation and the book is of high quality. The only drawback is that the rating is slightly low, which may be because not many people watch it. (The above opinions are personal and for reference only)
I think this book is okay. I have the desire to continue reading. The lack of a female protagonist is my favorite part. Come on, author, finish it.
Very exciting! The early villains may be a little brainless, but the battle of wits and courage between the middle and later villains is very enjoyable to watch. The villain is very fierce, and the protagonist is even more powerful. This is not the kind of mindless and cool novel in which the protagonist is invincible and the villain is shattered at the first touch. Everyone understands what they are doing, everyone's actions have a beginning and an end, the logic is very strong, the division of power is also clear, and there is rarely a breakdown in combat power. This is a novel that starts low and moves high. The plot is a bit slow, but it will definitely not disappoint you. It is very exciting! This rating is definitely low, and it is definitely worth more than 9 points. I finished reading and my CPU burned out. Thank you author.
I have read half of the book so far, and it is considered a qualified read. The shortcomings are: there are many typos, inaccurate expressions, sometimes there is a conflict between the front and back parts, and the character creation is very uncomfortable. I hope it can be corrected in the future. Advantages: It's quite fun, and it should be even more fun later.
I'm almost finished watching it, but this part is really brain-burning. Is it because it's too brain-burning that it only has a 7.4? Hey, it's really good to watch, and the protagonist's brain works well. I just want to know if the author studied philosophy. Help.
Good, very good. His thinking is quite unique. He even brought two brothers to level up together. Instead of becoming a god alone, it would be best to form a team in the future and act as Chu Ran's bodyguard [laughs][laughs][laughs]
So well written! ! ! ! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh this is the most enjoyable book I have ever read! ! ! It's so cool to see the nine turns in front! ! It's so fun to watch the transcendental ones from behind! ! The final sublimation is the most enjoyable to watch! ! ! Liang Jiangxing has finally returned to a normal life. His adopted daughter (?) Doesn't know what the ending will be like, ww, in the end, although the main body is holding the fate line, the clone (?) Is still hanging around outside. It's a good time. 😭😭. I'm so emotional that Blue Star has developed so well. 😭😭😭. The most brain-burning book, I will weld you to death on my bookshelf. 😭😭😭
This story is very good, especially the setting of the paradise at the end. I particularly like it. Personally, I particularly like this kind of fun setting. The story of the whole book is good, but the later development is too fast. Many of the subsequent plots are battles, but it is too long. However, it is well written, and there are some interesting plots interspersed in it (otherwise I would be really easily annoyed, I prefer to watch the interactions between characters). I started reading this book when it was almost finished, but stopped reading it for some reasons. Later I found out that the book was finished, so I finished it. Overall, it's good. It's really enjoyable to read it in one go.
It's really good. It climaxes from 500 pictures and the combat power has basically reached its peak. In general online articles, it is basically completed quickly after the combat power reaches its peak. The biggest advantage of this book is that there is still so much content to write when the combat power is at its peak.
It's good to read. Although I read it very slowly and even had a negative attitude towards reading, I still insisted on reading it completely. This shows that at least the book is attractive enough. The protagonist is very different. His desires are very pure. He just wants to be stable, not to get into trouble, not burdened, and very free. (Abba Abba doesn't know what to say
It's good-looking, the early pacing is fast without overpowering the combat, the writing is good without being too toxic, and the characters are distinct. When I lost my brain and read it as a refreshing article, the world view suddenly expanded in the later period. To be honest, it felt fragmented. The sudden change in style caused the number of viewers to drop sharply. Every time I saw a meaningful sentence but found no one commented, I felt a little sad. It felt like I was the only one watching this world. . In fact, I gave up several times and I think the author can improve as follows: 1. Language expression skills need to be improved. There are too many stream-of-consciousness sentences, which are brain-burning and difficult to understand. Every time I read a chapter, I have to chew on the profound meaning over and over again. This is not bad, but concise and accurate sentences can better retain readers. 2. I felt that the pace of the book was a bit slow at the end. The pace changed from fast to slow. It was really hard to swallow. I think the plot could have been more concentrated and it was extended too much. The transcendental line felt like it was dragging on and trying to finish. This book combines the refreshing and face-slapping upgrade flow with the brain-burning and obscure destiny flow. I like it very much! Thanks to the author! But it is a pity that Qi, Lao Gu and others on Blue Star did not appear in the ending. I miss them... In addition, the personal characteristics of the protagonist in the Shuang novels I read before were not outstanding, but I definitely felt the charm of Chu Ran. His words and deeds in Chapters 593 and 598 all revealed his true intentions. It's hard to say... Thanks to the author for giving him life! I wrote a book review a long time ago, but I must insist on reading it before posting it! From 2023 to 2025, I finally settled this big thing! !
It's very interesting to watch. When I saw Gao Wei at the end, I almost lost my brain when I saw it [face covering] [face covering] The world view is huge and the content is exciting enough. The Chu Ran who traveled through time and the local Chu Ran, I would like to eat both of them if I could.
The plot before the first twist was a bit boring. It felt like a third-rate light novel. [Thinking] The writing in the back was quite good. Hahaha, I quite liked the plot of the Ninth Legion. The later stages were a bit complicated but not too bad...? It forcibly enhances the feeling of the plot. The overall feeling is good [Thinking] Mainly because I like the character of the male protagonist. Lezi is such a good person! [Pauses face] After reading the book reviews, I feel that the evaluation is quite divided. The main reason is that the early stage was a bit sluggish, the setting and the coolness are issues, and the supporting actress is noisy. It is indeed a bit poisonous, but it is harmless, brothers! Basically, the plot will be much better after one twist! It can be seen that the author is also trying hard to avoid the poisonous points in writing. It is a bit like the protagonist Long Aotian's personal transformation. There are many exciting points and laughs. I can't hold it in the later stages and it makes me have a headache. The plot is too long, hahaha, but you can skip it a little bit. Overall, I think it is quite good! The characters of Lao Gu and Lao Xie are quite well created. If you want to write about emotions, you can add more emphasis on the brotherhood between teachers and students. If it is well written and the subject matter is improved, it may not be a masterpiece like The Tribulation of Ten Thousand Clans. Seriously, after reading half of it, it really gave me the feeling of Ten Thousand Clans. Hahaha. It is a school that engages in brain power, and it is a deceptive senior teacher. The protagonist's death pretense is also the same [Thinking][Thinking] Dude, I'd say it's just a fun read. It's not as disgusting as some novels. In the middle and later stages, the author is working hard to fix bugs and poisonous points [face covering] [face covering] and it doesn't cost you money. As for being so bitter and hateful, writing a low score is so tear-jerking.
Both the setting and the ending, as well as the writing style, are very good. Although there is no such awesome foreshadowing, the plot inside is very high-level and the ending is still open-ended. It is very good and recommended.
It's good to watch. It creates suspense and adjusts the plot very well. Although the writing later is more complicated, once you understand it, you will basically find it very interesting. Especially when Xie Ling re-wrote Chu Ran in Destiny, you made me laugh.
The plot in the early stages was too rushed and uncomfortable to watch, but the brain-burning level later on was very good. It really burned my brain. If you like witty novels and don't like brainless fun, you can go read the plot at the end. Every word is worth savoring.
There are some poisonous points in the early stage. You can watch it after playing through it or speed-running the plot to the middle stage. The fate line in the middle and late stages can be said to be well written, at least it is very enjoyable to watch. I finished reading it in a week, and it's so sweet when it's finished [laughing evilly]
How should I put it? After reading the entire book, from the beginning to the end, from confusion to enlightenment, from the reader's point of view, some characters are so annoying that they want to die, but from the perspective of the book, each character has its own meaning of existence. It can only be said that the author smoothed the character's route and did not write it into poison. The overall evaluation is not bad. This is one of the few novels I have been able to read in its entirety in the past five years. Come on, author!
It's very interesting to watch, but the plot design is a bit abstract. You can't watch it with any thinking in the early stage, and it is extremely brain-burning in the later stage. However, many people have lost their brains in the early stage and can't stand it anymore. Overall, the writing is very good, the pitfalls are basically filled in, and the characters are all well-developed.
A very good novel, the overall content is clear and reasonable, relaxed and relaxed, and it is very comfortable to read.
The IQ is online, but it's too out of the ordinary. It feels like there is no transition period, but overall it's okay. It's just that when you look at it, you feel like there's no middle. You can go directly to the early stages and then go straight to the late stages, but it's still recommended.
Overall, it's very good. Although the author may have been afraid that the protagonist would upgrade too quickly and forcibly suppressed it (but it was of no use) and it was a bit poisonous (?), I think it is very exciting. But then I started skipping chapters due to my lack of brains and poor understanding. I apologize for being a bit disrespectful to the author. But it's really beautiful!
The front part is very enjoyable to write, but the back part is a bit obscure, but it is really good. The writing style and logical thinking are very good. I give you a five-star praise. I hope you can write better works. If you have any suggestions, don't write so long when writing battles in the future. It's too taxing on your brain [I understand]
For me, a novelist, this book is generally okay. It was good in the early stage, but it left some loopholes, mainly in the aspect of job transfer. Job transfer, as mentioned before, reincarnation tasks are closely related to performance, but there are many people who are stuck in the next few jobs, which is somewhat contradictory. For the small ones, you can save money and ask someone to help complete the job transfer tasks. For the big ones, it can be said that the policy covers it and increases the top human strength. The older you are, the stronger your strength will not be. Other setting cards should be added for job transfer. The mid-term is too abstract, especially the battles around the fate line, and there are too many useless ones, which is the reason why many people give up. In the later period, it can be said that the author worked hard to bring the story to an end. This ending is quite good, at least it is not too regrettable (it may be that there are too many abstract things in the mind, but I have no feeling for the characters), which many novels cannot do. At least, I can see that the author is working hard to make this story more exciting and perfect. Give it five stars.
Not bad, overall freedom is the main focus. There is a lot of pressure in society now and everyone wants to be free. If reality is not enough, the novel is still very good in YY. It is not completely centered on the protagonist. It is united. Although there is no foreshadowing, it is very peaceful. Life is not like this, just be happy.
The plot of this book is really mind-blowing. At first, I thought it was a mindless novel, but the later plot is really interesting and in-depth. I didn't expect Tomato to have such a book. It's not a loss.
Originally, I was disturbed by the power of the pig's trotters at the beginning. The pig's trotters have become the abyss itself. How can others beat me? How can the author write it~~~ But the story in the second part is good. Apart from the pretentiousness at the beginning, the subsequent plot is really good. It is exploring, touching and profound. I feel that it is really good~~~ I recommend it~~~ I have to add that Pigfoot is not a purely good person, he is a bit greedy for money and a bit bad~~~ He has a group of like-minded friends and teachers~~~ He is really happy sometimes~~~
It is true that as the author said, the plot jumps a bit fast in the early stage, but the connection is still very stable and does not feel too awkward. The writing is good, but the story is unreliable. When I saw the final battle, I felt overwhelmed. All three of them had evil intentions. I didn't expect that only one of them could be considered the "villain" in the end. Personally: The rating does not match the strength. It is really a good book, not bad at all.
It was okay, but a lot of the plot was cut in the middle and late stages, but there was no big problem with the connection, it just moved too fast. The final ending is really one that I am quite satisfied with. The flaws do not hide the good points, it is really good.
I read it in one go, and it seems that some content is missing in the middle. It is a good book found in the online game category, and a breath of fresh air in the online game category [Like] Looking forward to the author's other works [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like]