Wan Dao****

It's okay, but does the disciple just ignore it in 2.3? Also, I feel that the talents of several disciples are still too weak. After all, the upper limit of the realm of the author's novel is still quite high. Also, the eldest disciple's technique is not an exclusive technique, and the eldest disciple is not an innate human race. Why did the eldest disciple change his name? I think Qin Yuan sounds better than Beichen. Even if I want to change my name, can't I change the whole name? I started reading it from the beginning. I am used to seeing Qin Yuan. The sudden change of name is very uncomfortable. After all, Beichen is the eldest apprentice. I think he can be written a little more special. Overall, it is good and relatively long. Although there are only 27 chapters, I still read it for a long time. Finally, I hope the author will work hard to update and strive to write better and better. After all, it is rare to see that the eldest apprentice is a man. I still admire you very much.

It's really beautiful. I don't even know what language to use to comment. Come on and update.

@ Zhuxiaoqiang hopes to change it to a single female protagonist, the female protagonist is the system

Overall it's okay, but the memories are a bit too much and too long. There are also rewards given by the system. Can the introduction be shorter?

I hope the author can keep writing and don't finish the chapter with just one or two hundred pictures.

@ Zhuxiaoqiang Update faster! Also, I came in because of the lack of heroine in the introduction. Don't make me sad in the end, otherwise I won't support you😏

It's so beautiful, cheers for the author (ง•̀_•́)ง! ! !

Not bad, not bad, really good

Let me go, no wonder there are only so many chapters. It turns out there are so many numbers in each chapter [face covering]

It's good to watch, but the pace is so fast, maybe because it's just the beginning!

Not bad, although it's a little watery, it's pretty good. Very cool! Come on update! You are too slow.

The plot is exciting and interesting, and it's great to watch! ! !

I hope the erasure of the host will be cancelled.

How do you read this👀, one chapter a day

There are too many memories

It's okay, I like this type

It's very interesting. One chapter is worth two chapters. I also hope the author will change the system to a female protagonist.