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It's not over yet [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] Then I'll stock up first The author's writing is pretty good, but it looks a bit messy at the beginning, but it gets better after the first few chapters. The emotional line is a cookie, there is no logic, it's just love at first sight, it's a sweet, warm route, a cookie, suitable for reading when relaxing, overall it's very bland. Then here are some of my impressions after reading it: In fact, after reading the author's comments and introduction, I thought it was still a farming food article, but there was no description. For example, the part about making cakes felt like it was written according to the recipes on the Internet. The author could do some detailed descriptions of the ingredients. I haven't seen such a wonderful point in making desserts yet. The same goes for Lin Lin. There is not much description about growing things, and treatment is also mentioned briefly. In the introduction, Lin Lin is said to be doted on to death. I think the most memorable part of the whole article is when Lin Lin looks for Yun Yun who was attacked by a sneak attack with his face full of lines. Lin Lin is cool and Yun Yun is considerate, but the impression left by other places is rather vague. I hope the author can write better and better, and I also hope that I can see Lin Yun's sweet daily life later. The above are just some of my impressions and suggestions. If the author already has his own complete thoughts and has formed his own way of writing, then it is better for the author to follow his own path and not be swayed by the readers' opinions. Ps: If the author will follow the route of refreshing writing, I hope that the author can write about the two of them later returning to the apocalypse to deal with the two villains, and even showing off their affection in front of their ex-girlfriend to make the two villains angry.

It's okay, come on

For now, it's worth pursuing

I wanted to review it today and found out that this book has been removed from the shelves😭😭

The plot is exciting. I just hope that the author can be slower and can't help but point out typos when they see them [Chigua][Chigua][Awkward laugh]

So sweet! So sweet! So sweet! I hope you don't want to kill me [sending my heart] At first, you may think that Yun is a gong, but how can she be so cute when you get to the back to save her life? Sisters, it's really super sweet, super good-looking, really super super sweet, no money required if it's not sweet.

I think it's quite good-looking, the sub-CP is also very sweet, and the plot is pretty good too.

Very interesting, good luck to the author

Very nice and to my liking. [Sinister smile]

I really like this. It's beautiful and very sweet. I like it very much. I thought it was gone, but there is actually a modern chapter. . . Great author, come on↖(^ω^)↗

Does Da Da have a Weibo?