[Superpowers + check-ins + lighthearted + passionate = ?]
When he wakes up, Lu Hao has transmigrated to a world where everyone has superpowers and bound himself to the strongest Check-In System.
All he has to do is visit places around the world and check in to receive all sorts of strange and wonderful rewards.
Check in at the Giant Wild Goose Pagoda and receive the X-rank superpower Imaginator;
Check in at the Qinling Mountains and receive the A-rank superpower Builder’s Hand;
Check in at Mount Wudang and receive the SSS-rank superpower Luck Quantification;
Check in at the Hanging Gardens of Babylon and receive...
Check in at the Lighthouse of Alexandria...
One day, standing at the very top of the world, Lu Hao suddenly realizes that all the superpowered people and supernatural beasts in the world could team up and still wouldn’t be enough to take him down.
He has become the man no one can defeat...
There is nothing good to say, but with the talent of being a visionary, can you dream up potions? Be bolder and imagine your talents, and be bolder and obliterate other people's talents [smile][smile][smile]
1: The protagonist is too stupid. He has been through it several times and still doesn't have a long memory. 2: The author doesn't know what he wants to write at all. If he wants to write something like a slime, he is too invincible. If he wants to write a cool article, he is not invincible enough. He can't see what his theme is at all.
The types of abilities are well written, but the abilities are revealed too easily and are not rigorous.
I feel like the writing is too small and a bit too naive.
The male protagonist has fought so many evil organizations and has so much experience in killing people, but it took him so long to beat up a student in a school who has no real killing experience. The male protagonist is a loser. Don't look at it. Don't talk about difficult problems. He is not serious at all. I used so many superpowers, two or three superpowers, and the level was not too low when combined, and it took so long to win. Even if the opponent was a school prodigy, just a student with no actual combat killing experience, everything above was good, but this place is too poisonous.
Really, there is no heroine, let alone a heroine, there has not been a named female character so far.
In addition to having many special powers, he is not much better than others. He is not as good as the protagonist and has a systematic B-level, you know. Moreover, there is no strict classification. You can't roughly tell who is stronger by comparing the protagonist with others. The subject matter of the book is good, and the idea is good. The problem is that the protagonist is not obviously strong and there is no hierarchy, which brings down the content of the book. Also, the main character is a bit silly, and I can't stand it. Strengthen your abilities and divide them into different levels, such as CBAS.
Your daydreamer is not very good. According to what you said, the bigger and more powerful ones consume more mental energy. There is no difference between a drop of rain and a drop of poison. If you drop four or five basins, you can easily kill the enemy. Come on! Try to add a talent that kills people more and plunders the talent, which can better prepare for future development, come on! Come on, good writing
I can't see this being unfair.
Not only does it have a cerebral palsy-like school bully idiot plot, the school bully leads a bunch of gangsters to chase the protagonist and kill him, and the protagonist refuses to fight back for fear of killing others. In the end, is it necessary to whitewash the school bully whose name I can't even remember? What kind of outstanding person can write such a plot?