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Everyone is welcome to leave paw prints🐾, we will reply when we see them No heroine, no heroine, the default heroine is Qinglian (x)

Come on [Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript], can the author add a Kirby beast in the future?[Eat melon][Eat melon]

I quite like it, although it feels a bit like crushing the opponent, it is not bad in daily life, and the memories are okay, but there is a sense of depression throughout the whole process, nothing good, memories gg, Gengar's previous life gg led others to gg, the protagonist of the Mewtwo experiment felt uncomfortable, and the forest needle wasp attacked indiscriminately at the beginning. The first gym Pokémon meeting. Problems with arcade Pokémon. Ranger hunter, the dark side of the competition. There was really nothing wonderful about the whole process. One wave of depression after another.

Let's have a Banguiras [laughing evilly]

I can't say against my will that it's not good-looking, it's just tiring. It's really too heavy. There are not a few pure good people in this book. Everyone is scheming and scheming. The characters that I liked in the animation are also made to be annoying. Everyone has their own concerns and selfishness. There are also the attributes of the Riddler, which are worrying to see.

It's so well written. I hope you'll keep updating. I'll keep up with the updates. Come on, come on💪🏻💪🏻

Author, the book you wrote is really beautiful. I also like the plot in it very much. The hooks are just right, unlike other Pokémon books that have really big hooks. The author, please continue to work hard and write this book better [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

Three evil dragons, Rod-tailed Kirin Family Dragon, Fire King, Fire Rabbit, Electric Monster, Metagross, Commander Cleaver, Armored Warrior, Fang Ya, Steel Armored Crow, Hu Di, Magic Wall Doll (ice plus super power), Black Ruga, Sticky Dragon (Gang plus dragon), Makoshita Rikishi, Laluras (male and female), Iron-armored Rhinoceros, Dragon King Scorpion, Charome, Lotte Kappa, Crossed Bat, Dragon-headed Gopher,

Can new leaf cats from the Patia region join the team? Titanium Crystallization feels very flashy. Mewtwo and Poseidon saved Shuidu and collected the two planes! One for each of Hemaodian

The style is unique. To be honest, it may not be suitable for online articles, but I feel like the author doesn't care about it very much? I read it halfway through scanning, so I didn't read the first few chapters, but later on I managed to read every chapter. It's pretty good. To put it simply, there is no common feeling of leveling up, killing monsters, and clearing dungeons. The focus is on the characters. However, the plot is not as emotional as the general Pokémon novels, which tend to focus on exaggerating the bonds, or focus on the fierce reversal of the battle. Maybe it is biased towards revealing the secrets? There is a smooth and precise sense of driving destiny, which can be regarded as an advantage, but it is inevitably a little uneven (of course it may be because I read too fast). Maybe some emotional guidance skills for timely events and scenes can be added appropriately? The infrequent triggering of small event branches and the skipping approach are an unexpected bonus for my preference. I hope the author will remember to fill in the holes he dug. Long-form ambush writing and rendering are relatively difficult to control. I look forward to the author's subsequent performance. If I like no cp, of course it doesn't affect my selfish desire to take a sip of Xiaolin Chaomeng cb Xiang (people are controlled by outsiders, right? (People are controlled by outsiders, right?

Five little stars to encourage the author, wait until 500,000 words are reached before reading ~ the current amount is too small [I'm about to cry]

Can you write a novel with two male protagonists? Please! [Love][Love][Love][Love]

It's wonderful. It's a very exquisite novel. The writing is also good. It reveals extraordinary things in the ordinary. However, the data is not very good. I suggest the author change the title of the book.

There are a lot of good Pokémon books, but this book is written on my heart (｡ò ∀ ó｡)

The author's writing is pretty good

I feel like this plot is great and the author will continue writing it.

Still a wonderful book

I hope the progress will be faster and the most important thing is that there won't be so many pitfalls. It's too slow and has no sense of immersion at all.

The author has quite some ideas, it's okay╮(￣▽￣)╭

I haven't rated it yet, when [shocked]

Very interesting, the content is very exciting, worth recommending

I wish I could have a Ninja frog

Author, author, who is the heroine?

This book by the author is very good, I also like Pokémon

A very good book

It's really beautiful. I recommend it.

Personally, I think this book is very good👌🏻,

Very beautiful, very exciting.

Good luck to the good-looking author

Can Moon Eevee learn to teleport?