
Tender and Spoiled Only for You
只对你亲昵偏宠
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 160k Words
- Genre
- Modern Romance
- Subgenre
- Youth Sweet Romance
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
80Chapters
92.8kReads · all time
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Reader comments 3
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It feels like this is an expanded part of the outline, which can be told more smoothly. It may be too short, and it is very boring to read in the middle. I also feel that the writing is not rigorous, and the feeling of being revealed at the end is not very good. The advancement of the emotional line between men and women is also a bit strange. I feel like I want to write a cool article, but I don't know what kind of emotion I want to express. Is it to remember the past meritorious figures, respect research, or marry first and love later. The tone of voice is very bland, and it feels like an objective description, just average. You can revise and revise it, make progress, and it will become a good novel.
Anticlimactic.
It's quite pretty!