The Sea Shatters the Heavenly Pass

That summer, the cicadas chirped on the sycamore trees, calling for midsummer. The evening breeze outside the window blew around us. At the end of the sixth century, the end of our boyhood. We met in summer, and summer never ended.

The author's writing is pretty good 😄 I'll be a long-time fan once it becomes popular [laughs crookedly] The character portrayal still needs to be improved, I look forward to the author's updates, keep it up 🤔

Very well written, worthy of being a wild dragon

This is my first time writing a novel. I hope readers who read this don't mind. I will use my most precious time to try my best to write this novel well.

The first part is a bit boring, I hope it will get better and better in the future, come on author.

After reading a few chapters, I feel like the author is a newbie, but I feel like it has potential.