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Snape: You are the only one called Voldemort! Avada eats a big melon!

It looks good, and the heroine is very cute hahaha. Although it follows the original plot, the protagonist gives people a completely different feeling. It is rare for someone to follow the style of the original work. The characters that appear so far are quite consistent with the personality. I hope the author will update more, six thousand is still not enough [eating melon]

Give yourself a score [face covering]

There is potential! The plot is becoming stable and the characters are brought into nature. So far, there are no poisonous spots that can be eaten with confidence. The character backgrounds are quite in line with the standards I have in mind. It should become popular if you write it down. It will become popular if other book friends push it. After all, it can retain readers' interest in reading. I still hope that more people will avoid raising books.

So far, it's not bad. The heroine's past seems not to be simple, but the combination of Eastern and Western magic feels a bit weird. It's like a character named Wang Ergou suddenly appears among a bunch of English characters. It feels weird. [Thinking] (Personal feeling, if you don't like it, don't complain! A dog's head saves his life) [Sneaky smile]

This is a pretty good book

It's good to read. The setting of this book is in line with my taste. Mainly I like the character of Harry Potter (there are only three hp fanfics that I can read in Tomato. The one I like the most has been removed from the shelves. I am the author, please come on, otherwise I will really be short of books [face covering]) [Shy] After reading dozens of them, I feel that the plot is not dramatic enough. I look forward to the plot in the following article [punch out] [blow kiss]

The author is really diligent! I have never seen anyone so diligent in my life!!!

Author, we will always support you [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Love it, love it [sending my heart] [sending my heart] It's written in big letters, it's great, come on!

I really like this book. There are very few HP fanfics that can touch my heart. I hope the author can update this book when he is willing and able, and don't force himself.

Very nice! ! ! I hope the author will update it soon! ! ! Wow! ! ! Super beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡The author please update quickly~

It's not bad, but I feel that the front part is not much different from the original work. I'm looking forward to the plot behind it.

Very nice [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss] Come on, big brother

@The writing is so beautiful

Really good! Very nice!

The writing is very good, but who is the male protagonist? Is it Zhang Jingze or Draco?

It's great. I really like this article. I hope the author doesn't kill Cedric and Sirius. Please😭

Come on, author, your writing is pretty good. Although the rating may be low now, as long as more people see it later, the ratings will rise. I like this book very much, and I love the author so much (⑉°з°)-♡

It looks good. You won't lose money if you invest in it [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

[Admiration] Looks good, I don't know why the rating is so low

Can I have more? Very nice! I absolutely love it! Come on.

It's really beautiful! Come on!

Beautiful, a good book

It's really beautiful. I hope the author will persevere and continue writing [please update]

, Wide to wide to wide to

This is really one of the few HPs that can catch my eye.

No other reason, it looks good, it just looks good

The writing is pretty good, no problems