From Good-for-Nothing to Martial God of Battle Qi

Too wordy [stunned] [stunned] [stunned] [stunned]

So-so

It's too ink. An eleven-year-old child thinks too much. There is no need to highlight Chen Ming too much. I have almost forgotten the protagonist. What's the use of highlighting it? In the end, it's not Chen Hao.

Can't listen anymore

Looks good, but too wordy

The title of the book is attractive. Come in and read a lot. I don't know who the pig's trotter is in chapter 10. Let's start and keep writing about the fat man. At the end of the dance, I realize that the pig's trotter is not him 🤮

Is this novel too wordy? Is the main plot written too slowly? It's all bullshit. So no one is watching from behind. Think about it carefully before writing this book!