
Naruto: My Sharingan Won't Listen
火影:我的写轮眼不听话
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 557k Words
- Genre
- Unknown
- Subgenre
- Unknown
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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I’m begging you!
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I have to say that I am too lazy to comment. The author will update it soon and try to eliminate unnecessary things like eating and going to the toilet and use them for writing books and publishing articles.
You have only published so much, you must have saved a lot of manuscripts, right? Hurry up and publish them all, don't be disrespectful, don't force me to beg you [staring][staring][staring][staring][staring][staring]
Come on! I wish I had a harem! ! ! No one else is the author and you are so short! ! ! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]
Very interesting book
The writing is good. The chat group follows the route of all the worlds. I hope to accept the Empress. I have read so many novels, and my favorite is the ruthless Empress [face covering]
The interesting Naruto fan work of Bankai Chat Group seems to have a lot of foreshadowing, obviously. The description of the writing is very interesting, and the description of the protagonist is very meaningful. Although the tolerance and layout of the protagonist in the early stage are simple to say, it is not easy to conceive and describe the feeling. The subsequent personality change of the protagonist when he is semi-invincible is also quite interesting. The vaguely described protagonist is actually ruthless, but his personality is also very good. The writing in the book can be said to be very good. In terms of plot, well, the protagonist has such an outrageous leap in development, and has upgraded his power system to the point where he starts to face the strong men of the six levels and even Otsutsuki and a lot of classes. The plot there feels a little faster. Although it looks very exciting, the plot advances a bit too fast. The appearance of the Otsutsuki clan and the sudden appearance of the Abyss clan feel a little far-fetched, but it feels okay and reasonable. The various plots in other worlds feel very simple and can be solved. It is considered a daily plot. In terms of settings, I feel that there are many foreshadowings about various settings. The identity of the protagonist and the identity of the group leader are not simple settings. There are still many settings that have not been developed and revealed, so I am still looking forward to it. Well, the early stages of this book may seem a bit cumbersome, but the plot develops too fast after becoming Hokage... The protagonist's strength has improved dramatically, and his combat power is exaggerated and invincible. It seems to be very refreshing. Overall, it is very enjoyable. There are not many loopholes, and it can even be said that there are none if you don't look into it carefully. It can be seen at a glance
A person normally sleeps 8 hours a day. If you need to conceive, count it as 4 hours for you to conceive, count as 2 hours for eating, and count as 2 hours for daily life. There are still 8 hours of pure coding. If you count 40 words in one minute, that is 2,400 words in one hour. This is a chapter, 8 or 8 hours. I only posted two chapters in one day, and the remaining six chapters are [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]
A super exciting novel, overall very good, and the content is also very exciting. Well, there is one thing I want to say. If we insist on the law of time and space, it should be above the law of force. After all, it is a fusion of the law of time and the law of space. In the Three Thousand Avenues, time is the emperor and space is the king. There is no avenue of time and space at all. Even if there is, it is a fusion. I hope the author can change it. Other aspects are quite good. After all, I am also looking forward to this novel. , I hope the protagonist can suppress the heavens, I hope the protagonist will come to the ancient world to suppress the way of heaven soon, after all, it should be soon, after all, the protagonist's skills are also at the Hongmeng level, I also hope the author will update more, come on.
It's really interesting. It would be better to add some love scenes between the group leader and Zhinan later. It can be a bit more bloody, such as the girlfriend in the previous life, or it can be the kind of agreement when they were young that they would marry each other when they grow up.
My best friend of 10 years was betrayed, my vicious mother-in-law made things difficult for me, and my boyfriend My friend allowed my mistress to humiliate me in every possible way, and I was forced to go abroad for further study. Made, the author has updated Chapter 10 to hear my revenge plan!