Wear It Quickly ********

Personally, I feel that the author still has room for improvement. I haven't watched too much. I have watched three or four worlds. Overall, I don't have a strong sense of immersion. I prefer a running account narrative, and the pace of the article is not very good. I feel that the author wants to refine the story of each world as much as possible, but the writing skills are not yet up to par, and the story coherence is not very good. I have also watched a lot of dramas recently, and I dare not criticize the author. , I just gave some of my opinions and suggestions. Take the current plot of the story as I see it. I feel that some of the plots are not logically clear and a bit confusing when reading. The author can try to slow down a bit. The narrative chapters of a world are too short to explain clearly, so just add a few more chapters. Of course, this is my personal suggestion. I am very grateful if the author adopts it. I can understand if I don't accept it. I hope the author can work hard! !

Personally I quite like it

Good-looking, very good-looking.

The author really makes me love and hate him. Some chapters are few and some are many. Finally, I would like to ask the author if he could write the ending better and not be too sloppy. Please [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I feel wronged]

It's very beautiful, but please give me more love songs [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Very interesting, good luck to the author!

But it's difficult to say this, and it has to be Wang Baochuan.

Long You Tian Xia Long Shan is so upset

I like it very much. Various novels.

It looks good, come on, come on

Like 😍, cheers for the author (ง •̀_•́)ง

It's okay. I only watched the beginning and end of each world. I obviously like every movie and TV show, but I feel... There's something wrong, and I can't explain it.

Can the author write about a young man on a white horse drunk in the spring breeze?

Can you write about Eternal Jue Chen, the rumored Chen Qianqian, and once upon a time there was a Lingjian Mountain and a brilliant star? Those books are really beautiful

The author requests that the next book be "Young Song Xing"

It's good to read, great author, come on!

I like this book very much. I hope the author will keep updating it. But I also want to ask the author if there are ultimate notes in this book. If so, when will it be updated to the ultimate notes? The author must reply to me😊otherwise I will be very sad🥺😭

Everything is okay, my writing has improved. In fact, writing this kind of novel is just like writing a composition, except that the plot is not in the composition. Just like a composition has a lot of details, you can also write a novel with more details. You can think of writing a novel as writing an essay. There is no difference between them, but the plot is different. @

Just three words, I like it

It's really good, but I feel a little bored.

The protagonist is too powerful, that's why he doesn't have high scores

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's very interesting. Kudos to the author.

I like it very much, highly recommend it

Is Chu Qiao Chuan okay?

Remember to write about Juvenile Songs. It's such a pity that my senior brother is dead [crying]

The author is great, please write my dear and beloved ones

Chasing the Peach Blossom Celebrating More Than Years in the World

Finished reading. Very good

She is strong but not stupid. The heroine's character has not changed from beginning to end. Everything in the world is going well quickly.