Fantasy: I Have Maxed Out All the Skills of Cultivating Immortals

Come and sit on the sofa yourself! ! !

Not bad, just a bit lacking.

It's okay, just a little bit less

Okay, it's quite good-looking, but I hope there won't be too many male-female relationships and either there will be only one female protagonist, or there will be no female protagonist who will focus on making money [shy]

The writing is okay and I can read it, but I can't keep up with the updates, so I can only save the book. As long as there is no supervision, basically updating to 800,000 words will attract people to read.

Man, he's a bit handsome

The book is good, keep writing

Next, I will create more ideas, then expand and write [I learned]

It's finally updated. I've been waiting for it for a long time. I really like the part about winemaking techniques. I kept waiting and waiting. I thought it was going to stop updating.

It's pretty good-looking, but some things pop up out of nowhere, like a little detail is missing. This little flaw is nothing to look at.

Well written, please put your knees down

Personally I feel pretty good

If you can cultivate immortality freely and freely, it would be great if you have family ties and CP. Otherwise, why should you live forever and cultivate immortality?

After reading two chapters, I feel that the cheating is a bit too big. I hope I can control it later and not collapse [awkward laughter]

Not bad, it has a bit of a traditional cultivation flavor...

This old bookworm like me can read it, at least it has a plot. . Although the details are fuzzy, the overall picture is OK.