All Heavens: Make a Wish at the Beginning and Your Dreams Will Come True

Newcomer, new book, please support and give me guidance [Sending heartfelt wishes] Chapter 1 begins: Wushan Five Elements Chapter 14 Begins: Qin Shi Comprehensive Chapter 124 Begins: Purcell Chapter 167 Begins: Locke 205...: Dragon Clan 260……: bad person 277...: Traveling across the heavens at the same time The previous pacing is not very good, new readers can choose to watch it, or jump directly to Chapter 277 [Love]

After reading it, I feel that this book has a lot of cheats, but the intensity is not high, but it is not bad either. The plot writing is very interesting, the foreshadowing is very thoughtful, and the writing description is also very stable. It is not obvious that it is a novice author's usual shortcomings. The character's personality, communication and actions are also very well written, and it is very immersive. Judging from the writing style, it is very well written. The characters, environment, story links, and various changes caused by the mutual influence of the previous and later timelines are well grasped. I think this is a major advantage of this book. This kind of description is rarely found in other novels, and there are very few well-written ones. In terms of plot, it can be said to be a very interesting change in the world of fan fiction. The rewritten world plot is also very good. The story plot I arranged is really good. I don't rely too much on the original work. I follow the original work and borrow the world background, forces and situations to write my own story. To be honest, this is also very strong, which is also the advantage of this book. Setting issues, um... Relatively speaking, the settings of cheats are a bit complicated. The cheats in the article have more and more meanings... There is a certain limit for the protagonist in the article to use cheats. Too many cheats will dazzle the author. Moreover, the strength of cheats is not too high, although it is not weak. The frequency of use is very high, basically with cheats as the core. Ten Thousand Worlds is the main theme, and the plot of the main world is a little less. In this case, it is likely to become a bit confusing at the end of the writing. It is best to slowly combine two or two powerful golden fingers or combine them into one, and start to streamline them. It is best to streamline the abilities and other things a little. If there are too many, it will be difficult to write. Well, overall I am very satisfied with this book. There are very few shortcomings. It is already a very good and excellent book. It has great potential. Five stars.

I don't like it very much, but give it some encouragement. I felt that the protagonist was too frustrated, so I didn't watch much of it, but at the beginning of the game, the core supplies of the world were directly used as storage space, which is really outrageous! Later, I spent years practicing martial arts and did not develop gold fingers. Items that can change the celestial phenomena were picked up for free. When there were people present, no one from the state unit came to ask! Isn't this a bit too much? He died at the age of 20 and stayed for more than ten years. The life of a teenager was written in his 30s. Please tell him that this is Zhu Tianwen, not a hot-blooded juvenile novel.

Writing skills need to be improved It is recommended to write that there was a Spirit Sword Mountain in the past, and the force value in the Bear Haunted was also quite high, as well as Liuli. However, it is recommended to write later that there are immortals in this Liuli, but it can be weakened. I think there is also a short film of a few minutes that can also travel through time, the short film about Zhao Huaizhen and Yun Ying.

Very good, I hope the author will work hard and finish the novel [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] I still prefer the protagonist to be more professional and don't like the kind of 'stallion writing' (personal opinion)

It's great to see Zhu Tianwen, a must-read for old readers

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The author recommends you to go to The Adventures of Jackie Chan and get the Tiger Talisman. Also, if you go to Ultraman, go get the little red ball. These two things are very important. The tiger charm balances power, and the little red ball can enhance the ability to travel and make dreams come true.

This book is written to my liking. It's a pity that it's too little. This book is very well written to my taste, but it's a pity that it's too little. It's a bit short and not enough! ! ! ! ! ! ! Big cheers for the author! (̿▀̿ ̿Ĺ̯̿̿▀̿ ̿)̄The revenge for killing my father is nothing more than this

It's very interesting, the plot is very interesting [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] I hope the author can write more about the world

I've finished reading it, it's not enough

Although there are still some small flaws, it is already very good.

Big cheers for the author!

So far it's pretty good, but let me remind you in advance that the protagonist's character needs to be developed, so the character in the early stage will be a bit silly and sweet, so to speak.

How many chapters do you update a day? I'm very anxious, I want to read 100 chapters and 200 chapters. Was the author maliciously deducted? Why is it so low?

Very well written, cheers

Not bad, good work [like]

Not bad, pretty good

Very good, come on author, the number of pictures is a bit small

The author writes very well, keep up the good work!

It's so pretty and suits my taste.

It's a pretty good book with a good plot and great potential. Good luck to the author!

Can we go to the Xialan world in the next world?

Come on! Although my expectations for you are not as high as this person's, they can't be too different! @ Yu tai jie

It looks pretty good, but it's been too long in the world of Qin Shi Mingyue. There are almost 40 chapters.

It looks good. Come on. I personally hope this book has multiple female protagonists. Good looking! Write about dragons? If I write it, I hope to include Natsuya and Eri.

Come on, come on, come on

Not bad, very to my liking.

The writing is okay, keep up the good work.

Not bad, acceptable