[Flash marriage + academic master + love and marriage + patriotism + identity exposure]
No one knows that Jiang Youbai has never had any illusions about love or marriage, so she chose to have a flash marriage with her blind date.
Fu Jiyun brought hope, but at the same time brought her to despair.
She lost her family, her dreams, her dignity... And struggled to support herself.
Until one day, the man came to her again like a god.
"Only I can bully you!"
He helps her start a new career and exposes all the dusty secrets and identities.
She became a well-known scientist goddess, and suddenly looking back, fortunately, he was always there.
"They said I was just a stand-in~"
"No, that's another story..."
Reader comments
It feels like this is an expanded part of the outline, which can be told more smoothly. It may be too short, and it is very boring to read in the middle. I also feel that the writing is not rigorous, and the feeling of being revealed at the end is not very good. The advancement of the emotional line between men and women is also a bit strange. I feel like I want to write a cool article, but I don't know what kind of emotion I want to express. Is it to remember the past meritorious figures, respect research, or marry first and love later. The tone of voice is very bland, and it feels like an objective description, just average.
You can revise and revise it, make progress, and it will become a good novel.
It feels like this is an expanded part of the outline, which can be told more smoothly. It may be too short, and it is very boring to read in the middle. I also feel that the writing is not rigorous, and the feeling of being revealed at the end is not very good. The advancement of the emotional line between men and women is also a bit strange. I feel like I want to write a cool article, but I don't know what kind of emotion I want to express. Is it to remember the past meritorious figures, respect research, or marry first and love later. The tone of voice is very bland, and it feels like an objective description, just average. You can revise and revise it, make progress, and it will become a good novel.
Anticlimactic.
It's quite pretty!