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I want to be the first to review it, it's so beautiful

It has the flavor of Dragon Clan, but I definitely can't say it's copied from Dragon Clan. It's not inferior to any of Tomatoes' novels. The male protagonist's outlook and personality are to my taste, but I hope he won't be overly enthusiastic (not yet). Finally, I hope the author will work hard and I will catch up to the ending [Punch Out]

Let's add some daily life. The plot is too tight and makes me tired. It would be better if it is more relaxed and relaxed [laughing][laughing][laughing]

I think this book is a good one. After all, the author is a novice, so we can't be too demanding. It looks okay from the beginning, but I can understand some people saying it is naive and awkward, but who is young and has no dreams, and who doesn't want to be a hero. Overall, it has the taste of Jiangnan. I hope it won't be too harsh. (This is one of my few comments. The author looks at me.)

The quality is very high, and the character creation is definitely better than most of Tomato's books. I just don't know why there are so few people. I won't talk about the advantages. Let me talk about the problems I personally found. There are two dual-line narratives in the front. The alternation is a bit too fast, and the senses are a bit unsatisfactory. In addition, some descriptions are a bit abstract, and it is difficult to understand if they are not word for word. Keep up the good work, author!

To be honest, it is a very good book, with good foreshadowing and a very promising world view. The author's writing style is interesting, and you can see many advantages of other books in this book. There is also something in the narrative style. I feel that the author is very, very good at writing double lines. Believe me, this book has a future. However, so far, the existence of the protagonist seems to have been deliberately downplayed, and it feels like he has only used the spine (the sword) once after obtaining it. This is the biggest poisonous point.

The book is very exciting, but this is Tomato, so we still have to write more about daily life. There are too many plot and battle settings that are very tiring to read. On the contrary, every time I see the daily interaction between the male and female protagonists, I feel very relaxed and comfortable, and it is easy to get addicted to it. And do the male and female protagonists have to go through a lot of hardships before they can be together? Appropriate obstacles can enhance the relationship between the male and female protagonists and attract people, but too much sadness and slowness will seem very deliberate, and readers will not like to read it. Secondly, I believe that many people who come to Tomato to read books want to read some novels that are lighthearted, interesting and not so cliché, rather than the fact that the male protagonist is so frustrated that he can hardly do a few things. When we watched "Dragon", we were still young and passionate, but now so many ups and downs are making people tired. Finally, can we not let there be so many obstacles between the male and female protagonists, just be appropriate.

It's a very good book, with a lot of references. It contains a lot of my past youth, including many mysterious and sequence elements, etc... It has a plot very similar to Dragon Clan, and very similar characters. I have to say that the plot of this book has a different feel. Although I don't want to follow the old path of Dragon Clan, because that book It contains a lot of regrets. This one does not need to be the same. It should have its own world and emotions. Its protagonist does not need to be as cowardly and incompetent as the Dragon Clan. I hope Qin Shangyuan can really choose the girl who is really good to him. I hope that the battlefield of "Devil" is about reunion, victory and redemption; rather than regret, failure and loneliness. Although a boy becomes a king, this road should probably be accompanied by friends. A good drama program relies on all the actors, not on the growth of one person. The other participants are on the road of continuous falling. That is not a good story. To put it bluntly, the battlefield is difficult, but when it is reached to the extreme, it is really... Well... Good stories do not exist to write about swords.

If you are a Level 5 writer at the starting point, you should be able to serialize online articles like this, in the field of Western fantasy. A qualified online article. Originally I was attracted by its setting. Although it still is. The author has forgotten many pitfalls, such as the series of collection systems represented by Sword in the Rain, which he did not mention much later. Very internet, why? The pace of the story is tight and even fast for the purpose of narration. All objects exist for the plot and embody the story, not the world. The writing style is no longer the immature one it was at the beginning, but it is just the writing style needed for online writing. In Jiang Nan's articles, battles are indeed omitted, but he describes the characters and emotions very delicately, and there are always worthwhile scenes to describe. Of course, his serialization method is different. He serializes it in magazines. The author comes close, but falls short on his merits. I am an old bookworm for more than ten years, mainly in the field of Western fantasy. In this regard, the previously popular "Apocalypse Forecast" succeeded in its sense of grandeur. "Secret" is a system. I don't know what the author's style is. I hope the author can find his own direction in the text, just like the previous book "Apocalypse" is indeed inferior, but the style is there.

The characterization is delicate, the psychological description of the characters is very well controlled, and many characters with different personalities are truly created. I think the setting is very similar to the world view of Chainsaw Man. Secondly, the main theme is the inescapable fate of each character. I don't know how it will be dealt with in the future. However, personally, what attracts me the most is the relationship between Qin Shangyuan and Su Bai. Qin always feels that Su Bai is so good to him, but there is no evidence that the other party likes him. The relationship between the two has always been quite tacit and ambiguous. When I read that Su Bai threw away the photo album by the lake, my heart felt like it was pinched by a big hand. After more than ten years of companionship, they were separated by someone's understatement. That This kind of pain and powerlessness makes me suffocated, but according to Xia Shou's respect for young people's wishes, I still look forward to the follow-up development. The author relies on the scene of uttering truth after drinking to express the feelings of Su Bai, Qin Shangyuan and Xia Qianrou very well. Generally speaking, I like the author's emotional line very much. Whether Jiang Yang and Lin Lan or Xia Pu and Vera, beautiful love always makes people yearn for it. No one wants to leave regrets in life.

The author feels that he has a lot of hobbies that overlap with mine. It's quite enjoyable to watch. [Note] What do you say about the plot? There are some strange things? I don't know how to say it, but I can see that the author's writing style is growing, so keep up the good work [laughs]

It's obviously very good-looking. No one in life will always be so brave and righteous, but the protagonist does it. He may not be capable, but people always need to grow. Not everything you encounter is within the scope of your ability.

It's pretty good. I didn't feel any discomfort when I saw it. It's pretty good. Why is the rating so low?

It's a magical book, you can find many elements in it Including but not limited to: Dragon Clan (heaviest), Kamen Rider Amazons, jojo... It really feels like watching Dragons, but the protagonist is not just a loser, he is really growing up Although this growth is driven by fate

If the author works hard, I feel like this could be the next Dragon Clan! There is a world of demons hidden behind the real world, immortal demons, and people rely on the power gained from demons to fight against real demons. In the dragon world hidden behind reality, the dragon king is immortal, and hybrids gain power from their blood and fight against the dragons. It's so similar. They both incorporate mythological systems from China and the West. I hope the author will keep updating. It's so beautiful.

It's pretty good. I'd like to ask how many female protagonists there are. It would be better to add some daily scenes.

God among gods, the first time I watched Dragons was when I was in the second grade of junior high school. I watched it secretly in the self-study class and was fascinated by it, and the teacher confiscated it. Now that I am much freer, I don't want to open it at all. Firstly, the old thief has not updated it, and secondly, I suddenly don't dare or want to open it. I came across this book by chance recently, and suddenly I felt like I was back in the second grade of junior high school. I had so many words and so many tastes that I didn't know how to describe it.

I have just finished the second volume, which I estimate to be over a million words long. Like Dragon Clan, I didn't dare to read on until the end of the Japanese chapter. I learned from readers that our decent heroine Lao Bai has not won the resurrection match yet, and the author and teacher are currently busy with work and updates are not stable (maybe this is why such a beautiful book has not become popular yet?). From a book perspective, it is undoubtedly a good book. I don't know what it is about Putting the Starting Point, but Putting Tomatoes will definitely be a top-notch work. There are traces of the Dragon Clan in this book. It can be said that it is sewn, but the sewing is very good. You can even see a lot of small ingenuity in it, and a lot of Jiangnan flavor in the text. If you like the Dragon Clan, you must not miss this book. I will not continue reading, but give it a try. Currently, I have updated 3.2 Million words. I have read half of it in a few days. I will wait for the author and teacher to finish it.

The writing is excellent and has a youthful feeling. This book is not a substitute for other books. I think this is an excellent work with its own unique world framework. Cheers, author [blowing kiss]

I can only say God's will. I was watching Dragon Clan and saw the third part (I didn't watch the rest of it). I was thinking about Lu Mingfei and Nuonuo's feelings, and Sakura was melancholy and angry about Eriki's story. I felt why the author wrote it like this, and why the protagonist always couldn't love her. Until I read the end of the third section of the book, I felt that the author was just narrating the story. The characters in the book have their own souls. Even if the book is over, they will continue to live. Originally, I just regarded it as a meal replacement for the Dragon Clan, but since I saw Uncle Qiu using the throttle (I saved up to read it, and it is still very impressive to this day), I don't know why my heart beat so fast. The author has written every character very well, and everyone has their own golden spirit. At that time, I felt that I had witnessed the birth of a masterpiece. Of course, the author doesn't always make me feel this way. Every chapter is from the beginning to the end. Although I'm sorry to the author, I did skip some chapters. I think this is a good book on Tomato, and I will support the author when he releases a new book [OK]

Recommended to watch, the storyline is a bit like Dragons, if you like Dragons you can watch it. Maybe it's because I wrote less, but I feel like the storyline could be a bit more novel. For a new book, it's pretty good.

When I first read the first volume, I thought it was a salvation novel. The protagonist gained the power to fight against demons and even kill demons through his own "efforts". But suddenly it jumped to the chapter of the last world. It turned out that the protagonist was the lucky one who got "one", and he needed to become the supreme god to save the world. If you like this kind of novel, you can read it first.

This book is really good, but can the author update it more quickly? I can't wait any longer. I like books that feel like this. They have some brains, but don't need to be completely smart. The writing style is also very good. That is to say, the male protagonist is portrayed in a more protagonist-like manner, which makes the male protagonist feel a little aggrieved.

I like this book so much, but the plot since the second volume is too bland. The trick to making a book interesting is to make it "interesting". A linear narrative will only kill the reader's desire to read. It can be seen that the author is working hard to add settings and increase the depth of the work, but the plot can really be more ups and downs. The same plot, different expressions will give people different feelings. The author needs to work hard 💪💪 [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]

I have read more than a hundred chapters, and the author also said that there are some references, and after eliminating some problems, it is actually not that unbearable to watch. After all, not all the protagonists just get the system and directly hack and take off. Those who have experienced and grown up are also quite interesting.

Although it has always been said that it smells like a dragon, it still has its shortcomings and is very well written, both in terms of writing style and the conceptual advancement of the plot.

There is nothing to say about the writing style. The main reason is that the author spent a lot of time to perfect the image of the supporting characters, which led many people to think that the male protagonist is useless or slow to grow up. Personally, I don't mind this kind of paced writing, and the author's writing style can cover up this problem to a great extent. I just saw the Japanese chapter, and I still tend to keep reading the book and read it volume by volume. The author writes very well, come on [please update][please update]

I've been reading this for a long time. The world view is quite big and I may not be able to show it before it's finished. The main character is a growth type, so it's not too wide-open. There are a lot of knives in the article. The main thread is about mysterious things like fate. I guess it's not to my liking if I want to read a refreshing article that slaps people in the face. I feel like it's a good choice in 🍅, but it's a pity that it doesn't provide traffic.

This is a book that is very appealing to my appetite. I can only say that many people no longer like dragon-style books. Most people just want to read a story with a sense of comfort, but I still support the author. It is a very good book.

Very good. I think this book is very good. Each character is well created and there are no inexplicable character breakdowns. The content is very good and does not feel like a formula. It seems that the author is just writing a book, simply writing a book of his own. I hope the author can persevere and update slowly. As long as the book can be written in his own way and ends with his own ending, then it will be a very rare book.