A Honkai Journey Beginning in the Previous Civilization

What can I say?

Emm... As a fanfic, this book is actually okay in the early stage, but it is a little watery in the later stage. However, the author is still able to persevere in writing, which I admire very much. After all, he wrote this fanfic based on his own preferences. This alone is already amazing 👍👍👍 But there are still a few points I hope the author can pay attention to: It's quite normal if it doesn't update as expected, but I hope it won't be too messy or unfinished; Don't be afraid of poor writing. At present, the author's writing is actually good and there is a lot of room for improvement. For writing fan fiction, as long as the cause and effect relationship of things is clearly written, it is already considered a great success. After all, those who write fan fiction are not professional writers, and professional writers may not write fan fiction; For the original plot that is considered unimportant, it must be briefly described without omitting the past. What you want to write is a complete story, not a diary. At the very least, people who have not read the original work can roughly understand what happened in the middle; Can withstand the abuse and stick to the principles. The psychological quality must be good. No matter how you write, the work is your own, and you must insist on your own creation. Let those who criticize me go with the flow (just look at the comment section and say that the fan fiction only looks at the original characters and gives the protagonist too much role. When you click on his book reviews, they are basically all negative reviews. There are no five-star books, and the reasons are all weird. There is no need to say what kind of people are this kind of people. And for those who have given negative reviews and what they say is well-founded, I hope the author can listen to it); In the end, what you like is the most important thing. If you create or adapt stories and characters that you don't like, fan fiction will lose its vitality. Five stars are given (I hope you can persevere for your love and persevere for your dreams) [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

How come no one reads such a good book?

It's good, but the author, your opening is 80% similar to the Bengsan novel I wrote by hand in school, except that I wrote that the protagonist learned to make cakes. 🤔🤔🤔

It is the most rational and reasonable novel among Honkai fandoms that I have read so far. All the arrangements of the story are very reasonable. It is the kind of brainless type that I like. Anyway, I have not found any unreasonable place so far.

The book is beautiful and the author is also beautiful (I mean the avatar, shout after me: Love the door!!!)

It's pretty good, but it's not to my liking. I wanted to see Alicia's posts, but Hua is also pretty good. I'd like to give her five stars for encouragement.

If you give me candy, I'll give you the five stars you deserve. If it's a knife covered in candy, my brother Tomato also has 3 small numbers dddd[OK]

The author must work hard and don't kill Ai Li. Don't we just hope that when we read fan fiction, it won't be so tragic [I'm about to cry]

The writing is very delicate, the characters are well drawn, and the plot is very reasonable. There's nothing poisonous about it.