[One Piece + Secondary School + Female Protagonist + Growth]
Traveling to the world of One Piece, I debuted in Alabasta and was very excited. I met Luffy and was invited on the ship. I had a unique fruit and was determined to change some regrets.
Reader comments
I don't quite understand it. Did you, the author, translate it from an external website? After you finish the translation, can you first see if you can understand it yourself? What are these? Now it's "Zoro" and now it's "Zorro", it's so chaotic. Also, can you unify the place names and move names? I'm so impressed! I have never seen such a fanfic that takes so much brain-work, I can't understand it at all! There are also various time travels, including Robin's mother and you from "Frozen". Author, you miss women and go crazy! If it weren't for the plot behind it, I wouldn't have watched it. But I finally finished it and the writing was so bad! I'm convinced!
The writing is very messy, like sentences translated by a computer
The subject matter is very good, but the main character is written like a fool, and the writing is too messy and takes a lot of brain work.
Author, if you want to continue writing offline, please first understand the names of the characters and places. I was confused at first.
What are you writing about?
I can't tell what the name is, it's too confusing
Simple essays written by primary school students
A bit shell-shocked
It hurts my brain to watch it. My brain is not good to begin with. After watching this, my brain is getting worse and worse.
Come on
What the hell? It's getting more and more messy from behind
I don't quite understand it. Did you, the author, translate it from an external website? After you finish the translation, can you first see if you can understand it yourself? What are these? Now it's "Zoro" and now it's "Zorro", it's so chaotic. Also, can you unify the place names and move names? I'm so impressed! I have never seen such a fanfic that takes so much brain-work, I can't understand it at all! There are also various time travels, including Robin's mother and you from "Frozen". Author, you miss women and go crazy! If it weren't for the plot behind it, I wouldn't have watched it. But I finally finished it and the writing was so bad! I'm convinced!
The writing is very messy, like sentences translated by a computer
The subject matter is very good, but the main character is written like a fool, and the writing is too messy and takes a lot of brain work.
Author, if you want to continue writing offline, please first understand the names of the characters and places. I was confused at first.
What are you writing about?
I can't tell what the name is, it's too confusing
Simple essays written by primary school students
A bit shell-shocked
It hurts my brain to watch it. My brain is not good to begin with. After watching this, my brain is getting worse and worse.
Come on
What the hell? It's getting more and more messy from behind