Pirate*******

Hope you all like this book. [Laughing out loud]

It's not bad. It's a very interesting book about One Piece. Momonosuke is dead, so you can watch it with confidence. Good luck to the author [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

After reading Chapter 33, I am sure that Momonosuke is awesome. Five-star praise! [Laughing evilly][like]

I like this book very much. It gave me a happy ending that I couldn't find in other books and anime. It also made Luffy no longer reckless. Although it is good to be wise and foolish, it also harmed the crew [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Love]

Just fuck Momonosuke to death. This must be five stars.

Just because Momonosuke died, it was very worth it.

This is the first time I saw the protagonist dressed as Luffy. The author has deleted many insignificant plots in the original drama and the theatrical version, or even not written them. However, he will give an explanation at the end of the chapter. I think it is very good, not watery at all, the plot is fast but not abrupt, the rhythm is good, and it is very comfortable to watch! It's just that the author is so short!

Update! (Screaming) (twisting) (creeping darkly) (crawling) (twisting) (squirming darkly) (rolling) (crawling violently) (twisting) (tilting head) (sitting still) (retreating slowly) (smashing things hard) (gnawing) (crawling darkly) (crawling) (crawling) ( Bending quickly) (twisting and folding) (returning to the original shape and screaming) (crawling again) (pacing) (looking back slowly) (laughing softly) (crazy and attacking regardless of target) (exploding) (eviscerating the abdomen) (laughing loudly) (lasting) (short-term calm) (roaring) (squirming) (eerie low Roar) (crawl) (split) (walk ashore) (twist) (spasm) (wrist) (twisted walking) (attack regardless of target) (bark) (crawl and jump) (pick up broken arm) (tilt head) (sit still) (slowly retreat) (smash things hard) (gnaw) (dark squeeze Juice goes crazy) (crawls) (crawls) (bends quickly) (twists and folds) (returns to the original and screams) (crawls again) (paces) (turns back slowly) (laughs softly) (crazy and attacks regardless of target) (explodes) (empties belly) (laughs loudly) (persistent) (shortly calm)

The author has to persevere. It's a very good book. Don't give up. Come on, come on, come on [angry] [angry] [angry]

I have read 76 chapters so far. The style of the original work is quite good. There is a section about recruiting girls, so I will review the original work. It all depends on your preference. I feel good about myself. Of course, it would be better to interact more with the heroine. Otherwise, it is too original. If you are passionate, you might as well watch the anime. I hope the author writes more about daily life and the interaction between characters and heroines. I also post pictures from time to time. Otherwise, sometimes I won't remember what clothes they are wearing.

I just wanted to ask, is Momonosuke dead? [Laughs awkwardly]

Kill Momonosuke and get five stars for this point

Author, can you reboot that series? Is it the opening that rewrites the top battle and restarts? It would be nice to change it to a sweet article! Ahhhh, just when I saw the most exciting part, I suddenly couldn't do it. I was so sad! [Cry][cry]

Very good, very good. In Tomato, you can put it in the t1 column.

It's very cool. It inherits Luffy's character and the male protagonist's thinking. It's even more passionate than the original.

Very nice, great author, come on

I like this book for two reasons: one is the ending of Whitebeard and the other is the ending of Momonosuke. Especially the ending of Whitebeard is really good.

It's so beautiful, why does it have such a low score?

Very well written! I like it, but it's a bit slow. A faster one would be better. The more heroines the better [laughter]

The sentence "Momonosuke must die" must be praised.

Hurry up and get Uta on board [eat melon] or I will change the score.

You can add some introductions to system items. After all, the world it comes from is too complicated.

Momonosuke is dead, five stars are given to him The article is well written and I like it very much

Can you update it quickly? It looks very addicting. Can you turn the protagonist into a dual-fruit power user and add some materials from different anime, such as Naruto, Assassin 567, and Dragon Ball? I hope you can update to chapter 200 or 300

Great book! I really like it! Many regrets have been fulfilled! But I want to know if Luffy is still in Gear 4 at this time? It took a second to beat Brother Ming with the third gear and the weapon color. When will he use the fourth gear? Check in two? Also, take some time to go back and see Weiwei anytime. Monet, Ain, and Margaret (the one with yellow hair) from Nine Snakes Island should also be included in the harem!

One Piece fanfic is quite interesting, it's a harem story, so don't read it if you don't like it (don't affect the rating of the book)

I was thinking about reading the book review halfway through, but I saw that it was discontinued, which immediately ended my interest in it. It has been added to the bookshelf now. I will read it again when the author updates it.

It looks good, but when did you take away Nami Robin and Utaleju?

Awesome! The part about Momo assisting his death is in my heart, author, come on

Five stars, don't ask why, Momonosuke died [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh], this is unacceptable to Five Stars [sneaky laugh], even if it is written as a defense later, the five stars are still worth it [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]