Kiss Hinata at the Beginning, and Keep Getting the First Kiss

Highly recommended, wonderful driving, passionate comedy, Kakashi drifting Super exciting

Really. . . How should I put it, there are too many original works in the front, and then, the original characters may also be a bit broken. For example, Hinata didn't faint when being kissed, and Sasuke actually said something to Naruto after graduation (I can't remember, there should be this plot, but Sasuke would never pay attention to Naruto at that time, let alone speak actively, even if it was to ridicule) All in all, in short, it is a small change, but the change will make people feel a little uncomfortable. This discomfort is quite long. If it is just one or two chapters, forget it. Later I saw Konohamaru. . . I didn't really want to read it, so I read the comments. The latter part might be very good, but I still didn't want to read it anymore because I don't like to skip reading. How to put it, I would like to give the author a little personal opinion, that is, if possible, change it a little more. If it is not better or worse, it will make people feel a little uncomfortable. If you say it is the original work, it is not. If you say it is a fan, it will feel like reading the original work, which is uncomfortable╯╰

Come on, author, don't be a eunuch, and don't accept Sakura. It's very well written, good luck to the author.

How is this a novel? This is clearly a book [laughs evilly]

Author, your writing is very good. Come on, I want a harem story, please.

E Haili doesn't talk much and doesn't talk too much nonsense. Since the system asked me to evaluate it, let me evaluate it. First of all, we will definitely not talk nonsense, because talking nonsense is a waste of life. Let others see you and waste other people's lives. So we can't talk nonsense. Well, now let us evaluate this book. This is the book he wrote... Well, it's very good.

The harem is full of singles🐶

Author, author, your writing is quite good, but most of it is taken from the original work. The famous person is obviously a time traveler, but he makes it look like he is meeting for the first time. Obviously, he does not look like a time traveler. I hope you will change it later.

This book by TM has subverted my understanding of Naruto, but it is quite interesting.

The writing is not very good, but the creativity is very good.

I hope the author Hinata Sakura will want it

Come on, author, keep coding. By the way, there is a contract to read to me: I, the author, code for free. I have to spend 22 hours of the 24 hours a day coding, and the remaining one hour is spent sleeping and one hour to do other things.

Just go with the phrase "Let Sakura scream non-stop" [eating melon]

It's not bad. Although the protagonist looks like the kind of person who has a weak heart and a snake swallows an elephant, it's still okay.

It's so exciting to watch. I hope to start a harem. Sakura's personality has changed and she can definitely take it in.

Super magic modification, but I like it The author has actually traveled through time. The following sentences are roughly the same, but the words are a little different.

Author don't let me down It must be ten stars,

Give five stars first Farewell to the harem and the harem, the two stars

This is so cool. This book is so cool. Although there is a bit of a weird plot happening, this is what we like to read, hehehe. I hope the author can describe more of that scene

She's so damn good-looking, it's great to see her mother!

Thank you to the author, it's very beautiful [laughter]

The author knows a lot about driving, five stars.

Come on, the author is great

Author... I advise you to be kind

The rogue author asked me to give him five stars. Oops, that was wrong (the author definitely wouldn't care anyway [laughs evilly])

Wonderful comments, likes from the author

Can you please write a more normal novel and stop making mistakes all the time? Are you a single heroine or a harem? Don't mess with relationships. Don't wait for your first kiss, your first kiss. I don't want the protagonist to be a scumbag.

Author, just be happy

I am the legendary Holmes

Come on💪Sakura should also accept it [laughing and crying]