No heroine, seek a system for all people, all people can do anything, all people can survive, all people can be lords, etc. Any type can be used, no heroine, lone wolf, don't build power, don't build power, don't build power, say important things three times
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The idea is still very good, but the writing needs to be practiced carefully. No matter how good the idea is without a good plot and good writing, it is useless [cover face] [cover face] Come on, come on!
Don't worry about the writing style, just practice the [rhythm]. The imagination is very big, the spiritual root is actually a [mobile phone], it is very interesting, it belongs to "Technology Edition: Fighting Breaking the Sky". After writing this book to 500,000 words, the results will surely increase. Five-star recommendation. If it doesn't look good, I'll stand upside down and have diarrhea. My name is [Crazy Mushroom]. Come on, it's awesome!
The ideas and creativity are good, and the plot is currently logical. Moreover, the small conflicts between the protagonist and the elite disciples from other peaks do not intensify into villains in a cliched and brainless manner. Instead, they gradually become excessive, "falling in love and killing each other" along the way, and become partners in fighting side by side. Overall, it is very good, but the wrong chapter in Chapter 0 is very uncomfortable to read. Every time it is updated, I have to go back and look through the directory to find it. This cover is a bit scary
The writing is very good, but there are few people who will rate it.
It's very pleasant. Write well. Come on 5⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Let's get going
If life deceives you, you use the beauty camera to deceive life.
It's not bad. You can read it when you're short of books [laughs crookedly]
I won't say more.
It's a bit of a pity! What a pity for this new idea! I hope the author will have a breakthrough in his next book
A very nice novel! Uh-huh-huh!
It's okay. Anyway, I quite like it. It's quite satisfactory.
The concept is novel, and this is the first book of Mobile Phone Gold Finger. The plot is the same, just changed. Overall it's not bad.