Magic********

A very good book, with ups and downs of the plot and fascinating. Like a bottle of old wine, at first glance it seems unremarkable at the beginning, but becomes more and more exciting later on, and by the end of the first volume, the plot is even more exciting. I haven't seen a Pokémon article like this in a long time. There is no crushing all the way, there are setbacks and growth, and the bond with the elves is also very warm. The plot is also very interesting. The protagonist's thoughts always have something I didn't expect, including sadness and joy, which penetrates people's hearts under the author's delicate and unique writing style. Finally, I hope the author will continue to achieve good results, good health and all the best in the new year. Come on💪

The author is very good, very good. Come on, I will trust you.

Yes, yes, Tomato finally has books about Elf World that can be read, instead of some garbage parallel and fusion streams that are trying to sell chickens. The first volume was good, but I had to forget about the second volume. I skipped reading it.

It's best to conquer all the heroines, then I feel Wanmei

The second chapter begins. There on the ship is extremely poisonous! I gave 5 stars because I can still read the first chapter. The author is great. I don't know how you felt when you wrote the second chapter. I can understand it. After all, you were offended by some readers who couldn't resist the poison. But I hope you can finish this book well. Also, I read the first chapter in one day. There were no memory errors or malicious comments. , There really are people like that woman on the deck, I admit it, it was me who couldn't do it, and I remembered some bad memories, so I quit the book after Chapter 20, but I hope Xiao Ju'er will not have too few roles in this book. She is obviously the first, the first in many readers' hearts, and the other women who were written about are second, third... Too many. Also, please give it a try, author! There are many readers still chasing your books, you won't be alone [laughing]

It has a very special start and a unique main line. I am tired of seeing the popular regional gym main line or urban college competition type. This book really shines. It is really exciting.

Where are Xiao Juer and Yewman behind? No more drama? I mean from the beginning of the second volume. . . No, what on earth are you writing in the first 20 chapters of Volume 2? If it is well written, does it have to disgust the readers? Why? I really don't understand. . .

Give me a five-star review 👍. One of the few recognitions of the author is that gold will always shine. Even if it lasts through the ages, there are many directions. The future is like a sea and the days are long. I hope that one day I will see the author's update. Come on!

It's a very nice book, but the front is a bit awkward -_-||

The first chapter is okay, but the cruise plot in Chapter 2 is the poisonous point of the book. That plot is really incomprehensible. Bailong controlled the protagonist to touch someone else, and the protagonist was not angry with Bailong after that. The most incomprehensible thing is that Utsu Rika fell in love with the male protagonist. I don't hate the female protagonist very much, but I just can't understand their plot.

The first volume is good, but I personally can't enjoy the second volume. Maybe it's because Long Aotian has read too much (maybe the author is not strong enough in writing and didn't handle the conflict between the protagonist and the people who were offended by Bai Long's manipulation?)

It's very interesting. It makes you feel happy but doesn't make your mind completely divorced from reality. I thank the author for his great efforts. He does what he wants to do and doesn't do what he doesn't want to do. He doesn't do it because he doesn't want to do it. I hope the author can live a better life in the future [makes a face]

It's good to read, but the author is too short, and it's gone before I even get the pleasure of reading it. But overall, I can only say it's a pretty good book. I hope the author can work harder and stop writing so little.

If you want to write a review, you can't just write a review. You have to write about the bustling bus when you read these words, about every stranger you pass by, the laughter of the children coming off school next to you, and the small group of people outside the car window you see when you look up. Write about every time the bus starts and every time it arrives at the stop, and about how you move to the next place with the flow of people. Write about every fresh and strange person you meet, and also write about the brand-new self every moment.

Is it getting hotter now? Why are so many of the novels I read discontinued? [What]

I hope the author will continue to follow you

The book is generally good. If you don't give the protagonist some special abilities, his small body will only be able to carry it. It's okay if you give me a super sincere person's physique. The power of waveguide, the power of regular disk. Superpowers. Everything is fine. It always feels like the protagonist is either being beaten or on the way to being beaten. Never stopped

This is the most charming novel I have read so far. The characters are really well drawn. I hope the author can have such a wonderful life in real life and meet his own Miss Tangerine.

What a nice book! Why is the rating so low? Come on, author! No more eunuchs.

It's a very good book, but it's a bit pitiful that there are so few people. Reshiram White Dragon's diaphragm responded to me, and it was so embarrassing to scream when cutting the White Dragon.

It's a pretty good book, but I don't know why the rating is so low. Normally it should be 81 to 75. This is considered to be a fight against it.

The writing is not bad. Although it has shortcomings, at least I like it. It is not easy for the author to write books. Please be kind to others.

Well, it looks very good. Keep it up.

I just read this book and it's gone. I'll read more about it later. Author [crying]

Okay, okay, the choice of the heroine is so damn good! Utsu Ryuki is really good. . . I might have had some issues with it before, but now I like it more and more. . . Hey, the mountains are high and the road is far, see you later. . .

Well written, cheers to the author

Why do I remember that the setting in the anime is that elves can understand human speech, such as Team Rocket Meowth.

The author is very good It's just too short [pouts] We will always be waiting for you, author

It's a very good book, but why is the rating so low?

In fact, this has been written very well. First of all, elves choose people. This sentence is so right, and it is quite reasonable [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] Don't let these "people" disgust people