Mysterious! Love and Cthulhu

Nice book. The writing is okay However, there are a lot of mixtures, which tests the ability to restrain. There are some flaws in the transition, and the inter-act growth link can be omitted, but some titles, such as the nickname Lao Yangtou, were a bit surprising when I first saw it, and I only saw the explanation later. If the nickname appears for the first time in the future, you can add the name in the comment area. It draws on Cthulhu elements, but the Cthulhu-style narrative is somewhat deficient. The description of fear is indeed somewhat troublesome. If there is a plot in the future, you can try indirect narrative or add restrictive narrative.

Overall, it suits my taste. However, the story line is not complete. I personally think that the author probably wants to dig holes for his imagination, but I am worried that it will not be filled in in the follow-up. For example, how the sheep head (the god of desire) died is not told at all, and some of the subsequent things have a fragmented feeling. I finished reading it because I read it as a rmo novel [shy][shy] It is difficult to find the highlights.

I didn't plan to log in at first, but I really like this book, so I will give my first review for this book. The author is great, (ง •̀_•́)งCome on♥(｡￫v￩｡)♥! !

Very well written! ! But why is no one watching?

I really like this book. If I were not a sailor, I would have been hit by a car when I went out. I feel that the author really likes the mystery of squids. Author, please don't stop updating [crying] I still want to see Xiaoke and the male protagonist together.

It's a good book that I feel good about myself. Good luck to the author.

Loneliness is an emotion

This book is okay