Become a Slave: Bought by a Rich Lolita

The background of the story is described quite well, and the emotional details of the male protagonist and Loli are also described very delicately. I gave four stars because I think the relationship between the male protagonist and Elaine was handled well in the early stage. I felt that she helped the male protagonist so much, but the male protagonist just sold his body [thinking]. Even if it was because of her liking, it seemed that the male protagonist was a bit aggrieved, just shy and avoidant. He also didn't face his feelings with Elaine head-on. (Of course, it may be that I haven't seen enough of it) In short, it's still very good. Finally, I hope the author will add a label for single or multiple female protagonists, which will be more intuitive [love] [love] [love] No, I really can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 260. Elaine fought against the Queen of Pearl to resist the pressure for you. You bitch kept saying no for a long time but refused to fight. After a while, the loli came and started to reminisce about the past and admit her mistakes. No, bro, this is a battlefield. People are fighting there for you, and you are having sex there. Isn't it because Elaine can't remember how good she is to you? The first name was saved by others, the slave contract was solved by others, and the information about Yanxing was also provided by others. Even if you like a man, you have to help her during the fight. Keli's bomb is not used, and the rack she got cannot be opened. Just kiss me and me with that loli, so regardless of the occasion, big brother [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh] To be honest, I am not a female copper, but if I change the gender of Lu Daiyu, the score will be higher...

First of all, I want to support the author. The new book is quite interesting, warm, innocent and beautiful (I hope the author won't give too many blows, otherwise it will become a plague and become depressing and not healed🐶) In the early stage, the protagonist has just started, and it is normal to have no burning point. Just keep updating, and it will get better. Oh, by the way, this book is a harem novel and there won't be many female protagonists. (What Fei Miao said🐶)

Very beautiful and attractive, good luck to the author

I support it, it's very interesting, the plot is smooth and it shows the witch's yandere seriousness in a relatively detailed way [sneaky laugh] [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile]

Great book! It really hit my mark, I really can't stand loli + different world + harem [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]. I hope the author can combine work and rest and update more!

I originally thought it was the kind of novel that was all porn and no plot. I didn't expect the world view to be so big. Added elements of h but now there is no H. The plot and pace are both good, neither too slow nor too slow. The writing style can also be very descriptive. I hope the author can grasp the outline and rhythm and go slowly, if possible.

Compared to the pairing of the male and female protagonists in this work, I prefer Jedalu and Lilika in Seal of Grazesta. The male protagonist is also a slave in the beginning. Although Jedalu is a mercenary, he is more masculine than the male protagonist in this game. Regarding the persona of the male protagonist, a cheerful big boy who is a top student, there is a feeling of girliness that lingers between the lines after time travel, and his various performances are far different from that of a top school boy (maybe it's because Yanxing's sunny top student is different from Blue Star's) (or maybe it's the various blushes that give me the illusion of a tomboy). I have read about a hundred chapters, and aside from complaining about the male protagonist, the plot is pretty good, and I hope it will be followed by a harem route [laughing evilly]. The score is still high

Great, come on, Baozi, this is my first comment since I rated it, and I give it to you (´∀｀)♡

Compared with those embarrassing articles, this book is very good.

The content and plot of the book are very good, but it's a pity that the author has just started, and I haven't felt so serious about reading a novel for a long time. [Working on the manuscript] [Eating melon], author, please do it [please update] [note] [laughing]

Advantages: The personality and the fullness of the characters are very good Is hair candy still a Shura field and the emotional coherence is very complete? The writing style and setting are the icing on the cake. The acting is a little bit worse Disadvantages: 1. A good part of the plot in the middle is very boring (war chapter) It's uninteresting, but the war theme is still novel. Maybe it's because I can't watch such a heavy theme. 2. There are still quite a lot of pits. I don't know if they will be filled in. If not, it will be greatly compromised. 3The update is too slow! The continuity is not good with updates every 7 to 8 days. But I still look forward to giving it 4 stars in the future (no update) The update is too slow [angry][angry][angry][angry][angry]

Personally, I think it's pretty, but it's just not enough.

Yes, except for the early setting and plot, this book is a bit naughty, but as it develops, it becomes more and more attractive. For brothers who like swords and magic, this book is very popular! This book is basically a semi-invincible text, but the settings in it that I feel are a bit confusing are the following two points: 1. The random intrusion of Yanxing may be the author's intention to increase the mystery of the protagonist and pave the way for the follow-up. However, if the balance is not grasped well, I think it will be a poisonous point. Based on the few existing pictures, it can be judged that this setting is attractive. I hope you can think about it carefully. 2. Emotional issues. Loli's character is not allowed to open a harem. There may be an opportunity later (the breakthrough point should be Elaine) to open the harem setting. If you don't open a harem, it shouldn't be possible. From the current point of view, the word "harem" is engraved between the lines! I think the author's emotions written in big letters are pretty good. Especially at the moment, Betty's image is so deeply rooted in people's hearts. It's so pitiful to watch. I hope the author will arrange the following well! (Do not spray) Finally, I hope it will be updated soon, I'm looking forward to it!

I have read the latest chapter. I really recommend this book. Chapter 2.3 May be a little bit toxic, but the writing gradually gets better and better. There is so much worth mentioning about the growth of the protagonist, the emotional line with the heroine, the main plot, the foreshadowing about faith and becoming a god, etc.

To be honest, I quite like this type of book. I love the lightness of it. The character and behavior of the protagonist of the little goblin are understandable, but readers who are not used to it may find it terrible. The author's great plot preparation and subsequent explanations are very good, and the character design is also very consistent (after all, fairies, beautiful skin is quite normal) and the plot is good, and it is also good to use your brain. And Lolita, as expected, I still have no resistance to white hair and red eyes (little fairy, please give me some strength and show your manly courage. ^It feels quite comfortable to be stepped on even when hot^). What's more, even the words inside are touching. Hey, this is my first time to write such a long review, it may be a bit bad, I hope you can forgive me. Finally, come on, the author, I am very optimistic about you, just follow your heart and create. (Whispering bb: If you want to fall into the trap, you should see if you like the category. The one that suits you is the best) [smile] [smile] [like]

The female version of a domineering president wearing a Western fantasy novel appeared inexplicably on my homepage, which only reads male videos. The female plain pattern of the male apple coat is not too poisonous after reading it now, because it does not ask you too much logic. In terms of settings, I found a few small mistakes, but they are not harmful. I have been reading fantasy novels since I started reading novels. I have already been polished by the various poisonous points of fantasy novels. A little mistake in the setting can be passed with my eyes closed.

It's obviously very good-looking, why is the rating so low? [What][What][What] However, don't worry, author, there are still many people supporting you, so don't stop updating or abandon the book⊙∀⊙! [Learned][Learned][Learned] The plot writing skills still need to be refined. Author, you dare to grow a little. Why haven't you changed in 6 years?

This book has won my heart. I hope the author can include all the female characters that should be included. After all, there are more dramas. There are not many novels of this quality in Tomato. Don't deny this book just because of the description at the beginning. Please read this book more and then be honest. I would like to ask the author here whether this is a harem novel? Make sure, after all, it is a Western fantasy novel from another world. This book has many advantages, and the description is also very good. The emotional description between the characters in the middle period is also very delicate. I hope the author can increase the intensity of updating. Brother, please give me one more chapter. I can't stand it anymore. Please give me one more chapter. I feel so irritable. I feel like there are ants crawling all over my body. I feel like my whole body is shaking and I can't breathe. Please, brother, please give me one more chapter. Just one chapter will do. Please, really, just give me one more chapter. I swear I will never touch this thing again. I can't bear the pain. Please, brother!

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, I feel that the contradiction in this contract will still need to be written in the future, but the handling method should be gentler. At the same time, the expansion of this contradiction is also a writing point. The writing is really good, author, come on ^ω^[Thinking]

This work is not bad. The male protagonist still needs some time to become a good person. So please don't say that his character is a bit weak. He needs some time, doesn't he? Great author, come on✊! Strive for the works to always be of good quality.

This book is very well written, and I could have read it along with the updates, but after chapter 50, I felt it was a bit distorted from my personal point of view. The following remarks only represent my personal views on this book: I feel that the writing of the protagonist is a bit awkward. He is writing about a time traveler and an adult with the same mind as an elementary school student. Maybe I will write about the reasons later, but I just found it very awkward. It doesn't feel like a modern adult traveling back in time, but more like an elementary school student or junior high school student. And the feeling of awkwardness becomes more serious as we get to the latest chapter. Then there is the problem of the unequal status between the heroine and the protagonist. This problem has existed since the novel, and is probably the theme of this novel. I have nothing to say about this, but the following chapters insist on aggravating the opposition of this issue, and the writing made me feel like tearing open a scabbed wound and waiting for it to scab again before tearing it open. Especially after 50, it makes me very uncomfortable. Maybe this book is not suitable for me. The writing is indeed good, so I will complain. I hope the author writes better and better, and I give you five stars.

I really feel that this book is a pity. I think the interaction between the protagonist and the heroine and the protagonist's growth process are well written and very comfortable. It's refreshing but not mindless: sweet but not the natural sweetness of industrial saccharin, but it seems to have been discontinued. [Cry]

This is the first time I have seen this. There are so many novels that I can't get enough of even if I add them to my bookshelf. As a result, I now read all kinds of novels, but there are really not many that I can read. It took me a short time to read them all. It's good to watch, but it must not be bad. I will keep watching [Love]

Very nice, five-star rating. It is rare to find such high-quality writing. It's just that the protagonist might be a little weak in the early stage, Galori might be a little overbearing, might be a little uncomfortable, and there are also contract issues and so on. But I feel like the problem is not big and it will get better soon. The settings are also good, but there are still some holes in the back. I just don't know why there are so few people following it and it's not very popular. It's a bit of a pity.

The writing is really good, and it suits my taste, but I may be a little sensitive to family relationships, and I was a little uncomfortable with the two pictures about my sister. To put it simply, I don't like this setting very much, and it's a bit uncomfortable to watch. I'm really sorry, but the author's writing is really good, come on

The whole book is biased toward daily writing, with both sweets and knives, and a two-way combination. It is just right. Even if it is classified as a daily writing, it is outstanding. There are no big mistakes or flaws, and the writing is very good. However, the article after the protagonist leaves Loli is a little boring, which makes the overall feeling drop a lot. It may be written in the first hundred chapters. It's great (?) I can read the first part carefully, but I seem to be very irritated at the end (?) I feel that the quality of this book may drop a lot in the future... But overall it's still very good (from the time I saw Lu Ni, I suspected that the author was a novelist, until I saw "Bengbeng" I really couldn't hold it in anymore [thinking] [thinking] [thinking])

Ahem, listen to me, this book is well written, the plot is touching, the content is ups and downs, the ending is unexpected, the content is resonant, and the meaning is thought-provoking. It is one of the rare good books I have encountered in the past ten years. The only regret is that I have not read a word [laughing]

The writing style can be described as good among Tomatoes. The delicate descriptions are a bit uncomfortable. I hope that the characters will not be shaped by just appearance, but the events of the heroine will be shaped more. This heroine is very important. After reading these chapters, I feel that the heroine is firmly tied to the main plot. It's just that the development of the plot makes me very afraid of overturning. It's a common problem in online novels, but it's okay. But if the plot overturns, it may collapse straight away, so the author must be steady and create more backgrounds. I'll give it 5 points for the time being. Depending on the follow-up situation, I think the score should be around 9.4. This score is indeed low. It's a novel that can be expected.

(I've read more than 100 chapters, so I'll comment first) Summary: Multiple heroines, slightly toxic, lolicon recommended [Like] Okay, I admit it's not slightly toxic. To this day there are still toxic residues

Oops, it's pretty good. There are so many love scenes between the male protagonist and the lolita. It would be nice if there was only one female protagonist. I have to be a bit slow to update this. It took more than ten days to update a chapter. I work slowly and do my best. I'll save it and watch it again. Now I see where the male protagonist got the first blood and just left.