I Have a Bond with the Long River of Time

The relationship between Ye Chengxuan and Yun Jiu Sheng was too abrupt, especially the part where they recognized Captain Ye, it was too cliche and poisonous. The only short ones left are the two or three that are updated every day and can be read in one minute.

A very good book, very suitable for me, but updates are a bit slow

It's very beautiful. I hope I can write it down. Come on.

I have been reading the novel for ten years and this is the first time I write a review. The logical details and ideas are amazing. How to say it? I can only say that it's a good thing I didn't give up. I didn't always like the heroine mentioned in the introduction, so I thought she had changed her. Especially in the Qingqiu section where my girlfriend surnamed Yun almost gave up, I kept reading. The entangled logical relationships of the author's various timelines were completely connected in the later part of the book. Many books are good at the beginning and then collapse later. I really didn't expect that I could read it, and the writing in the middle and later stages is indeed wonderful. Especially when I saw that the game was at 94% progress, it was said to be the ending. The ending of Perfect World was very abrupt, but luckily there was an extra chapter, and the extra chapter is the real ending. When I was watching it, I did wonder if the timeline where the protagonist was located would also be a branch line. I didn't expect the author to actually write it like this, and also treat the ending of the main line as a side story, which is indeed wonderful. Looking forward to the follow-up book

I was already in a deep book shortage when I saw this book. I originally planned to read it with the attitude of giving it a try. But just watching it made me addicted to it 1. I like the type of male protagonist who has a high IQ and is decisive in killing. However, the male protagonist also has his faults. 2. The female protagonist initially took advantage of the male protagonist, but then gradually fell in love with him. And I only like the male protagonist, and there is a yandere that everyone likes [laughing] 3. The writing is solid and the plot has ups and downs. Logically, I haven't found any problems so far. I think this is a book with great potential.

The bad points of this book mainly lie in the emotional line and the author's writing style. Many people may not like the emotional lines written by the author, but I think it is okay. This book is actually the model of God of Wealth, but what is very different from God of Wealth is the female protagonist. The God of Wealth went too smoothly. It might have been a fun novel to read in the early stage, and there was no female protagonist. The emotional portrayal basically relied on those few gods, which were too few. In fact, it can be read as a semi-refreshing book. This book is far from good, but it makes you feel like you are growing your brain after reading it, but there is actually nothing very deep in it. There are more characters and richer emotions. That's why I read him

This book is still very good. I feel that the most successful character in this book is Kong Yurou (the heroine), and this is the first time I have read the subject of time travel. I feel that the writing is pretty good. In the book, Yurou calls Ye Chengxuan (the protagonist) Xiao Yuan and how she loves her to the extreme and the protagonist gains the ability to travel through the timeline. You can refer to the previous book (there is a certain connection, but it does not affect the reading). There is also a description of the emotional line, a preliminary The tsundere and the yandere girlfriend (Kong Yurou) in the later stage are really plus points. As for the description of the emotional line in the middle stage, some people may not like it, but I think it is okay, very real and realistic. Some of the things we did emotionally may feel okay at the time, but you will find it ridiculous later. There is a saying that is good, those in authority are obsessed, and those who are watching are clear. In short, the emotional content is very rich, which is also the process of the protagonist's continuous growth. The ending is a bit hasty. The author concludes with the happy life of the male and female protagonists in the perfect world. After all, who doesn't want a happy ending (this ending can be regarded as a branch line, the real ending is the extra story, after all, there are still some pitfalls to be filled). The big twist in the extra plot and the heroine's calculation are simply too strong, which fully reflects the heroine's wisdom and lays the groundwork for the next book. This book is also very logical and worth reading, but the ending is still too hasty. However, the portrayal of the heroine is quite good. I like the heroine in it very much.

Very good, many are stuck in the cloud, so I won't read it. If there is no cloud part, or modify it. It's very beautiful and the plot is very interesting. For this book, it can be said that if I had not read it, I would probably read it for a day and see the end. Then go see something else. His ending

It's really awesome. If this book doesn't go astray and keeps updating, it will definitely become a god in the future. The main thing is to recommend the platform. But I have one thing to say. The previous writing was a bit delayed. It took me an afternoon to read it. It was very exciting.

It's good-looking, even a little brain-burning, and the details are not correct. Yun's death was too hasty, he couldn't kill others just for the sake of a single heroine. Anyway, I saw the updates along the way. It's rare to read so many books without abandoning them. I still want to follow them. Come on, author!

The pace in the early stage cannot be said to be slow, it is quite satisfactory, but the excitement does appear slowly, and the small climax is relatively dull, but this time-traveling setting is really novel, plus a girlfriend who is tsundere in the early stage and yandere in the later stage is really a bonus. It is rare to like a yandere girlfriend, and the only problem is the most stomachache in the middle stage. The love line, I have to say, although that part of the love line is very painful, it is really good. Overall, it is still very good. The timeline continues to reverse in the later period, the male protagonist's character continues to grow, and the handling of various foreshadowings is also very good, but the writing style needs to be improved (this five-star is for Kong Yurou, I really like the female protagonist written by the author)

Please, can you please give me more? I've been saving for two months, and it's gone after just 2 hours of reading [laughing awkwardly] I think the writing is very good, but the emotional line is a bit uncomfortable to handle. Yun makes people sympathize with him, but I can't sympathize with him. He was really over-cooked in the early stage. With the addition of Qingqiu Kyuubi's bond, it seems to affect the pure feelings of the male and female protagonists. Although there is no pure emotion in the world [laughs awkwardly] and later on, I sacrifice my soul for the male protagonist. Although I know that there is the influence of the Kyuubi bond, it is still unacceptable. It's so annoying, why do you want to add Yun as a female wiring ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Although it is not added, many plots are indeed gone [face covering] This transition is indeed quite good. I hope that after this branch line is over, Yun Neng will send it. Don't come and affect the relationship between my heroine and the hero [cry][cry][cry][cry]. Come on, the writing is already very good. It's really dead, I'm just going to talk about it [crying][crying][crying][crying]

In terms of subject matter, this is the second best time travel book I have ever read, better than God of Wealth. In terms of subject matter, the evaluation of this book in my opinion is higher than that of the so-called Tomato Gods books (I really can't stand those books). It's not finished yet. If the author dares to criticize me, I will change the review.

A good book of the new genre, I would like to call it the originator. This is the only book that I am addicted to and have always wanted to read. This book is sure to be popular, and I might become a passer-by if there is a chance.

Come on, look forward to the next chapter, 2 chapters a day is not too much, maybe 3 chapters if possible [laughing evilly] I want to see the regretful expression of the man named Yun when he sees the male protagonist Captain Ye Yingwu, and I want the male protagonist to have a good girlfriend. I want to say, this is [what], hum, you caught my attention [smirk], if you want to keep me, why don't you update it quickly [shy] Come on

I really can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 169. All the women are beautiful, hugging one another and having ambiguities. If you like this kind of thing, you can watch it. The plot is quite good, but I like the kind of single-mindedness. If you like it, just like it. If you don't like it, just reject it.

It's finished... It's a bit unfinished. It's rare to see a book that makes me wait until the end. The logic is really strong, the details are in place, and the emotional line is okay. This is the story of Kong Yurou and Ye Chengxuan, but not the story of Song Shiwen and Ye Dongyuan. There is still a way of heaven. Come on, author! ! I went to support the new book [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][like][like][like][like][adoration][adoration][love][love]

There may be a lot of bugs and dissuasion, but I think the development direction of the plot is good, especially the details of each timeline. However, the relationship aspect is really uncomfortable. No matter how you torture me, you can do it, but you can't use dramas like ex-boyfriends to get in the mood, and this whole thing comes out. There is also the sentence "You boys can't swallow it yourself and you want us girls to swallow it." Although I sometimes read at a glance or jump a lot, I was vaguely impressed when I saw this sentence. The comments seemed to have funny faces. I don't know if this is a joke or if she is driving for a living. It looks a bit disgusting. The feeling of first love in the front was too strong. I originally hoped to give her a reasonable explanation, but when I saw the disgusting feeling in the back, I hope I understood it wrong. From the moment the man appeared until long after Qingqiu died, he felt very complicated. I don't know if the author has any new books, but when I read the comments, it seems that there is a group? It is expected that a new book will be published, and I hope it will be a single heroine or a harem, and there will be no third party in the relationship with the protagonist.

To be honest, apart from being too short and not enough to read, this book is overall a very good book. I am looking forward to the author's future works, but I have to find another book to read recently. [Cover face][cover face][cover face]

It doesn't poke or prod, but the plot is linked to each other, although the plot of Ye Heyun's story earlier was rather abrupt, and even seemed a bit absurd at the time. But the flaws do not hide the good points, the emotions are not that rich, and there are more reversals. Generally speaking, no poking [blowing kisses]

Good-looking is good-looking and faster! ! ! At first I thought the part where Yun appeared was unnecessary, but now that I saw it later I thought it could have been written, but that part was a bit confusing, but it was okay to reverse it and then reverse it and plot it again.

Overall, it's pretty good. In a place like Tomato, where short-form articles are popular, to be honest, this score is low. There's nothing wrong with it, around nine points. It's still pretty good. The main reason is that the plot is pretty good, and then it's a finished article. It's so comfortable. I'm going to give it a thumbs up [laughs]

It's very exciting, there are no contradictions, no drama, this book is many times better than the popular Zhan Shen, Zhan Shen is only famous for its lines, but the setting and some plots are inconsistent. Looking at the drama, I look forward to the next book that will be more exciting.

Awesome! ! ! So awesome! ! ! I have been reading novels for so long, and this is the second masterpiece that shocked me so much! ! ! As for the shortcomings, it may be that the plot between the male protagonist and the woman named Yun is a bit bloody. But other than that, this novel is simply unbeatable! ! !

It's been a long time since I finished reading it in one go, and I realized that I haven't reviewed it yet. How should I put it, it's one of the few books that left a deep impression on me after reading it, and I remember the general content from the beginning to the end! Very innovative and exciting!

This book is very good, with more than 20 fate lines, echoing back and forth, giving it a brain-burning feeling. This is the first time I have written a book review for a book of this quality. Logically speaking, a book of this quality should not be read so little.

From my personal point of view, this book's writing style is wonderful and its plot is cleverly conceived. It is another good book that I couldn't put down after Killing the Gods and Dali. The rating is low. Come on, author, I hope you can write a more engaging plot.

A good novel, without sauce, it can be said one link after another. There are also many pitfalls, because to get the result through time travel, you have to reason after it. The author's writing ability is also acceptable, and I am very optimistic about the author.

Personally, I feel that although there are some shortcomings in the description in some aspects, I didn't feel anything. I watched it for three days and finished it in one go. It is indeed good [eat melon]. Although it is a bit toxic in some places, it does not hinder my viewing. I hope the author will continue to work hard [sending heartfelt wishes]

Overall, the book is pretty good, with a slight flaw at the end. I have been a bookworm for ten years. Among the books I have read, it is already well written. Although some places are indeed a bit awkward, the flaws are not hidden. I give the author a big thumbs up. I hope the author will write better and better in the future! Become a master of writing books soon [laughing][laughing][laughing]