Normal version: This is the story of an ordinary two-dimensional lover who was reborn as Hokage, slowly became stronger, and climbed to the top.
Second Edition: The rebirth of the Hokage Hyuga clan, breaking the bloodline myth of Senju and Uchiha, I, Yun Yu Hyuga, will eventually prove that the bloodline of the Hyuga clan is the strongest in the ninja world!
Reader comments
First person sounds weird
There are some minor issues that have been pointed out by the commentaries, so I won't say more. The biggest problem at the moment is the Eight Gate Dunjia. Duan Ping is hiding a serious illness, so he can't say much about it. He can only say this.
Eight-door Dunjia is the last hope for desperate people, and it is a sorcery. The article also says that no matter how strong your body is, it will damage your body if you use it. The human body's resilience has its limits, and repeated damage will lead to cancer. Even if there is no cancer, the lifespan of cells must be too damaged, and lifespan will be shortened.
It can be said that 9.9 Out of 10 people who write about this evil will have various problems. It's not just for the sake of the number of words. If you don't use it, there will be no good results if you use it. It's just that the method used is illogical and the problem can be seen at a glance. No matter which one it is, lowering the evaluation is inevitable. Unless you can only practice this like Metkai, it will be a lose-lose result for both the author and the readers. If the evaluation of the work decreases, readers will be lost, and readers will also suffer losses when they see the quality decrease.
If you don't have that diamond, don't take the porcelain job. It's not nice to say, but it's very practical. Some things are better not to be written. If you write them, you will lose both ways. It's not like there is nothing else to write, so why bother?
Ever since I saw Eight Gates Dunjia, I have been watching it. Since then, it has been a repetitive mission process. The strength has not increased, the plot has not advanced, and it has become dispensable content. If I don't change, I can only say goodbye.
It feels weird to read in the first person, and there is always a feeling of unhappiness.
The first person is so weird.
I can't stand the first person view.
The writing is good. The author describes the protagonist's time travel and rebirth well. Furthermore, the practice system is a bit too incomplete now. Why are there 12 earthly branches? We should add the Ten Heavenly Stems, Five Elements, Yin and Yang Bagua, so that the protagonist's theory of the cultivation system will be complete, and then slowly explore the Chinese Taoist practice to get closer to the cultivation of immortals. It's like the chakra in Naruto is practicing with one's own life and health, which is like turning on the light in the toilet. I'm looking for death. I hope the author will consider not cultivating chakra (like the Yin Yang, Five Elements, Bagua, Heavenly Stems and Earthly Branches of Chinese Taoism). The upper limit for cultivating immortals is high.
I like the description of realm in this book. This is a classic realm description. Why hasn't anyone used it recently? There are four levels of becoming a god, many classics, go through them and become a god, become a Buddha and become a saint.
First person?
Flat, want to sleep
It's a flowing story, it doesn't have any highlights, and it also has a weird first person point of view.
First person sounds weird
There are some minor issues that have been pointed out by the commentaries, so I won't say more. The biggest problem at the moment is the Eight Gate Dunjia. Duan Ping is hiding a serious illness, so he can't say much about it. He can only say this. Eight-door Dunjia is the last hope for desperate people, and it is a sorcery. The article also says that no matter how strong your body is, it will damage your body if you use it. The human body's resilience has its limits, and repeated damage will lead to cancer. Even if there is no cancer, the lifespan of cells must be too damaged, and lifespan will be shortened. It can be said that 9.9 Out of 10 people who write about this evil will have various problems. It's not just for the sake of the number of words. If you don't use it, there will be no good results if you use it. It's just that the method used is illogical and the problem can be seen at a glance. No matter which one it is, lowering the evaluation is inevitable. Unless you can only practice this like Metkai, it will be a lose-lose result for both the author and the readers. If the evaluation of the work decreases, readers will be lost, and readers will also suffer losses when they see the quality decrease. If you don't have that diamond, don't take the porcelain job. It's not nice to say, but it's very practical. Some things are better not to be written. If you write them, you will lose both ways. It's not like there is nothing else to write, so why bother? Ever since I saw Eight Gates Dunjia, I have been watching it. Since then, it has been a repetitive mission process. The strength has not increased, the plot has not advanced, and it has become dispensable content. If I don't change, I can only say goodbye.
It feels weird to read in the first person, and there is always a feeling of unhappiness.
The first person is so weird.
I can't stand the first person view.
The writing is good. The author describes the protagonist's time travel and rebirth well. Furthermore, the practice system is a bit too incomplete now. Why are there 12 earthly branches? We should add the Ten Heavenly Stems, Five Elements, Yin and Yang Bagua, so that the protagonist's theory of the cultivation system will be complete, and then slowly explore the Chinese Taoist practice to get closer to the cultivation of immortals. It's like the chakra in Naruto is practicing with one's own life and health, which is like turning on the light in the toilet. I'm looking for death. I hope the author will consider not cultivating chakra (like the Yin Yang, Five Elements, Bagua, Heavenly Stems and Earthly Branches of Chinese Taoism). The upper limit for cultivating immortals is high.
I like the description of realm in this book. This is a classic realm description. Why hasn't anyone used it recently? There are four levels of becoming a god, many classics, go through them and become a god, become a Buddha and become a saint.
First person?
Flat, want to sleep
It's a flowing story, it doesn't have any highlights, and it also has a weird first person point of view.