Be an Ordinary Person in the Cyberpunk World

₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑I don't quite understand the scoring mechanism of Tomato, but if you see the trouble, give me five stars. Thank you, all V Zhentians.

I've seen the latest chapter, please comment. The plot is pretty good among cyberpunk novels. Bonus points for the cp part. I personally don't like to dismantle the original cp. I just read the book so that people who want the original work can have a better ending. This book satisfies this aspect of me very well. I'm going to be David's dad directly (luck) Come on, author.

Just a question, is it Lily?

If I switch back to an Android phone, I can't tip the author. If one day this book is about to be scrapped and I can't continue writing it, remember to contact me. I will support you to finish writing this book [shy]

It's very comfortable to watch so far. The author's writing skills are indeed extraordinary. The plot is driven naturally and smoothly, and the foreshadowing and echo are also used perfectly. The author should have played 2077, and at least knows the background of 2077 very well. This current book is definitely the pinnacle of Tomato cyberpunk fandom, keep up the good work.

The author writes very well, but lacks traffic. You can try to promote your own book in related topics [laughter]

(Tap the button, and the seat turns to the front) Not bad. I have seen this beginning. The writing and rhythm are very good, but the setting of the original work may be a little lacking? I'm not sure about this, because I don't know much about it, but I remember from some of the settings I saw that Night City is supported by many companies. The lack of popularity may be due to the title of the book, which is a bit too simple and crude. I saw the title of the book a few times on the homepage and had no desire to click on it. But after reading a little bit, the writing is still okay, and the drama I didn't read the story carefully. I gave it five stars to support it. If you have a good idea, you must change the title of the book. At first glance, it's just pure elementary school student speech. I know the protagonist is very strong, but this wording is really uncomfortable for me personally. It's uncomfortable to embarrass others. I rarely see female protagonists in terms of reading volume in Fan Lai. Come on, this player, I'm optimistic about you.

You can summon other black shadow corps to expand your power. Each corps must have its own exclusive equipment. It is not safe to use the company. It can be developed in the wasteland. Night City takes its time. By the way, it also has its own satellites and bases. This can learn from the operation model of the Umbrella Company.

With an immortal soul, an immortal body, invulnerability, unlimited energy, unlimited stamina, and unlimited stamina, coupled with the countless immortal shadow ninjas who have knives to cleave bullets, knives to cleave stinger missiles, and instantaneous shadow movement. With such a protagonist, I thought he would bring down the world and burn the Night City to ashes. But in the end, he chose to join the corporate system and play with them within the system. Take missions, be a middleman, and be a mercenary. This is like Superman leading countless immortal subordinates. At the end of the Chongzhen period of the Ming Dynasty, he did not choose to rebel immediately and bring down the world, but chose to become an official in the imperial examination, and then slowly changed the Ming Dynasty and played politics with the officialdom. Hey, everyone has their own preferences, and I guess some people still like this.

The content is tense, the article is not bloated, and I give full marks to the plot. But the author should also pay attention to some grammar and sentence fragmentation. These are relatively impactful, and the writing style is okay. Personally, I think it is very readable, but it is a small drawback that you have to rely on your own understanding and segmentation of some sentences. I hope it can be optimized, but as long as the plot is not delayed or bloated, I give it full marks💯 We support you

I feel that the translated version of Edgewalker that the author has read is not very right and the names are very strange. It is obvious that Lucy Que has become Ruth and David Martinez has become Nizzi, but the plot is really interesting. Come on, come on, come on.

The plot is great. It is one of the few online articles nowadays that can have a lot of dialogue without making the article bloated and protracted. It is really comfortable. The author's writing is really strong. I hope it won't be unfinished [please update]

After reading a few chapters, I feel very good! And when I play games, I just want to be able to fly! I really like the Cybertronian psychosis after body transformation.

Cyberpunk, heroine, mechanical ascension, Lily Wen, all the elements are gathered, Wuhu takes off ~ let's chase! ! ! I'll give it five stars first, and I won't change it if it's okay after it's over [smiles]

I need to change the transaction currency to Euro. The US dollar is worthless.

It looked good, but I couldn't understand it. I touched my head and realized, oh, I've been here at Tomato for so long that I forgot to bring my brain. [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

After watching part of it, I blindly guessed that the protagonist traveled back in time as a child a hundred years ago. I started to stop eating beef by relying on my strength and remembering the key plot characters. He started to cause trouble everywhere and finally overturned and lost control, so I could only separate myself and rebirth through memory.

It feels good, very interesting

Boss, are you sure it's Ruth and not Lucy? [What]

It's very well written, thank you to the author.

Great author, come on!

Come on, author, when will it be updated? [Top post]

I'm curious, will this book make you happy or happy? [Eating Melon]

It's okay, but I feel like it's too good for David and his son, a little too good, and looks a bit like a mother taking care of her children.

I must give it five stars. The plot is exciting and the content is rich. Don't stop updating.

I think it's very good. Peregrine Falcon is a very interesting protagonist. I just hope it will be updated soon.

It's so pretty |･ω･｀) It feels like the water can flow more slowly, and it feels good to see the fat intestines dripping. ( ˃̶̤́ ꒳ ˂̶̤̀ ), Just make the line longer, because I personally may prefer to walk a certain distance and look back at the path I have taken.

Very exciting, good luck to the author

Good looking Really good-looking

It looks good, update soon [cry][cry][cry][cry]