A Different Kind of Collapse

[Laughing and crying] Let's shamelessly give myself a 5-star haha After reading everyone's questions, they are all about punctuation. Huh? . How should I put it? I haven't written many books. I usually play games, so I decided to write this book. I originally wanted to give myself a happy ending, First time writing, not this book, When I was writing Chapter 20, some people said it was too sharp. I deleted that one because I didn't plan to write it. After much deliberation, I decided to write it down. I won't write too many chapters. The plot of this book is very fast and everyone can understand it. I will add more later, so everyone can just make do with it [awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

Come on, it sounds good. Please follow me with a few more pictures. I like the harem and I will always support you. Please write faster. [Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss] Forget it if you are a married woman, and accept everything else.

As long as we are in the harem, we are all good friends [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

From the first glance, your system looks like you studied at Maoke.

Not bad! It's just that the punctuation marks are not used properly. But I still give it five stars. Hope to keep updated.

Five stars for encouragement, but the beginning is not good and there are many problems. It is easy to feel dizzy from the first perspective and then the third perspective. It is very dangerous to bury pits in the beginning and it will be very discouraging if you bury too much [eating melon]

I really like this book, mainly about the harem

It's quite good-looking, and the foreshadowing in some places is also very good. Unlike some harem novels, you can't help but fall in love with the protagonist when you see it!

It is natural to sort out the relationship between the characters, but the over-plot of the story can be described in more detail in terms of memories (this is just my understanding). All in all, a very impressive book.

The subject matter is really good, and the plot design is also good, but the writing style is too immature. From the few chapters I have read, a lot of content can be expanded. I feel the same as the diary. It can be very sweet, but it is just a little bit short. I have already conceived a lot of plots. It is obviously such a good plot. Oh wow, author, if you can't do it, give me the pen!

I also watched it for a while, what can I say, this idea is good, I thought the acting would be more realistic, and then the small details revealed inadvertently made the protagonist suspicious, and then a plot similar to a battle of wits was caused, but they finally acted it out. The protagonist let go of his doubts, and went back and forth like this until the final showdown. Although I fell in love with the protagonist because of the previous eight generations, for people like me who haven't played too much plot in Honkai Impact 3, there is still a lack of transition, that kind of emotional accumulation. People who have played Honkai Impact 3 for a long time will probably like it, because they have enough companionship with the character, so they will be very happy to fall in love directly. But the writing is still generally fine, come on [blowing kiss]

After reading the comments, the author said that this was his first time writing a book, and it felt pretty good to write it like this. I gave it a five-star review, and I hope the author will continue to work hard!

Although I don't understand it, I still give it five stars.

The book is very good. I feel like this plot was either reincarnated or I inherited the favorability factor. The kind that fills up directly Although there is a knife, I can't seem to feel anything. Your knife is not sharp enough. This knife is really not too harsh. I have never seen a knife before. I have survived this, but I am still afraid of this. I remember that Tomato had a book about nine reincarnations and the tenth reincarnation. The system did not appear until the tenth time. The previous nine times the knife was more severe than the last. None of them are repeated. The swordsman is all the protagonist. At that time, I was almost autistic. But it seems to have been blocked for some unknown reason.

Not bad, good, record it, the number of subscriptions has increased by 3,000 in the past few days Another 1,000 dropped [almost crying] Oh

The writing is okay, and it makes up for my regret in playing games.

Wow⊙∀⊙! Such a cute author... That's awesome, no, it should be "Work secretly, don't shoot!" [Laughing]

Remember to write and update a few more chapters tomorrow, it will make you happy More than 200 levels

Although the first few pictures looked quite confusing, it's okay now. It's over. I haven't seen enough yet.

I gave the author five stars, remember to give me a like

The plot is okay, but the first-person and third-person perspectives make it uncomfortable to watch it all the time.

Okay, keep going [sending heart][sending heart][sending heart][like]

Hahahahaha

Very good, right?

In a word Kiana

I like it, it looks good, ugh~`Why can't I find the Honkai Impact chat group?

Although I didn't understand the transition from volume to volume (I didn't even realize until the end of the book that the second volume was the first), I still said it was quite interesting (happy)