Beneath the Night Ink

Overall good. It's just that the author's writing style is a bit clumsy, the language needs to be condensed, there are some incorrect use of punctuation marks and idioms (which is a bit confusing), there is a slight flaw in the martial arts scene, and the most important thing is that the language is too modern, which does not fit the outline of this novel as an ancient novel. However, fortunately, the author quoted a large number of ancient Chinese prose, poems and songs in the novel, which gives the novel as a whole a poetic charm and beautiful connotation. Finally, I sincerely request the author to write more novels of this type in the future (Master and Apprentice Year 1)🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻

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Come on, come on, come on, come on!

Not bad, good looking

The author's writing style is superb. I was amazed by the author's writing style of poetry [Like][Admiration]

The writing is super good, you definitely won't be disappointed after reading it [Eating Melon]