I Am Catching up with Xian in Honkai Impact

Looks good! I love the dual heroines, the key is CP or Fu Hua!

The two heroines are well received, Fu Hua's character image has been basically restored, and it has been well received. The author's writing style is better than most of the Honkai fandom I read, come on💪💪💪, don't be a pigeon Now that I have finished reading the first volume (the author has just updated it here), I am very curious about what kind of existence the system is. Is it simply responsible for cheating the heroine at critical moments? Or are there other foreshadowings? Closer to home, I am still very satisfied with the content of the first volume. After reading most of the main plots of Honkai Impact III, I thought about how I should structure the story if I wanted to write a fanfic myself (of course this is impossible, my writing skills are too poor and I can only dream about it [laughing])... Then I discovered that the stories of Honkai Impact III are very closely connected, and there is no way to change some of the plots. For example, if the previous civilization had not perished, there would be no current civilization; if Alicia had not sacrificed, the Herrschers of the current civilization would not have humanity; if the Seven Filial Disciples had not killed their masters, and had not broken the influence of the divine voice, most of the immortals would still be in the state of "killing the possessed", Mo's feelings; if Kallen had not been sacrificed, there would have been no later Otto, and the history of the entire human race against the Honkai Impact would have been different; if Siren had not died, there would have been no subsequent Paramecium... I've read some other Bengsan fics, and most of them don't make the protagonist too invincible, because that would have too great an impact on the plot; nor do they make the protagonist too useless, which would make no sense at all. Basically, when you are in the "I can't do anything" situation, you can have a system or something that can be used to make mistakes... Especially when writing from the ancient civilization, basically as a recorder. Cough cough cough... I'm going too far. What I want to say is that it's very rare for the author to write the plot like this. Come on [like][like][like]

When I first read the introduction, I thought it was going to be a light-hearted daily sweet novel, but in the end I ignored the last line. This book is a Beng San Tong humanistic novel (laughs). I read it relatively quickly. I read the first two volumes in one go, and now I'm frightened to read the third volume (What Makes You Like This. Jpg). The protagonist is still lively in the first volume. Watching her interact with Fu Hua made me roll on the bed. But as the author said, Fu Hua is not suitable for love at this time. The protagonist's crazy attacks are useful, at least in the beginning, and then, well, it started... The next volume! The protagonist is not as lively as in the first volume, and has become that kind of gentle... Good wife? The interaction with Fu Hua was like that of an old couple. The corners of my mouth were directly aligned with the sun. It was undoubtedly very easy to kiss, and there was enough sugar (unfortunately, I didn't laugh as often as in the first volume). And... I finally kissed the author in the third volume. Do you know how long I have been waiting (crying). In addition to candy, the author's knife is also first-rate. The murder of ancient gods, the collapse of modern civilization, and the Herrscher of the pre-civilization. Watching the protagonist become more and more mature, the body and mind are suffering from greater and greater oppression. A good child already makes me feel like a dying old man. The few remaining ties, I don't know if they will be there in the future. A moment was ruthlessly wiped out, so even if I got candy in the third volume, my whole body was tense. I was afraid (/(ｽT)＼) that the protagonist would fall into that lonely situation again. It was so depressing that I couldn't even see the hope of the protagonist's survival. The former civilization was destined to be unable to pass the level. I can no longer imagine what the protagonist's mental state would be like after spending 50,000 years like Fu Hua. Come on, author, I must let everyone see the ending of that HE. Finally... I hope Miss Shen Fu will marry Miss Fu Hua soon. I must HE! ! !

I personally prefer the plot of Ancient China, the characters are described very delicately. Maybe I prefer to watch the relationship line. Why does the relationship between Shen Fu and Fu Hua progress so slowly?

Uh-huh~ What a cute girl(?)! Do you want to know the secret to getting a higher score? Great readers will give you the answer, listen up ~ First of all, you must update 30,000 words per day (???), And update a few more chapters when you have time, okay? If you have kidney deficiency, this will be difficult~

I think the writing is very good, come on author Reading the introduction of the book, why do I feel that the protagonist is going to be knifed?

Author, please don't stop, please, don't give up [crying] It's really well written. It's a pity that Xiaoshi hasn't appeared yet. I really want to see it appear, and then fight for Shen Fu with Fu Hua. It will be funny and interesting [laughing] Shen Fu is not like the protagonist of other novels. She is invincible at every turn, and then there is some kind of system. Every power has to pay a certain price. The author really writes it very well. Now The novel cannot be written without a system, and Fu Hua's character has not collapsed. Every time I see Shen Fu leave, I really have the urge to cry [I almost cry] Every time I trade my soul, it is for Fu Hua's friends. The reason why a good book is a good book is because there are many partings in this book. In short, come on, author, don't give up [Sending Hearts] This is one of the best Honkai Impact fan works I have ever read.

The description of the protagonist and the development of the rest of the characters are good, but the details need to be improved. This book has great potential.

Author, your novel is so sweet to me (knife), it's really good...୧꒰•̀ᴗ•́꒱୨

It's so beautiful, it must be put on Yae Tong's shelves [Send Heart]

Very good! It seems that there is no bloated feeling in the brain, and the storyline is extremely clear. [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates] A suggestion to the author: I saw in the comment section that someone wanted you to write about Yuri as the heroine. My advice to the author is that you must write strictly according to your own ideas and don't be swayed by us readers. Because it is impossible for only one type of person to read your book. For example, I like single female protagonists, and I happen to be opposite that one. So you must write according to your own ideas, no matter what the final result is. Because that is your idea, even if it does not meet the preferences of a certain type of readers, at least there will be no objections. If you change your mind because of someone, you will definitely lose some readers. Be sure to write according to your own ideas! ! !

This book is well written (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡, I hope the author can persevere and write until the day the story ends [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ] That's not what happened. Why did it drop from 9.3 To 6.8 In just one day?

It's super beautiful. It's rare that a book can touch me so much. The interaction between the heroine and Fu Hua is super sweet. (No knives at all, really.) [Crying]

It's the sweetest and most beautiful Honkai Impact story I've ever read.

It's really beautiful, but the knife hurts my heart so much. Woo woo woo (┯_┯) The knife pierced my heart deeply. The author will update it quickly. It's very nice.

It's very interesting. The author perfectly expresses Shangxian's wooden feelings, from resistance at the beginning to acceptance and even liking. Feeling like losing an important person, Hua from the second volume is still very curious about their subsequent development even though she has been burdened with so much. The character Qin Suyi has a desire for growth. When she realizes that no one will protect her, she truly realizes her growth. If there is no collapse, she must be a carefree child. It comes from the tenderness in the heart that the protagonist still maintains after three reincarnations, and from the fragmentation of the sword's heart, which bears the name of needing to protect human beings. The malice from the gods never stops. This will be the last reincarnation. I hope that the protagonist can reach the end and live a happy life with Fu Hua. I also hope that if there is an extra chapter, they (all the characters in the book) will not be allowed to suffer anymore. Also, humans will definitely defeat Honkai! ! ! (Guarding the best Fu Hua in the world!!!) Also, the author should not give up on raising his spirits to fight again. The author writes very well. More book fans should wish them a better life @ Come on, author

The author writes very well, but many people don't like to read it at the beginning, and then he has nothing to do and gives you a low score, alas.

A very good-looking Honkai fic, which deeply implements Mi You's "healthy, sunny, positive" sweet article [smile].

It's so sweet (mouth full of knives)

The writing of this Beng Beng Beng novel is not very outstanding, but it is very correct, because its timeline and characters can be matched, and it is very comfortable to read. At least it is better than the one I have read before (the third collapse of the former civilization, Su has already joined the fire chasing state and is still invisible, and Kevin has become an ice face and has become a fusion warrior while Mei is still alive). The characters are OOC and the timeline is messed up. It is really uncomfortable. Fortunately, this book is normal [Please update]

The writing is excellent, with a little too many knives, which makes it a little depressing to read, but there are also many sweet parts, which makes people sympathize. There are very few serious books written by Fu Hua, but the author writes them very well. It's a pity that I haven't finished writing it, and there are many holes left unfilled, which is a great regret. As for Fu Hua, it is not easy to write. He is an emotionally stable, old-fashioned, and dull character. What a shame. Generally speaking, there are no other major drawbacks except that the writing is not finished. The characters are portrayed in a thorough and three-dimensional way. It is a real swordsman. I hope the author can roughly write down the ending, which will finally put an end to this pitfall. Really... This is the best serious Fu Hua fan fiction in existence, but it's a pity that it's not finished. "Excellent work of inferior quality"

I like this book very much because it is so beautiful

I have read this novel many times, it is one of my favorite novels, but it is a pity that this novel has been discontinued🙁

Goose, it's really good-looking, this is my favorite double heroine currently! As for why the first word in this book review is goose... Can I say that I didn't hit it until I saw the book review [face covering]

The writing is very good, and the author has a promising future. In my eyes, such a tragedy is not a tragedy, but a perfect ending that is better than tragedy. Come on! I'm looking forward to your story, keep running forward.

This book is one of the best among Tomato fanfics. It's great that the author can make readers' moods rise and fall very well. I really like to read novels, I really like to read the stories in the minds of the authors, and I really like to read the stories of their hopes. Maybe this novel is the plot that the author hoped for. It is indeed wonderful, but I had to give up the book for the most beautiful story in my heart, because the feeling of regret was contrary to what I expected. But it is undeniable that this book is very good and I recommend everyone to read it.

[Thinking] The author's descriptions are delicate and the characters' personalities are vividly presented. The writing is warm and comfortable, as fascinating as the dawn sun. The character's language, actions, etc. Make the character's personality full and vivid, especially the protagonist. The protagonist's psychology combined with her demeanor highlights the protagonist's delicate mind, gentleness, and kindness towards others. Every move the protagonist makes fascinates me [laughing]. All in all, it is a good book, but the only flaw is... I can't make it up anymore, just one sentence: me! Want! Look! Stick! Stick! [Sinister smile]

It looks good, but the author needs to update it soon! I'm so impatient to wait

OK, OK, I'm used to eating Sanbengzi. Is it okay to come here and have some sweets? Fu Hua's character design fits perfectly, nice What do you like the most about lesbians?

The description is great, very beautiful, the beautiful girl posts are very civilized